Reviewer: Noel Weasley
Date: 09/21/07 17:51
Chapter: Chapter 38: The Darkest Secret
"Even though I know that voice, I still wouldn't believe it, but I could see him. He was under an Invisibility cloak. Probably your father's. The baby could perceive just beneath it--he was too little to be fooled completely by the magic."
So, Dumbledore? Oooo, plot twist! :D Cool :D
~Lindsay
Author's Response: I try to throw those in whenever I can. Albus has a little 'splaining to do.
Reviewer: abbs866
Date: 09/21/07 17:32
Chapter: Chapter 38: The Darkest Secret
DUMBLEDORE??? WHAT!? This is like my favorite story ever, please update!
Author's Response: Gak--I just posted this one 10 minutes ago! Patience, grasshopper!
Reviewer: Astronomygirl_101
Date: 09/20/07 12:19
Chapter: Chapter 19: Be Careful What You Seek
I knew it! I knew it! I knew! I knew it was Vlodemort!... And it was Voldemort! Oooh, man am I good at guesing!
Author's Response: well, there will be more little mysteries very soon...
Reviewer: Linda_Carrig
Date: 09/20/07 10:03
Chapter: Chapter 37: Ways and Means
Please, continue your story! I've been reading it for months now and it is very good. I just love the bit about Draco which I read just now and the rest up until this last chapter. I think you did a great job with Ondossi's character: just love her! And it's nice to have Sirius back. The phoenix bits are also fabulous, so please don't stop now.
Author's Response: No worries--38 is coming along nicely.
Reviewer: Astronomygirl_101
Date: 09/19/07 21:36
Chapter: Chapter 14: Shadows of the Past
This chapter is so peaceful and calm, it is so nice to be able to read a chapter without Death Eaters showing up, or injured people appearing.This chapter is really nice, + it calmed my anxious nervous.
Author's Response: chapter 14?? In which Harry's parents die?? I suppose it's not anything we didn't already know, but...
Reviewer: Ravenclaw_Soprano
Date: 09/19/07 19:26
Chapter: Chapter 37: Ways and Means
Awesome! I'm so glad Tura and Harry are speaking closely again... and that you are continuing!
I particularly liked the "damaged goods" part at the end. Keep it up!
Author's Response: Ten chapters to go...
Reviewer: Astronomygirl_101
Date: 09/19/07 19:23
Chapter: Chapter 12: Summer's End
this chapter was really good as always, but the second to last pharagraph was DISGUSTING!!! I really hope there won' t be any more like that.
Author's Response: Nothing exactly like that, no...
Reviewer: Astronomygirl_101
Date: 09/19/07 18:26
Chapter: Chapter 11: Aftermath
I love this chapter, it was kinda weird, as usual, but the very last pharagraph was halarious!!! LOL!!!!! : ) Kepp them coming!, Please.
Author's Response: Koff koff...it was supposed to be mysterious and poignant, but I guess hilarious will work too...
Reviewer: Astronomygirl_101
Date: 09/19/07 17:59
Chapter: Chapter 10: Santa's Little Helper
I have no idea what to say about this chapter. I'm positivly speachless.Though one thing I can say is that this chapteris just... WOW. :O
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: Astronomygirl_101
Date: 09/19/07 17:14
Chapter: Chapter 9: Back To Business
This chapter is amazing!!! I love it!!! that is all.
Author's Response: :)
Reviewer: Astronomygirl_101
Date: 09/19/07 16:41
Chapter: Chapter 8: For Worse
this chapter was really... odd. I have no other word for it. this chapter was odd. What I want to know is why Voldemort bit his throat? Other than that the chapter was still odd.
Author's Response: The idea was that Voldemort puts the Mark on people by biting them--you know what a drama queen he is. But in this case, Voldy meant to kill Draco instead of just marking him, but because Draco amused him at the last second, he changed his mind and let him live.
