whoa...that`s some heavy duty grief. one thing i have to say is..HOW COULD YOU LET HIM KILL RON? U SUCK U IDIOT.
That so sad. I'm actually crying. It worse that she's not even dead, and then he had to kill Ron. I'm just glad it didn't really turn out that way. Is Ginny's daughter Harry's daughter?
This was a very touching story and it meant alot to me. You captured perfectly the horrors of war, whatever kind of war it may be. Terrific job
That was so sad poor harry. After reading this, my heart felt so heavy. Fantastic writing
It was good but I thought you could have written a little more because it looks like you could have explained that friend that Harry had to kill. But it's only my thoughts.
Gosh, that was amazing. it almost made me cry, and... wow. 10/10
that was really sad but very good. i love stories than are written in the form of a letter! 10/10
I think I'm gonna cry.
aw.. i just read it now.. cuz b4 i just saw postal service n got excited.. that's so sad... poor ron.. poor ginny.. awwww
yes! i love the postal service.. they're such an under-rated band.. i love em.. they're brilliant :D:D:D:D
...omg, thats so sad.... job well done, you made me cry.
that is good!! write another story
"Tell her... tell her the half-truths. It's better than the lies."
I love that line. How can you make everything that is so sad... beautiful in a way, I guess. I can just feel Harry feeling numb, and it makes me feel numb too because of how much we love Harry and want him to get a happy ending. Love it.
THat's so sad, but so good!!
utterly amazing. There's no other way to describe it. Just........WOW!
THIS STORY IS SO WELL WRITTEN, WRITE MORE OFTEN. IT IS SO TOUCHING, I CRIED I LOVED IT AND HATED THAT IT MAD ME CRY, I DON'T CRY, I'VE NEVER CRIED SINCE I WAS LIKE SEVEN. I LOVED IT, POOR HARRY.
THIS IS VERY SAD BUT VERY WELL WRITTEN. IT SHOULD HAVE BEEN LONGER I THINK.
Very powerful introductory paragraph--it sets the mood.
I also like how you didn't outwardly say anything, just revealed clues to piece together. Your one-shots are probably the best I have ever read. :0)
Poor Harry, though. It's so sad. I hope this never happens in JK's seventh!