Reviews For Lily and James
Reviewer: heartachin4harry
Date: 07/07/06 12:47
Chapter: Chapter 2- Stuck With You Part 1

I can't wait to find out what happens next!!!!!

Author's Response: Don't worry, a lot of interesting things will be happening to Lily and James. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: AILily
Date: 07/07/06 0:06
Chapter: Chapter 1- Taking A Stroll

LOL. I love the 'domino effect'. Classic. This is really good

Author's Response: Thank you very much! Hope you like the next chapter!

Reviewer: BrighterThanSunshine
Date: 07/06/06 23:28
Chapter: Chapter 2- Stuck With You Part 1

OH MY GOSH! I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT...!!!! please update soon!!! like SOON! I LOVE THIS STORY!


Author's Response: I'll update soon, I'm more than alf finished the third chapter already so hopefully it won't be a long wait!!! Thank you for the review!! blue sapphire lady

Reviewer: HarryPotter is my LIFE
Date: 07/06/06 22:57
Chapter: Chapter 2- Stuck With You Part 1

A small pale and transparent ghost smiled evilly at the four students as though he had found a very nice surprise.
-That is false. Peeves is actually solid. In PoA, we see him trying to stick gum into the keyhole of a classroom door, and in OotP, he's unscrewing a chandelier. JKR says something about this on her site, and I don't think Peeves is transparent.

Lily turned to move but lightly hit the armor with her fake but yet diamond ring.
-How do you have a fake, but diamond ring?

Very funny. James must really be loving that closet. I cannot wait to see what happens!

Author's Response: Thanks for finding my mistake and showing it to me. I'll change it as soon as possible. About the diamond ring I made a stupid mistake on that. What I meant to say was that Lily was a ring. I don't know how I said fake and diamond ring. Sorry about that! (lol) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: HarryPotter is my LIFE
Date: 07/06/06 22:45
Chapter: Chapter 1- Taking A Stroll

Nice. This is a Lily and James story with a different rythum to it.

I don't think I've read one yet where all the shelves in the library get knocked over. Pretty funny.

Little (Really) Things-

The shelf knocked off the next shelf and the next and the next, until all the shelves had fallen down from the Restriction Section.
-This sentence, the use of the word 'off' made it a bit confusing for me. Maybe the word should have been over, or maybe it was supposed to be off and I just don't know it. But, it sounded funny to me.



'They are so going to get bet up, answered Jamie and the two girls ran towards the door, leaving the mess without a second glance.
-And here. The word 'bet' probably should have been 'beat' since I'm not really sure where the word bet would fit in.

Overall, very awesome!


Author's Response: Once again thank you for finding my mistakes! You're very good at it (lol). I'll change them as soon as I can. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: goobersam9
Date: 07/06/06 22:10
Chapter: Chapter 2- Stuck With You Part 1

Oh, Thank god you updated! I was so mad that you didn't I wanted to murder! It's just great! So unique!

Laura

Author's Response: Don't shoot me please!!! I'm sorry for the long delay. The second chapter got rejected so it took longer than usual. The third chapter is coming up! lol

Reviewer: iluvharryandron
Date: 06/19/06 21:13
Chapter: Chapter 1- Taking A Stroll

aww that was great... just how i expected it to be.. keep writing!!

Author's Response: aww, thank you very much! i'm definitely going to continue it and hopefully have the next chapter by next week. sorry cause i got exams!

Reviewer: goobersam9
Date: 06/19/06 20:53
Chapter: Chapter 1- Taking A Stroll

i love it! update soon or i'll be forced to hurt you!

Author's Response: (hands in the air) i'll update soon, i promise!

Reviewer: blackgem
Date: 06/19/06 20:13
Chapter: Chapter 1- Taking A Stroll

Oh please write more. I really wanna know what happens next. It was awesome. Please continue this.

Author's Response: don't worry, i think you'll like the next chapter if you liked the first one!

Reviewer: blackgem
Date: 06/19/06 20:13
Chapter: Chapter 1- Taking A Stroll

Oh please write more. I really wanna know what happens next. It was awesome. Please continue this.

Author's Response: thank you very much!

Reviewer: Quidditchgrl03
Date: 06/19/06 17:15
Chapter: Chapter 1- Taking A Stroll

oh yeah r u goin to write more??? do not leave me hangin???

Author's Response: i'm going to write more, don't worry! you guys got me all hyper now. lol

Reviewer: Quidditchgrl03
Date: 06/19/06 17:14
Chapter: Chapter 1- Taking A Stroll

i'm the first one to leave a review!!!! do i get a cookie???? lol!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: you'll get a BIG cookie. happy? thanks for the review.

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