aww. i love your take on the last battle. i have one question: who did Ginny marry? i would just like to know. :)
fantastic story, it's sad and all but it's really very well done.
'before everything fell down' thats an awesome line. I really enjoyed reading this, but such a sad ending!
oh great, now I'm sitting here at work crying.......a lovely, lovely piece, thanks so much
Oh my gosh that made me cry... Very nice and very surprising. I like the way you put the part about how he never got to ride a bike. That's cool. Very well done. ~HStarRunner23
Aww i really loved this. Its so sad though. It was obscure yet descriptive. i really enjoyed it and the bittersweetness of it was enough to make me cry.