Reviewer: I_solemnly_swear
Date: 07/16/07 13:39
Chapter: Chapter 11: Aftermath

Aw, just like Sirius to throw rotten pairs through a veil at the two people alive that he loves most! And I am Sirius, I mean serious, when I say that.

Author's Response: Exactly. Always the rascal, that Black.

Reviewer: I_solemnly_swear
Date: 07/16/07 13:21
Chapter: Chapter 10: Santa's Little Helper

Gasp! That was sort of unexpected.

Author's Response: There will be a lot of that as the story goes on.

Reviewer: I_solemnly_swear
Date: 07/16/07 12:26
Chapter: Chapter 9: Back To Business

Remus is such an awesome leader!

Author's Response: I think so, too. He just needed a chance to show his inner strength.

Reviewer: Lost_Wizard
Date: 07/16/07 12:02
Chapter: Chapter 32: Truth and Consequences

Yes that was rather intense at the end and I cannot wait to read the next chapter. You have spun a interesting web of conspiracy and intrigue. Even after I read The Deathly Hallows I want read more of your ideas of the HP universe. I have only ever given a score of 10/10 once and it was to a finished story but Tura's revelation at the end of this chapter makes a perfect 10 unless you either kill off Harry or screw up as bad as David Yutz ( Misspelling was intentional) with his recent chop job that he calls a movie version of OTP

Author's Response: *Sporfle* I can't guarantee I won't muff it up the way the Yutz did (although considering the mountain of material he had to scrunch into 2 hours, I think he did an OK job) but I guarantee Harry will survive. Much more intensity yet to come...

Reviewer: Sonja
Date: 07/15/07 20:17
Chapter: Chapter 32: Truth and Consequences

Although i am usually not a fan of non-canon based fics , yours is so well written it goes around that little hurdle.When can we expect the story to wrap up?

PS:Is there any hope for the heart of a poor H/G shipper?

Author's Response: Erm, sadly, not in this fic. Go back over the part in Ch. 31 where Elias and Ginny are getting to know one another.

Reviewer: Oharachic1
Date: 07/15/07 17:50
Chapter: Chapter 32: Truth and Consequences

Wow. WOW! This was an outstanding chapter!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, this is kinda the turning point, all the mysteries have been presented at this point, now they need the wrap-up.

Reviewer: hermylovesron
Date: 07/15/07 12:57
Chapter: Chapter 30: The Spirit of the Season

aaaaaawwwwwww!!!!!!!!that was soo sweet!!!

Author's Response: Harry's picked up a tip or two from Sirius, I think.

Reviewer: tickled_pink
Date: 07/15/07 5:23
Chapter: Chapter 28: The Pitch

Hee hee, her boggart's a tree ... that's classic ... !

And I didn't mean to rhyme ...

Great chapter!

Tickled Pink

Author's Response: True story, too--well, except for the boggart part.

Reviewer: Poppy
Date: 07/15/07 0:46
Chapter: Chapter 31: It Tolls For Thee

I am pissed at Harry, but love the twist of Riddle's Daughter didn;'t see it coming. The last few chapters, have seemed odd to me I thought Tura was REALLY OLD, and I am having to rebuild her in my mind. I also have a pretty confident guess about her angel. I am loving the speedy updates, THANK YOU

Author's Response: Hence the title, Heirs of Slytherin. No, Tura's only 10 years older than Harry, but she's seen a lot (mostly through other people's eyes).

Reviewer: bionicdonkey
Date: 07/14/07 22:25
Chapter: Chapter 31: It Tolls For Thee

And once again i'm hooked on one of your stories. Wonderful work, though i'm none too pleased of harry's actions at the end.

Author's Response: Yeah, Harry kinda lost control there.

Reviewer: Oharachic1
Date: 07/12/07 21:37
Chapter: Chapter 30: The Spirit of the Season

oh Harry is a romantic little devil, isn't he. Something tells me he is going to get his heart broken before this is all over. I can't wait to find out.

Author's Response: Yah, I think he might have picked up that slick move from Sirius. And something tells me you're spot on in your assessment... ;)

Reviewer: Oharachic1
Date: 07/11/07 21:07
Chapter: Chapter 29: The New World

I'm so glad Harry was wisked away to have a bit of fun and adventure. It should be interesting to read how everyone back at #12 will react to the trip. Another great chapter. Thank you.

Author's Response: Yah, I haven't decided if there will be much reaction or not...there's a lot of important stuff packed into this next chapter already, and yet another chastising from Lupin seems a bit much.

Reviewer: Poppy
Date: 07/10/07 15:11
Chapter: Chapter 29: The New World

I am so happy to see your update. Ondossi is my favorite character. Thank you for sharing with us.

Author's Response: Cool! Thanks!

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 07/10/07 9:46
Chapter: Chapter 29: The New World

Brilliant chapter. Love the courtship ritual, even if Harry and Tura choose not to. Strange pairing but works for me..

Author's Response: It is strange, and it's about to get darker in ch. 30.

Reviewer: DobbyElf
Date: 07/10/07 9:17
Chapter: Chapter 29: The New World

Interesting, though I am anxious to see how much tura and harrys relationship develops

Author's Response: With two intense people, things tend to happen fast...

Reviewer: DMTAT003
Date: 07/09/07 19:45
Chapter: Chapter 29: The New World

A very interesting chapter...please update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks. Right now I'm so mad-- someone over at fanfiction.net has posted 20 chapters of this story and claimed to be the author!! I might just stop posting it at this point, as I think they must have stolen it from right here at MNFF!

Reviewer: Nabbyadams
Date: 07/09/07 6:40
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Calm

I gotta say usually i'm not a fan of fan-fics but i think you may have created something to rival the real seventh book. I read the entire thing in one setting. Keep up the good work and please post again soon.

Author's Response: Thanks! 29 is almost ready.

Reviewer: bigbirdbanana
Date: 07/05/07 23:15
Chapter: Chapter 11: Aftermath

:D

Author's Response: *bows*

Reviewer: bigbirdbanana
Date: 07/04/07 20:47
Chapter: Chapter 6: The Phoenix Tale

WOW!! You are such an amazing author!! Although I love your version of the events in Deathly Hallows, I feel that you should be out there writing your own series!! I really hope that you do this as I would certainly read them. You have a vivid imagination and a flair for writing to match even Ms Rowlings. PLEASE let me know if you do have any books published ever by contacting me at: luvbarrie@hotmail.com
I truly thank you for this brilliant story!! Keep it up!!
bigbirdbanana:D

Author's Response: Thanks! I do have one book out--there's a bit of info on my Author Bio page about it. I'm glad you're enjoying the story!

Reviewer: bigbirdbanana
Date: 07/04/07 3:40
Chapter: Chapter 3: Flights of Fancy

this stories getting juicier by the chapter. Keep up the great work!!
bigbirdbanana:D

Author's Response: Thanks! Keep up the reading! :)

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