Hmmm, Not quite sure what I think...Blame it on being a die hard James/Lily shipper! Interesting one shot idea though :-)
Wow. That was quite interesting.
I found your characterisation of Snape and Lily compelling. How they still loved eachother, but wanted to be able to move on.
A nice little one shot.
The last line: ooh.
Its is really beautiful....i dunno wat to say..thats wat u call true luv
awww... that was so sad. but sweet. great writing! and they seem in-character too, nice job =]
I'm a sucker for a good Lily/Severus pairing. Thanks.
I really like this story!!! It's nice to see a fan fic that gets right to it instead of having paragraphs of descripion. Nicely Done!!!
I really like this story!!! It's nice to see a fan fic that gets right to it instead of having paragraphs of descripion. Nicely Done!!!
this is kind of heatcliff ala caty. nice story, and felt sorry for them, but this was a good ending
this is kind of heatcliff ala caty. nice story, and felt sorry for them, but this was a good ending
i like it! are you going to write more? please write more!!! im also a HUGE fan of your other story, My Anchor. it rox sox! okay, bye now!
-->slytherin101
Author's Response: haha yeah I saw all your reviews! I'm glad you liked this one too! Thanks for reviewing!
I really like this story. I think its a good perspective on what might have really been going on at Hogwarts when they were all kids. I also think its great in the fact that she can't resist him. Great Story!!! Two thumbs UP!!!
Author's Response: two thumbs? both up? I'm glad you liked it that much! I know a lot of the hard core James/Lily shippers hate this story, but it's great to know that other people don't:) Thanks for the review!
I liked it!Great story Blue Bell!Really enjoyed it.Love to know what happens next!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing!
a wonderful story! the idea of lily and snape together is a little cliched, but i still love it! hey, i like cliches. it is so sad, and it shows snape in a totally new light. i hope we'll see more of your work soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, I'm glad you like it!
Great emotion, its really tangible. You've identified really well with Lily and her loyalty, its great to stick with the essence of a character as you've done, very refreshing! And good characterisation of Snape too. And finally, some decent grammar and spelling! Congratulations!
Author's Response: I'm glad you thought that! Thank you for reviewing!
Your use of dialogue to move the plot forward was great. However, knowing Severus from HBP, I find it hard to see that he would be so direct with his feelings. I would have liked to see a bit more of dancing around the topic, instead of the direct attack that Severus made here.
Great job!
Kumy
Author's Response: Thanks! This was a long time before HBP, though. But thanks again for reviewing!
Awww. Poor Sevy. I was surprised Lily had such a mean streak in this. It was a good story though. I was hooked from the very beginning. Bravo!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!
First review! lol...That was a pretty good oneshot and I can't wait to see your other work! Keep up the good job!
Author's Response: Yay! Points for being the first review! Thank you!
