Reviewer: I_solemnly_swear
Date: 07/17/07 0:26
Chapter: Chapter 24: Ends and Beginnings

Finally, a chapter that didn't make me cry!

Author's Response: *snerk*

Reviewer: I_solemnly_swear
Date: 07/16/07 23:54
Chapter: Chapter 23: From the Ashes

I am too sappy! I was crying all throught this chapter again too! When he just spontaneously popped the question, I felt my heart rise! I am getting so caught up in this story! It is easily my favorite fanfiction ever!

Author's Response: Yay! That's great! I love Lupin too--he deserves some happiness. I'm glad you're so into it--that's cool!

Reviewer: I_solemnly_swear
Date: 07/16/07 23:13
Chapter: Chapter 22: Awakening

I cried through the whole chapter and everytime I read Sirius' name I burst into tears again. I'm so sappy but I just love Sirius! This is the most awesome thing that can possibly happen! I wish JKR would bring Sirius back. :(

Author's Response: It was a roller coaster to write that chapter too--I was just sick when Siri died in OOTP. More so than Dumbles, because he was so young and already had so much of his life stolen away in Azkaban. Glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: I_solemnly_swear
Date: 07/16/07 22:40
Chapter: Chapter 21: Basileio Oneiro

Ahhh! No way! Yay! I have tears of joy in my eyes! I love you!

Author's Response: LOL! I thought Sirius deserved a 2nd appearance.

Reviewer: I_solemnly_swear
Date: 07/16/07 21:29
Chapter: Chapter 20: Overtime

YES~! HE FOUND IT! That was one spooky prophosy. Was it about Lily coming back to life for Harry? I guess I have to keep reading! This is a really cool mystery story. The only thing that would have made it better would have been something between Ron and Hermione.

Author's Response: Not the best guess on the prophecy, but don't feel bad--no one's gotten it yet.

Reviewer: I_solemnly_swear
Date: 07/16/07 20:55
Chapter: Chapter 19: Be Careful What You Seek

Whoa, this is almost too confusing! Ok, now I need to type this out so I get what is going on. James was put into Lily's grave with Lily and Voldemort was put into James' grave but Voldemort is alive right now and this has been this way for 16 years?!? Ok, I think I should read the rest of the story now but interesting plot twist none the less!

Author's Response: Well...the Original Voldy was killed that night in Godric's Hollow, but there's never been any talk of his it must have been hidden somewhere. Voldy became a disembodied spirit thanks to the Horcruxes, but the new body he inhabits now was constructed fresh from that potion at the end of GoF.

Reviewer: Ravenclaw_Soprano
Date: 07/16/07 19:36
Chapter: Chapter 32: Truth and Consequences

Wow. I have only just noticed/gotten hooked into this fic, but I read it all in 2 days. I am amazed at all of the thought and plot in it, and I can't wait for the next chapters!

I was reading this when my roommate wanted to go to dinner... but I kept saying "just one more chapter" despite knowing that it isn't complete yet. ;)

Author's Response: !! Yay! Well, 33 will be up fairly soon, and 34-36 are done so they'll follow quickly.

Reviewer: I_solemnly_swear
Date: 07/16/07 19:35
Chapter: Chapter 17: The Killing Curse

At least I know where Hedwig is now. Arthur Weasley, Mininster for Magic! Never thought I'd see the day!

Author's Response: That's what he gets for showing up late to the meeting...

Reviewer: I_solemnly_swear
Date: 07/16/07 19:00
Chapter: Chapter 16: Untangling the Web

The mirror just has to be somewhere, with very strong emphasis on 'has'! Whoa, no one knew that Kreacher was dead, kind of ironic that Harry didn't know his own servant had died. I still don't know where Hedwig is either! Did she fly away, abandon Harry or find a new master or something?

Author's Response: She's just sorta looking--I kinda forgot about her, poor owl.

Reviewer: I_solemnly_swear
Date: 07/16/07 14:26
Chapter: Chapter 12: Summer's End

OK first, Ew. Second, where is Hedwig in all of this business of Fawkes? I would think that she feels left out and abandoned. But where did she go?

Author's Response: I think she naturally would feel a bit displaced and jealous but she's around. Eating mice and things, no doubt.

Reviewer: I_solemnly_swear
Date: 07/16/07 13:39
Chapter: Chapter 11: Aftermath

Aw, just like Sirius to throw rotten pairs through a veil at the two people alive that he loves most! And I am Sirius, I mean serious, when I say that.

Author's Response: Exactly. Always the rascal, that Black.

