Reviewer: TheMadMugggle
Date: 01/28/07 22:54
Chapter: Chapter 1

What can I say. I liked it. Especially the part about the teachers discussing what caused the injury amongst themselves. I had never really thought about it before, but that is a real good obsevation.

Free Spanky!

Reviewer: HermyRox12
Date: 08/06/06 23:01
Chapter: Chapter 1

Sorry it took me so long to review this, but I did get to it. Anyway, I really enjoyed Hedwigs personality. I loved how you wrote from the window to the gargoyle; it had a nice flow to it. I couldn't find any obviouse errors with it. Great job!

Author's Response: Awesome! I'm glad my story doesn't have any real bad problems. Many thanks for the review!

Reviewer: FeatherTrader
Date: 06/20/06 21:48
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wonderful one-shot! I love how you gave Hedwig certain chararistics like her sarcasm and her being sassy. I really like how you started it off, with the vivid descriptions and such.

Personally, my favourite part was:
" “Not at all well,” Harry said moving me behind him as if I was a quaffle." Not only because of Harry's dialogue (On that note, I think you got his dialect perfectly) but because of the referal to Hedwig as a quaffle. Keep up the fantastic writing!

Author's Response: I am living on cloud nine with all my wonderful reviews! I was worried upon submitting this that people might get peeved at sassy!Hedwig but so far so good! I'm glad you like it and I'm glad I managed to get Harry spot on!

Reviewer: chrislupin025
Date: 06/20/06 16:29
Chapter: Chapter 1

Brilliant story, I love it!! I miss you soo much rgfawks! I hope to hear from you soon! I'll e-mail you with my new e-mail today! I love this story! 10/10.
Much love,

Author's Response: OMFG!!! I miss you too! *pulls Becca into death hug* I'm so glad you like my story!!! See this is why I will never make it into SPEW. I am too personal and crap on the reviews. I MUST WORK ON THAT! *cracks whip and makes self a hard and purely writing critiquing machine.*

Reviewer: whittyleah
Date: 06/19/06 19:13
Chapter: Chapter 1

Sorry I didn't get to read this earlier, I had to go out town for the day with my mum. I love it, still! Hedwig is how I imagined her, attitude! You did a great job! I can't wait to read more from you!

Author's Response: Thanks. I've always wished Jo would write alittle something from Hedwig's POV just so we could see what she is like. Thanks once again for beta-ing!

Reviewer: mcgonagallfan
Date: 06/19/06 9:41
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was really good. I loved the humour when Hedwig was trying to get Harry's attention at the window. 10 out of 10!

Author's Response: Oh thank you! You are my very first reviewer on this site so here's a cookie! I'm glad you enjoyed my take on Hedwig. From reading the books I always felt that she would be a rather spunky personality to know. Alot of the things she does hold lots of perosnality and meaning that we don't normally see from Harry's POV.

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