nice poem I loved it. A part or two maded me laugh out loud. ;) nice job!
Author's Response: Yay! I made you laugh! That makes me happy!
hey could you give me poetry tips or sumthin? please. i love this
Author's Response: When ever I'm stuck on a rhyme I use an online rhyming dictionary (www.rhymer.com). It can come up with tons of rhymes for any word. Other than that, I can't think of any useful tips. I just write whatever pops into my head.
this is great, by the way, do you reply to reviews?
Author's Response: I always respond to my reviews. It's how I show my reviewers that I appreciate their taking time to read my poems.
I loved this poem. Very nicely written!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it!