Reviewer: aintcrazy4you
Date: 06/19/06 23:13
Chapter: Return to Grimmauld Place

Yes it is getting a bit old but once she gets on something she never lets go. I'll happily give her the virtual sock. Though she will be sooo crush that it's not Sirius's.

Reviewer: aintcrazy4you
Date: 06/19/06 23:05
Chapter: Return to Grimmauld Place

I'm really sorry. NO REALLY! It was all my friends idea. She really does like your stories,but umm... I don't know. She went crazy on me. She wrote everything! Sorry, she is just a TAD bit weird. Well, I hope you accept my apologies. Oh by the way, my friend really likes Socks. If you can't already tell.

Author's Response: It's fine-really. Just getting...a bit old. Apologies accepted. She may have a virtual sock if she'd like, but not one of Sirius's.

Reviewer: Alexys_Nicole
Date: 06/19/06 1:45
Chapter: Return to Grimmauld Place

Otay. About the socks thing. I was just saying Edited by mod for questionable content. Keep it civilized and on-topic, folks. (Sorry. We got a BIT sidetracked. SO where was I:? I was; just saying. Didn't Sirius have ANY socks on at the Department of Mysteries. When he fell behind the veil? That's all.

Author's Response: Kay, seriously, guys? It's time to stop when it gets offensive. I don't care if you're calling yourself the c-word, but it's still offensive and crude and I would appreciate it if you stopped. Like, yesterday. I appreciate that you're reading and that you're enjoying but, I mean, really. Please?

Reviewer: Alexys_Nicole
Date: 06/19/06 1:09
Chapter: Return to Grimmauld Place

Is Ummmmmmm..... a good thing? Did aintcrazy4you get you mad? Because she is a little slow. (Her: You crack Whore) Don't mind her... But once i got on the socks thing i couldn't let it go...ummm.....It's Peanut-butter jelly time

Author's Response: Umm....I have no idea of what the last review (can I even call it a review?) was talking about umm?

Reviewer: Alexys_Nicole
Date: 06/19/06 0:56
Chapter: Return to Grimmauld Place

What is this Brokeback? Wait. Didn't he have socks on when he fell behind the veil? If not, did he have sandals on? If not, Was he just to lazy to put socks on under his shoes? If not, Was he just to lazy to wash them? Or did Remus like a little Mod note: debatable-quality content wash them and he threw them on the ground? And why the hell is the BED MESSY? Did they do something they shouldn't have? ~Lola. Now for my friend,aintcrazy4you,...Sorry! My friend is a pyromaniac and is demented in the head (Like the dementors.~Lola) My deepest apologies. I couldn't do anything since I'm at her house and it would be very rude of me to do anything. She had peanut butter and crack for dinner. J/K. .ME again... GUESS WHAT?!? It's Peanut butter-jelly time...

Author's Response: Um.....

Reviewer: padfootnflawks
Date: 06/18/06 15:35
Chapter: Return to Grimmauld Place

Wow that was really good i like how you wrote it, i cant really describe how you wrote it but it was good. I liked the was it really hits Remes that Sirus is actully gone :(. But any way i liked it alot!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I'm glad that it was enjoyed.

Reviewer: aintcrazy4you
Date: 06/18/06 14:34
Chapter: Return to Grimmauld Place

Holy mother F-bombing gosh! I could actually feel the emotions even though you didn't identify any. It was sooo beautifully written! Well, how many times have I told you that before? Now keep on writing 'cause I loves ya!

Author's Response:
Trust me, I couldn't stop anytime soon if I wanted to and since I dont' want to stop....

Thanks, as always, for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: occlumens
Date: 06/18/06 14:23
Chapter: Return to Grimmauld Place

Oh, this is so good, and so terribly sad. Poor Remus, to be the last one left--again. Wonderful job!

Author's Response: Yes, he is the poorest puppy, don't you think? There'll be something following that though through the Q shortly called 'The Bonds of Friendship' check it out and thanks for reading!

Reviewer: FanFicFanatic12
Date: 06/18/06 10:26
Chapter: Return to Grimmauld Place

I almost cried!!! I love both Remus and Sirius--they're such wonderful characters. Poor Remus.

I believe you fulfilled this challenge wonderfuly. I've never really thought about not using emotion words before. The way you wrote this story--they were absolutly not needed. You got your point across, possibly better then if you would have used those words. 11/10 :0)

Author's Response:
Thank you so much for saying so. Do you think I ought to try re-writing it using emotions, though?

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: just_the_contrary
Date: 06/18/06 10:24
Chapter: Return to Grimmauld Place

Wow, this is a very interesting concept. I read the author's note and was intrigued, so I read it and I was blown away by your writing and how you can really convey emotion without writing the names of the emotions. I think you did it really well; I can really see how Remus is feeling. I also think writing in present tense was a very good idea and adds to the feeling of the story. Amazing job! :)

Author's Response:
I'm glad I put it in the Author Notes, then.

I'm really glad that you 'got' the fic and that everything was conveyed as it was meant to be. Suprisingly, it wasn't that hard to convey the anguish and desperation without actually using those words. I was amazed at how easily this wrote itself...

Thanks for reading!

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