Reviewer: strangeone
Date: 07/30/07 20:35
Chapter: Chapter 36: Wolf's Bane
keep the chapters coming, stories great
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: barnaby
Date: 07/29/07 7:26
Chapter: Chapter 36: Wolf's Bane
Only just started reading the fanfics on this site, and started on yours! More i say! Great story, cannot wait for the next chapters!
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Author's Response: Thanks! Soon, I hope...
Reviewer: summerx723
Date: 07/28/07 18:22
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Calm
I love this story- it's a perfect "book 7"! update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: Frankie Nicholas
Date: 07/27/07 17:56
Chapter: Chapter 35: Illuminations
Hi,
Been reading from the start... Definitely, your tale is one of the best realised "alternate" book 7s, and I for one would be dreadfully disappointed if you didn't complete this excellent tale. BTW, I like Ondossi, an excellent original character.
Of all the fan fics I've read recently, I believe yours bears the strongest resemblance in tone, prose structure and characterisation, to an authentic JKR story.
Author's Response: Thanks! I was trying pretty hard to imitate her style, though it's kinda cramped me here and there. It's hard to "do" another author for very long.
Reviewer: DobbyElf
Date: 07/27/07 10:44
Chapter: Chapter 36: Wolf's Bane
So what about Draco? Where is he now?
Author's Response: Patience, grasshopper! The next chapter will tell more... he couldn't exactly go back to Hogwarts to the infirmary, could he? He'd be lynched!
Reviewer: severusmagic
Date: 07/27/07 4:17
Chapter: Chapter 3: Flights of Fancy
Oh and I forgot to say I don't think the Order would fall to Remus, he seems to minor a character to me.
Author's Response: Oh, I didn't think so. He's been in the Order a long time, doing special missions to the werewolves, keeping charge of Headquarters... I don't see him as minor at all!
Reviewer: luke
Date: 07/27/07 1:36
Chapter: Chapter 36: Wolf's Bane
I've been following your story for a long time. I've never submitted any reviews till now. This is my very first review. I'm in love with this story. It is totally different from what i expected. And i'm specially in love with Tura. I just have one request. Please let Tura live (till the end). You may kill the Pottar brat (:D) if you want, but not Tura. She is amazing. Just keep the great story going.
Author's Response: *sporfle* Well, not wanting to give out any spoilers, but you'll definitely want to read this all the way to the very last chapter...and thanks for speaking up!
Reviewer: luke
Date: 07/27/07 1:36
Chapter: Chapter 36: Wolf's Bane
I've been following your story for a long time. I've never submitted any reviews till now. This is my very first review. I'm in love with this story. It is totally different from what i expected. And i'm specially in love with Tura. I just have one request. Please let Tura live (till the end). You make kill the Pottar brat (:D) if you want, but not Tura. She is amazing. Just keep the great story going.
Author's Response: Hee hee...well, now that the end s up, I hope you enjoyed what finally happened to Tura...
Reviewer: smrrdn
Date: 07/26/07 20:25
Chapter: Chapter 36: Wolf's Bane
This story is awesome, I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Author's Response: :) Thanks!
Reviewer: Ravenclaw_Soprano
Date: 07/26/07 15:54
Chapter: Chapter 36: Wolf's Bane
Now, that was an intense chapter! I enjoyed it a lot. Peredhil *had* said he was sent by Fawkes...
Keep them coming, please!! I look forward to the next chapters....
Author's Response: True, that makes him seem much less sinister, huh?
Reviewer: RachelR82
Date: 07/26/07 10:59
Chapter: Chapter 35: Illuminations
Oooh.... good story so far! I like how you are incorporating a real sense of Harry growing as a person in with the impossible quest. However, I have one problem with the storyline... noone knew about the Horcruxes or the need to destroy them except for Harry, Ron, and Hermione. How did everyone find out?
Author's Response: Early in ch. 4 or so, Remus explained that Dumbledore had left info in his will. Dumbles had intended he and Harry to search for the last Horks, but he knew if he was killed, Harry couldn't do it alone. The whole explanation went by in about 3 sentences and a lot of people ask this same question, I guess I should have elaborated more.
