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Name: Astronomygirl_101 (Signed) · Date: 09/19/07 16:41 · For: Chapter 8: For Worse
this chapter was really... odd. I have no other word for it. this chapter was odd. What I want to know is why Voldemort bit his throat? Other than that the chapter was still odd.

Author's Response: The idea was that Voldemort puts the Mark on people by biting them--you know what a drama queen he is. But in this case, Voldy meant to kill Draco instead of just marking him, but because Draco amused him at the last second, he changed his mind and let him live.

Name: smrrdn (Signed) · Date: 09/19/07 13:22 · For: Chapter 37: Ways and Means
That was an excellent chapter, I was starting to wonder if you were ever going to finish the story, it was worth the wait though...can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Thanks! 38 shouldn't take nearly as long.

Name: oliver_snook (Signed) · Date: 09/19/07 4:43 · For: Chapter 37: Ways and Means
utter shite m8 lol @ u

Author's Response: Uhhhh... is that a good thing or a bad thing? (F7=non-Brit)

Name: Astronomygirl_101 (Signed) · Date: 09/19/07 0:30 · For: Chapter 7: For Better
I love this chapter!!!! It is so awesome, and not just because Harry was the sealer, or th fact that Fred kissed him and was turned into a sunflower, and not even when Harry read Ginny's mind. No it awesome because of the simplicity of the chapter, and because Harry kissed Ginny, even if it was just on her cheek.

Author's Response: Heh, well, you're probably going to have some issues later in this tale...

Name: Astronomygirl_101 (Signed) · Date: 09/18/07 23:11 · For: Chapter 6: The Phoenix Tale
This chapter is really good.But when you go from one person to the next, then its kinda hard to know whom you're typing about. Otherwise it was really good.

Author's Response: Thanks! This one's one of my favorites--in fact I was asked to read it for a podcast. There's a link in the story summary.

Name: Astronomygirl_101 (Signed) · Date: 09/18/07 22:41 · For: Chapter 5: Godric's Hollow
OMG! OMG! OMG! what an incredible way to end the chapter. That was just unbelieveably awsome!

Author's Response: LOL, it's been so long since I wrote it, I can't remember how I ended it.

Name: Stubbornly_appeared (Signed) · Date: 09/18/07 21:42 · For: Chapter 37: Ways and Means

Oh. My. Godric. After a near two-month wait, we FINALLY get a new chapter!

And man, was it emotional. Merlin, what a sob-fest....

"Damaged goods" I'll admit my perverted mind did a double take when Tura said that, but afterwards.

Another sad fact: two days ago, I had a dream that this fic was updated. In the dream, I sat down at the compy and causally went to MNFF. Then I saw Heirs on the "Most Recent" list and I began screaming things similar to what was said at the beginning of this review. I speedy-quick read it, but then was like, "NNNOOOOOO!!!!" because it was a disappointing chapter. I saw a "next" button though, so I clicked it but then the page read "Access denied. This chapter has not yet been validated by a moderator.". I was, again, exclaiming my distaste when I woke up.

Oddly, it was parallel to how I feel now. It was a little short and a little lacking in substance, but a lot of important planning and healing went on.

I can only hope we don't have to spend an eternity dying for the next chapter.

-Stubby (Boo-yah!)

Author's Response: Short?! It was 7000 words! Admittedly, I thought about adding a significant event but decided to save it for 38. It would have made the chapter at least 11,000 words. But half of 38 is written already, so it shouldn't be nearly so long a wait.

Name: Astronomygirl_101 (Signed) · Date: 09/18/07 20:59 · For: Chapter 4: Many Meetings
this chapter was ok. the part 'bout Harry and Madeye made no sense at all, but the rest of teh chapter was still ok.

Author's Response: Hmmm...well, I liked that part.

Name: Astronomygirl_101 (Signed) · Date: 09/18/07 20:29 · For: Chapter 3: Flights of Fancy
This chapter is AMAZING!!!! I can't that you made Harry am legilimagus. It seemes so weird in a relly awesome way! So far, your story is the bomb!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! :)

Name: Astronomygirl_101 (Signed) · Date: 09/18/07 19:49 · For: Chapter 2: The Storm
WOW! THAT WAS ONE HELL OF A INCREDIBLY GREAT CHAPTER! There were parts of the near end where I had no idea what you typed, but the rest was fantastic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: *crosses eyes* Was I too obscure? Sheesh, being incomprehensible isn't exactly the average writer's dream...

