Reviewer: sophie potter
Date: 06/18/06 14:49
Chapter: What's Going On?

this is hilarious!

Reviewer: Just Beyond the Veil
Date: 06/17/06 12:45
Chapter: What's Going On?

Good story! I like that idea; it's really different. ~JBV

Author's Response: Thank you, I like your stories, too

Reviewer: potter4220
Date: 06/17/06 9:31
Chapter: What's Going On?

Very, Very, Very, Very, Very Good stroy. I can't wait to find out what happens.


Author's Response: thanks!

Reviewer: KBot707
Date: 06/17/06 2:23
Chapter: What's Going On?

Kind of interesting, you do have a few holes in the plot. One if Harry knows about leviuscorpus that would mean the story takes place around or after the 6th book and therefore would have to travel a lot more than just 15 to 17 years to the past. If James and company were still in school it would be more like 20 to 25 years in the past. Other than that it seems pretty sweet.

Author's Response: Thank you, I hadn't noticed that.

Reviewer: Draco_is_hot
Date: 06/17/06 1:00
Chapter: What's Going On?

hey dis is verry good i luv it! i luved it! 8 & a 1/2 out of 10

Author's Response: thanks!

Reviewer: CrookshankstheCat
Date: 06/16/06 23:26
Chapter: What's Going On?

omg!! More!!! Update soon, this a cool story............

Author's Response: I plan to submit the second chapter soon.

Reviewer: ginevra w
Date: 06/16/06 21:22
Chapter: What's Going On?

That is a great first chapter!! I think, though, that you took a really long time on the fight that didn't mean much and a short time on the time travel itself which could have been a chapter be itself. Maybe you could do more backround on the charicters and why hermione and remus clash so much.
Ginevra Weasley

Author's Response: I thought they would clash like hermione and percy do. Both are so smart, they can't help but fight. There will be WAY more time-traveling in upcoming chapters, thanks for the review!

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