Reviewer: Lost_Wizard
Date: 07/26/07 1:28
Chapter: Chapter 35: Illuminations
Great Mother of Merlin,I think Jo's nyph had left her as she had written the trio's Horcrux search and found you.The Madam Malkin scene was very well thought-out and was natural in the thoughts of young and tender minds of wanting fit-in.Gryffindork thats a good one... Warner Bros should take a look at this story and think about giving you the writting unstead of David Yutz & Michael Slaughterberg. You have added more deepth to the boy wizard than I've seen since the OTP book version I cannot wait to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Hah, somehow I think WB won't be looking very hard. But it's nice to hear people like this version! :)
Reviewer: DobbyElf
Date: 07/25/07 22:41
Chapter: Chapter 35: Illuminations
I love this book, I also read the "Other Book 7" and I really am not sure which one I like better. I am constantly watching for updated...but I dont like how it ended on it being a full moon, because its not like he would have not taken his wolfsbane and be running through the house tearing shit up. I hope that isnt supposed to be the idea... I do live the story, update soon
Author's Response: Taking wolfsbane? And who would be making that for him? Not Snape... and Slughorn's not a member of the Order...
Reviewer: ssdawn
Date: 07/25/07 20:40
Chapter: Chapter 35: Illuminations
Please keep writing!! It would be awful it we didn't get to read what happens!! I was so stunned by
the ending of the last chapter I wasn't sure what to say. But this has been a good chapter with Harry and Draco. You really are a great writer!! Thanks!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I have to finish writing it, I just wasn't sure any one was reading it anymore...
Reviewer: Ravenclaw_Soprano
Date: 07/25/07 18:34
Chapter: Chapter 35: Illuminations
I like this story a lot... thanks for keeping going with it! It's especially a way for me to keep thinking about Harry and the Wizarding world, since I don't have access to the book yet.
Keep it up!! I especially liked the different look at the first meeting. I am surprised, though, that the Order didn't find the secret room when they were de-Darking the house.
Author's Response: Well, the room wasn't necessarily Dark, even though Aunt Bella built it...
Reviewer: jpkitty
Date: 07/25/07 17:22
Chapter: Chapter 35: Illuminations
Ooh. Cliffie.
The Madam Malkin scene was the coolest! It makes perfect sense, but why would Harry go right to that memory when he was reading Draco?
Author's Response: Why not? Gotta start somewhere. Perhaps Draco was thinking about their first meeting as he faced the wizard Harry's become...
Reviewer: crystalphoenix
Date: 07/25/07 12:53
Chapter: Chapter 35: Illuminations
i love your story; the characters and events are very well thought-out and intriguing. i liked seeing draco's side of the first encounter. i'm also glad to see that both draco and harry are growing up. i'm also very curious to find out what's going to happen. did remus take wolfsbane potion? write more, please!
Author's Response: :) I think they are both growing up--perhaps a bit too fast on both sides, but maybe that's the price you pay for being magical.
Reviewer: darkly
Date: 07/25/07 1:53
Chapter: Chapter 33: The Downward Spiral
I like yours better.
Author's Response: My book 7? *huge smile* Thanks!
Reviewer: Ravenclaw_Soprano
Date: 07/24/07 16:05
Chapter: Chapter 34: The Lost Boy
Awesome. Harry's reconciliation with Tura seemed a bit shaky, but I'm glad to see that there's still some trust there.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Well, it is a bit shaky--she's not used to being decked like that, and she really wants Harry to think about the consequences of his actions.
Reviewer: jpkitty
Date: 07/19/07 21:25
Chapter: Chapter 32: Truth and Consequences
First, let me say that I love how you're staying away from the pairings that we're all sure are going to happen in cannon. The Harry/Ginny book seven fics all end up with the exact same plot, in my humble opinion.
I feel so sorry for Ondossi! I know she was being kind of mean in the last few paragraphs, but Harry had just beat her and knocked her unconscious, so he sorta deserved to hear whatever she had on her mind! You're right, I was shocked at how Harry treated her. I love what Dumbledore said to Harry. "Miss Ondossi is no more her father then you are your's." That's one of the central themes from cannon, and I'm glad that you worked it into your fic. As for Dumbledore letting all those madmen get near Harry just to train him, I don't know that he's capable of that. Call me an optimist, but I think that Harry is a magnet for bad guys just because he defeated the Dark Lord when he was not even a year old(if only temporarily).
I think I'll just close with a "Keep up the good work!"
Author's Response: Thanks! For better or for worse, this was the plot twist I needed at this point in the story, so I'm plowing on with it...it'll all make sense in the end, I hope.