Name: Astronomygirl_101 (Signed) · Date: 09/18/07 19:13 · For: Chapter 1: The Calm
I LOVE this chapter! It is soooooo funny! Especially the end where Petunia asks: Whats wron with you boy? and Harry answers: Legilimency!

Author's Response: :) Thanks!

Name: jpkitty (Signed) · Date: 09/18/07 15:45 · For: Chapter 37: Ways and Means
Excellent, as usual. I think I'm going to print your story out and read it in the place of Deathly Hallows.

Author's Response: awww... well, if you do, let me know and I'll get you the right fonts for the foreign languages. Also, I just made a teensy change to the end of this chapter, which you might want to go read before 38 comes out.

Name: Stubbornly_appeared (Signed) · Date: 09/12/07 1:04 · For: Chapter 36: Wolf's Bane
Back again, dear Fawkes. This time, I just want to say: don't kill yourself, but don't kill us either.

Author's Response: Trying, trying...37 is turning out to be SUCH a bear.

Name: JaydenBlubooth (Signed) · Date: 09/06/07 4:48 · For: Chapter 1: The Calm
I think this is better than the Deathly Hallows. Thank you, I can't wait for the rest.

Author's Response: Thanks! More to come...

Name: JaydenBlubooth (Signed) · Date: 09/06/07 4:43 · For: Chapter 1: The Calm
I think this is better than the Deathly Hallows. Thank you, I can't wait for the rest.

Name: Stubbornly_appeared (Signed) · Date: 09/05/07 22:01 · For: Chapter 1: The Calm
I'm back again, this time with glowing praise!

Okay, so this is how much of a freak I am: I've written fanfiction for your fanfiction. It was pretty terrible, couldn't compare to this fic at all. It was like Book 7 to me, this fic, before DH. Now it's my alternate DH, that I've reread about as much as the actual book.

Woah, that was uncharacteristic of me. Keep up the good work!


Author's Response: bwahahaha! Well, I'm glad I'm not the only one writing fanfic on my fanfic (someday maybe I'll post the lost chapters about Sirus and Igraine, Tura and Draco, etc. etc.) But where can I read it??

Name: Ravenclaw_Soprano (Signed) · Date: 09/05/07 11:39 · For: Chapter 36: Wolf's Bane
I know I already said this... and I'm trying to be patient... trying... please please please update soon! I'm really glad to hear you haven't given up on it.

Author's Response: I finished 44 last night and 43 is almost done...I'm getting there, I promise!

Name: silverymist23 (Signed) · Date: 09/04/07 18:15 · For: Chapter 36: Wolf's Bane
wtflip come on, update, pleeeaaseeee!!!!

Author's Response: Read here for an explanation: http://friendsofvisarts.org/yabb/YaBB.pl?board=chitchat (go to the Artisan Village Blog)...

Name: mo2 (Signed) · Date: 08/27/07 4:12 · For: Chapter 36: Wolf's Bane
Hello. I generally don't leave reviews, but there I'm a little worried: several chapters in quick succession and then none for nearly a month. You don't have given up on that story, have you? For it would really be a shame that close to the end. (And with such a suspens at the end of chapter 37...).
I hope you'll prove me wrong soon, with a new chapter in the upcoming weeks. Bye.

Author's Response: Working on it--I'm running a part of the State Fair right now and it's taking up all my time, all month. But it ends Labor Day...

Name: Stubbornly_appeared (Signed) · Date: 08/24/07 0:02 · For: Chapter 29: The New World
I was looking through older chaptesr to find one to review as... er- compensation for the one I left on CH 36 (and I've been rereading), and I picked this one.

Your characterization is flawless. Snake!Harry is wonderful, so creepy and sumblime. I love how you make him feel so many emotions so simply and elegantly. Ondossi was great too, shoving the love and compassion back into his head.

I especially like when, at the end, Harry and Tura are arguing over how expensive the coat she got him was, and she says, "It's nothing! It's yours. Be gracious, Mr. Here, Lupin, You Can Have My House."

Wow. Really sums it up. Need I say more.

Thanks for being such a great author, and keep up the good work.

Author's Response: *blush* Thanks! I feel so appreciated!

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