Reviewer: I_solemnly_swear
Date: 07/16/07 13:21
Chapter: Chapter 10: Santa's Little Helper

Gasp! That was sort of unexpected.

Author's Response: There will be a lot of that as the story goes on.

Reviewer: I_solemnly_swear
Date: 07/16/07 12:26
Chapter: Chapter 9: Back To Business

Remus is such an awesome leader!

Author's Response: I think so, too. He just needed a chance to show his inner strength.

Reviewer: Lost_Wizard
Date: 07/16/07 12:02
Chapter: Chapter 32: Truth and Consequences

Yes that was rather intense at the end and I cannot wait to read the next chapter. You have spun a interesting web of conspiracy and intrigue. Even after I read The Deathly Hallows I want read more of your ideas of the HP universe. I have only ever given a score of 10/10 once and it was to a finished story but Tura's revelation at the end of this chapter makes a perfect 10 unless you either kill off Harry or screw up as bad as David Yutz ( Misspelling was intentional) with his recent chop job that he calls a movie version of OTP

Author's Response: *Sporfle* I can't guarantee I won't muff it up the way the Yutz did (although considering the mountain of material he had to scrunch into 2 hours, I think he did an OK job) but I guarantee Harry will survive. Much more intensity yet to come...

Reviewer: Sonja
Date: 07/15/07 20:17
Chapter: Chapter 32: Truth and Consequences

Although i am usually not a fan of non-canon based fics , yours is so well written it goes around that little hurdle.When can we expect the story to wrap up?

PS:Is there any hope for the heart of a poor H/G shipper?

Author's Response: Erm, sadly, not in this fic. Go back over the part in Ch. 31 where Elias and Ginny are getting to know one another.

Reviewer: Oharachic1
Date: 07/15/07 17:50
Chapter: Chapter 32: Truth and Consequences

Wow. WOW! This was an outstanding chapter!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, this is kinda the turning point, all the mysteries have been presented at this point, now they need the wrap-up.

Reviewer: hermylovesron
Date: 07/15/07 12:57
Chapter: Chapter 30: The Spirit of the Season

aaaaaawwwwwww!!!!!!!!that was soo sweet!!!

Author's Response: Harry's picked up a tip or two from Sirius, I think.

Reviewer: tickled_pink
Date: 07/15/07 5:23
Chapter: Chapter 28: The Pitch

Hee hee, her boggart's a tree ... that's classic ... !

And I didn't mean to rhyme ...

Great chapter!

Tickled Pink

Author's Response: True story, too--well, except for the boggart part.

Reviewer: Poppy
Date: 07/15/07 0:46
Chapter: Chapter 31: It Tolls For Thee

I am pissed at Harry, but love the twist of Riddle's Daughter didn;'t see it coming. The last few chapters, have seemed odd to me I thought Tura was REALLY OLD, and I am having to rebuild her in my mind. I also have a pretty confident guess about her angel. I am loving the speedy updates, THANK YOU

Author's Response: Hence the title, Heirs of Slytherin. No, Tura's only 10 years older than Harry, but she's seen a lot (mostly through other people's eyes).

Reviewer: bionicdonkey
Date: 07/14/07 22:25
Chapter: Chapter 31: It Tolls For Thee

And once again i'm hooked on one of your stories. Wonderful work, though i'm none too pleased of harry's actions at the end.

Author's Response: Yeah, Harry kinda lost control there.

You must login (register) to review.
Find out everything you need to know about the site right here.

We have stories and authors in this archive.


Choose Theme:
Epithalamium by Squibstress Professors
Minerva McGonagall is a bright, talented witch with dreams of becoming the first...
The Marred Boy by Padfoot11333 1st-2nd Years
The two Marauders who were outcasts in their own homes. I am Padfoot11333...
A Seer Named Rosemary Snape by PlutoLovegood 3rd-5th Years
In 2018 Neville and Harry deliver a Hogwarts acceptance letter to Rosemary Snape...
whimper by psijupiter 6th-7th Years
I play to my strengths. As do we all. In the midst of the first wizarding...
Over A Mug of Tea by hestiajones 1st-2nd Years
I think of her as a sister. The words rang clearly, loudly in his mind. I...
Gaps Between by lucca4 6th-7th Years
Falling in love teaches Dennis Creevey that sometimes, needing someone isn't...
To Fear the Flame by Acacia Carter 3rd-5th Years
Neville hadn't expected his boggart to ever change. Perhaps he should have done.
Good King Ragnuk by Oregonian 1st-2nd Years
Ragnuk, King of the Goblins and master silversmith, forged a sword for Godric...