Reviews For Moondance
Reviewer: Kelin
Date: 06/26/06 23:09
Chapter: Two Hearts Beat as One

Okay, a little too fluffy for me...(I'm more of the angst/unrequited love type). FYI, "breath" is a noun; "breathe" is a verb. "Breath into my mouth" would NOT make sense.
Poor Lupin, caught between friendship and love!

Author's Response: So you know, it's a little too fluffy for me too. I still am having fun, though. I'm trying to see how girly I can get!

Reviewer: aintcrazy4you
Date: 06/25/06 14:59
Chapter: Two Hearts Beat as One

So tottally wicked! I love it! I told you I would finish reviewing. Now how will everything go sour? Or like the last sentence, how will pollution spoil the oxygen? Now update soon because this is tottaly Bloody Wicked! Now look what you made me do. You're making use English slang now. Tsk, Tsk.

Author's Response: You've just made my heart sing! Chapters three and four should be popping out soon.

Reviewer: aintcrazy4you
Date: 06/25/06 14:47
Chapter: It Had to be You

Woah, very cute at the end! Now excuse me I'm going to read the other chapter before I review anymore.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Kelin
Date: 06/24/06 19:39
Chapter: It Had to be You

Um, not too sure that this is should be a humor fic...Plus I personally think this should be rated 3rd-5th years...
But, good start!

Author's Response: Thanks, it's not supposed to be a 'humor' per say but I wanted to put that as a romantic comedy, but my computer is being a bit stupid and only accepted the comedy part. Also, Thank you for letting me know about the rating, as I was a bit unsure. Peace, Love and Hair Grease, The Writer.

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