I liked this, great story! Your descriptions are very delicate and artistic, and the overall feel of the whole thing has a great mystical quality to it. Also, great analogy between the dragon and the girl's emotions. Keep up the good work!!! I hope to see more of your writing. :)
Author's Response: Another review? how did i miss it? I'm so very glad you liked it. (always nice to know) I loved your story My Hero. (sorry, i'm evil and i forgot to review. actually, i might not have had an account at that time) anyways, thanks for taking the time to review! Crazy Rat p.s. i'm working on a new story and trying to get it submitted :-)
Author's Response: oops! I meant His Hero, not my hero
Oooooooooo good one-shot! :D! Pretty short...but still good! Just curious...how did you get this up on this site.. o: Cause this isn't an HP Related fic at all :P But well yea XD Great fic though! It's in my favorites! Good job again! 10/10 :D
Author's Response: so glad you like it! i don't know why they let me post it. i guess it could be interpreted as HP. (although when i wrote it, i didn't intend for it to be) anyways, i won't question why they let me post it--i'm just glad they did. Thanks for the review! Crazy Rat
wow, it's really kind of true...that feeling of not being in control sometimes, especially when you feel angry. It was a really sweet story and I hope you write more. I like your style!
Keep it up : )
Author's Response: I get that feeling too. You like my style? COOL!!! I'll try to write more. (I sumbitted something else but it got rejected. Thanks for the review. p.s. I just caught a typo, it should be his black eyes, not his back eyes. oops
That was cool. Sweet, too. Who was the girl?
Author's Response: Yayay, so glad you liked it. this was just something I thought up while i was pretty lonely, and the girl is kinda based on me. (I'm still waiting for the guy though)