Reviewer: majestic_ginny
Date: 12/14/08 11:10
Chapter: The Journey to the French Land
Hey, its really lovely! but..I think it was slightly rushed. There weren't many emotions. But overall, it was really nice! Good job!
Reviewer: Maximum Potter
Date: 06/17/08 23:26
Chapter: The Journey to the French Land
Ah! I loved it!
Reviewer: Hazil
Date: 07/11/07 8:32
Chapter: The Journey to the French Land
Loved it! I wish you would write more (of course you can't because it's one shot..) but still, i wish it anyway!
xx
Reviewer: moon_girl_175
Date: 06/07/07 18:04
Chapter: The Journey to the French Land
I think you should write a story oon this. i think it would be realy neat!!!
Author's Response: Um... I think I did.
Reviewer: BringPadfootBack
Date: 05/10/07 15:38
Chapter: The Journey to the French Land
Oh... How sweet!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. (I think...) *dashes off in confusion to finish research paper for tomorrow*
Reviewer: DogLover4Life
Date: 12/26/06 20:38
Chapter: The Journey to the French Land
Awww they wanted to protect her. Now Harry isn't alone anymore.
Author's Response: Indeed he isn't. :D
Reviewer: JC_Cainstone
Date: 08/29/06 14:53
Chapter: The Journey to the French Land
Aww, that was sweet. It was a little hurried and could've been longer or continued! On the whole, though, that was great!
Author's Response: Thanks very much. I'm glad you liked it and I'm sorry that you thought it was rushed. I think I wrote this a day or two before the challenge deadline. I have to stop procrastinating....
Author's Response: Where did those slashes come from? Hm...must've been sloppy typing....
Reviewer: potter_mad_4_eva
Date: 08/23/06 18:47
Chapter: The Journey to the French Land
its a great story. you should realy think of writing another bit to it!
Author's Response: I dunno, maybe I'll do some futuristic story for one of the new challenges and keep Elizabeth as one of the main characters. I'm not making any promises though.
Reviewer: KellanP
Date: 08/21/06 10:09
Chapter: The Journey to the French Land
I LOVED It!!!! Keep it up!
I wouldn't have picked France, but hey, it works!
Author's Response: I'm mostly French and I copied down a bunch of surnames off my grandmother's family tree (which goes back who knows how far) and 'Camirand' was one of them, so I figured it was safe to assume that that particular surname is French. Plus, I went looking through The DaVinci Code for a map of Paris since it showed streets and stuff. :)
Reviewer: Jasmine Potter
Date: 08/06/06 19:27
Chapter: The Journey to the French Land
Awww what a cute story, keep it up!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it.
Reviewer: Amanda_Potter
Date: 07/20/06 19:17
Chapter: The Journey to the French Land
nice
Author's Response: Thank you.
Reviewer: harrys_gal731
Date: 07/19/06 11:27
Chapter: The Journey to the French Land
oooooooo i love it!!!
update soon
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, but it was a one-shot.
Reviewer: snowy_owl_92
Date: 07/01/06 12:03
Chapter: The Journey to the French Land
interesting... very interesting.
Author's Response: Thanks, I hope you liked it. :)
Reviewer: Tinka Blinka
Date: 06/21/06 23:36
Chapter: The Journey to the French Land
eww, no, harry can't have a sister, no! EW! NO! it's just not done...cool idea, but no, no...no...NO! lots of spelling mistakes, check t over more,m theyt're really annoying
Author's Response: I'm sorry, but you were warned that it was AU. Sorry about the spelling, there was a deadline so I didn't think I'd have time to send it off to my beta and get it back. I'll lookk it over next chance I get.
Author's Response: I'm sorry, but you were warned that it was AU. Sorry about the spelling, there was a deadline so I didn't think I'd have time to send it off to my beta and get it back. I'll look it over next chance I get.
Reviewer: FeatherTrader
Date: 06/21/06 12:53
Chapter: The Journey to the French Land
I like the idea of James and Lily not wanting to raise Elizabeth after having an idea of what Harry would soon (or at least possibly) have to take on. However, my favourite part (besides from the ending that just makes you want to go 'aww') is the letter James wrote. I can see new parents writing something like that before they enter into a growing wizarding war where people are dieing left and right. Overall, great work!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm happy you liked it.
