Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/16/07 9:46
Chapter: Chapter 8: For Worse

Wow, I really have always though Draco was in over his head with the Death Eaters. Great chapter, Snape is so interesting!

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, I have too--he's a great poser but it's all hot air, I think.

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/16/07 9:31
Chapter: Chapter 7: For Better

Terrific chapter! I really enjoyed seeing a bit of J.R.R Tolkien in this fic. The wedding was beautifully written also!

Author's Response: *grins* Hah! Someone who can appreciate a little Silmarillion crossover! Go back and look at the phoenix chapter again, you might notice a bit more...

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/16/07 9:04
Chapter: Chapter 6: The Phoenix Tale

Curious situation at the end of the chapter but excellent writing! Fantastic fan fic!

Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/16/07 8:58
Chapter: Chapter 5: Godric's Hollow

And the story takes an interesting turn! Wonder where this is going! Great chapter!

Author's Response: Well, it's headed toward explaining the Missing 24 Hours on that fateful Halloween.

Reviewer: Georgiana
Date: 10/16/07 8:40
Chapter: Chapter 39: Bubbles Burst

Whoa! Why didn't I guess it was Umbridge? Slimy little toad.

Man that was an awesome chapter! So much happened...oh my gosh you had me actually crying for Harry after he discovered Dumbledore's deception.

But, I have to say, I love this new grownup, steely-resolved Harry. Plus, it's been a very natural progression for his character, throughout the story.

Oh my Neville there right now? I want to witness the reunion between mom and son, please!

More, more, more! (10/10)

Author's Response: Cool! I was hoping Steely Harry (Steely Dan??)(sorry, fossil joke) would go over with people. But I'm afraid Neville's reunion with his folks takes place offstage.

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/16/07 8:27
Chapter: Chapter 4: Many Meetings

Awesome chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Hectate
Date: 10/16/07 3:59
Chapter: Chapter 39: Bubbles Burst

yes! keep it up

Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: Stubbornly_appeared
Date: 10/15/07 21:02
Chapter: Chapter 39: Bubbles Burst


'Twas great! Truly great. Alice's POV was well done, and you handled the whole 'traitor' business quite marvelously. Jumped for a bit, so I had to realise we had just moved, but wasn't *that* hard to follow....

:) Can't wait for more.


Author's Response: Thanks! I liked how it turned out, too. I was hoping there'd be a way to help out the Longbottoms, and it just sorta came up.

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/15/07 19:12
Chapter: Chapter 3: Flights of Fancy

I'm not gonna lie that witch in the courtyard was scary! Amazing chapter!

Author's Response: She was on her best behavior at that moment, too. Just wait.

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/15/07 19:05
Chapter: Chapter 2: The Storm

Interesting, very interesting. Great chapter! The concept of wild magic is kinda cool

Author's Response: I thought so... :)

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/15/07 18:21
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Calm

Things are cetainly changing for Harry! I really enojyed this first chapter and though you did a pretty good job

Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you like the rest!

Reviewer: Poppy
Date: 10/15/07 15:51
Chapter: Chapter 39: Bubbles Burst

WOW - What a SURPRISE, and how appropriate. Thanks for saving the Longbottom's. That was an unexpected treat!! I am on pins an needles waiting for each new update!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: tommyriddle
Date: 10/15/07 14:15
Chapter: Chapter 39: Bubbles Burst

great story. you're killing me with the wait.

Author's Response: Wish I could write faster, believe me.

Reviewer: Ravenclaw_Soprano
Date: 10/15/07 14:15
Chapter: Chapter 39: Bubbles Burst

YAY!!! They figured out who the traitor was!!

I liked the depiction of Harry and Dumbledore's anger scene; it seemed very fitting. It's pretty much what I was ready to do at the last chapter!

Keep up the good writing!

Author's Response: Thanks! I was hoping to convey both anger and new maturity.

Reviewer: Stubbornly_appeared
Date: 10/13/07 0:02
Chapter: Chapter 38: The Darkest Secret

ARGH! I'm going to commit sepeku. Isn't that a lovely word? It's the honorable suicide of a samuari. 'Cause right now, I'm... gah!

I've thought of so many theories/endings for this fic, one of them is bound to happen....

Author's Response: Yeah, me too. As soon as I figure it out, you'll know...

Reviewer: ardentharlequin
Date: 10/10/07 1:31
Chapter: Chapter 38: The Darkest Secret

sry i haven't commented earlier its just that i've been too wrapped up in the story, great story might i add.
First of all.. I LOVE TURA she is everything i've ever wanted in a character and then some.
Secondly, that whole student falling for a teacher, LOVE IT. It soo adds another demention. I've always been fond of sored love affairs and what not.
Thirdly, WHYYYY! why would you do that to me.. leave me at this crucial time.
i've been reading this story for 12 hours straight.. and this is what i get.
Update asap if you please

~STAY ARDENT (in your buffoonery that is)..~

Author's Response: *giggle* Thanks for the review. I'm working on 39 and 40 together; I keep getting inspired on different sections. But 41-47 are already written, so once I get past these next two chapters, they'll come up quickly.

Reviewer: nesit721
Date: 10/07/07 8:16
Chapter: Chapter 38: The Darkest Secret

MOREMOREMORE!!! This is really good so far, and it will be very interesting in the end, when we get there. So keep up on the good work!

Author's Response: Thanks! I hope to work on it this week.

Reviewer: papakis156
Date: 10/03/07 13:28
Chapter: Chapter 38: The Darkest Secret

amazing end

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Sariana
Date: 10/02/07 18:15
Chapter: Chapter 38: The Darkest Secret

Hi, Fawkes! I don't want to give away too much, but Rowling did not really address this issue much in DH. So don't be expecting too much.

I've been reading your "in-progress" chapters on LJ, but some of this was new to me. DD under the cloak? Wasn't expecting that!

It was good to see that you had new chapters here. But, please, pretty please, could you do some more work on "Private Lessons," too? Please?

Author's Response: LOL. I gotta finish Heirs first. PL needs some more research before I'll be ready to keep moving, though I was just thinking about it this morning. The LJ chapters are coming along pretty well, but there will be a few more changes before they're final. So don't get TOO far ahead. :)

Reviewer: sharona78
Date: 10/02/07 9:44
Chapter: Chapter 38: The Darkest Secret

Please send us a new chapter!! This cliffie is killing me!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Working on it...honest.

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