Reviewer: smrrdn
Date: 09/19/07 13:22
Chapter: Chapter 37: Ways and Means
That was an excellent chapter, I was starting to wonder if you were ever going to finish the story, it was worth the wait though...can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thanks! 38 shouldn't take nearly as long.
Reviewer: oliver_snook
Date: 09/19/07 4:43
Chapter: Chapter 37: Ways and Means
utter shite m8 lol @ u
Author's Response: Uhhhh... is that a good thing or a bad thing? (F7=non-Brit)
Reviewer: Astronomygirl_101
Date: 09/19/07 0:30
Chapter: Chapter 7: For Better
I love this chapter!!!! It is so awesome, and not just because Harry was the sealer, or th fact that Fred kissed him and was turned into a sunflower, and not even when Harry read Ginny's mind. No it awesome because of the simplicity of the chapter, and because Harry kissed Ginny, even if it was just on her cheek.
Author's Response: Heh, well, you're probably going to have some issues later in this tale...
Reviewer: Astronomygirl_101
Date: 09/18/07 23:11
Chapter: Chapter 6: The Phoenix Tale
This chapter is really good.But when you go from one person to the next, then its kinda hard to know whom you're typing about. Otherwise it was really good.
Author's Response: Thanks! This one's one of my favorites--in fact I was asked to read it for a podcast. There's a link in the story summary.
Reviewer: Astronomygirl_101
Date: 09/18/07 22:41
Chapter: Chapter 5: Godric's Hollow
OMG! OMG! OMG! what an incredible way to end the chapter. That was just unbelieveably awsome!
Author's Response: LOL, it's been so long since I wrote it, I can't remember how I ended it.
Reviewer: Stubbornly_appeared
Date: 09/18/07 21:42
Chapter: Chapter 37: Ways and Means
ULTIMATE SQUEE!
Oh. My. Godric. After a near two-month wait, we FINALLY get a new chapter!
And man, was it emotional. Merlin, what a sob-fest....
"Damaged goods" I'll admit my perverted mind did a double take when Tura said that, but afterwards.
Another sad fact: two days ago, I had a dream that this fic was updated. In the dream, I sat down at the compy and causally went to MNFF. Then I saw Heirs on the "Most Recent" list and I began screaming things similar to what was said at the beginning of this review. I speedy-quick read it, but then was like, "NNNOOOOOO!!!!" because it was a disappointing chapter. I saw a "next" button though, so I clicked it but then the page read "Access denied. This chapter has not yet been validated by a moderator.". I was, again, exclaiming my distaste when I woke up.
Oddly, it was parallel to how I feel now. It was a little short and a little lacking in substance, but a lot of important planning and healing went on.
I can only hope we don't have to spend an eternity dying for the next chapter.
-Stubby (Boo-yah!)
Author's Response: Short?! It was 7000 words! Admittedly, I thought about adding a significant event but decided to save it for 38. It would have made the chapter at least 11,000 words. But half of 38 is written already, so it shouldn't be nearly so long a wait.
Reviewer: Astronomygirl_101
Date: 09/18/07 20:59
Chapter: Chapter 4: Many Meetings
this chapter was ok. the part 'bout Harry and Madeye made no sense at all, but the rest of teh chapter was still ok.
Author's Response: Hmmm...well, I liked that part.
Reviewer: Astronomygirl_101
Date: 09/18/07 20:29
Chapter: Chapter 3: Flights of Fancy
This chapter is AMAZING!!!! I can't that you made Harry am legilimagus. It seemes so weird in a relly awesome way! So far, your story is the bomb!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
Reviewer: Astronomygirl_101
Date: 09/18/07 19:49
Chapter: Chapter 2: The Storm
WOW! THAT WAS ONE HELL OF A INCREDIBLY GREAT CHAPTER! There were parts of the near end where I had no idea what you typed, but the rest was fantastic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: *crosses eyes* Was I too obscure? Sheesh, being incomprehensible isn't exactly the average writer's dream...
