Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/16/07 16:26
Chapter: Chapter 16: Untangling the Web
Fantastic chapter! Such a great fan fic...
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/16/07 16:18
Chapter: Chapter 15: Mysteries Afloat
I must admit that was funny! Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/16/07 16:08
Chapter: Chapter 14: Shadows of the Past
A different approach to the missing time period in the series. Well done!
Author's Response: That's what I was shooting for, anyway...
Reviewer: arwenevensatr
Date: 10/16/07 13:15
Chapter: Chapter 39: Bubbles Burst
Oh no you didnt!!! And here I was thinking that it was Fudge, the man I love to hate. But this, even I couldn't see it coming. I shuld have though. I am glad that you are writing this fan fic au. Please update soonnn!
Author's Response: Hee hee--this way it's a little bit of BOTH the people you love to hate.
Reviewer: Siva2478
Date: 10/16/07 12:28
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Calm
aww... I've always felt like there had to be something that they could do for the Longbottoms... I'm glad I'm not the only one. Also, the fawkes chapter is one of my top three favorite chapters... in all of the stories I've read. You are in excellent company in that regard. Thanks for such a wonderful story!
Author's Response: Cool! What are your other 2? I'm always looking for good fanfics...
Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/16/07 11:48
Chapter: Chapter 13: Aye, of N.E.W.T.
Terrific fan fic! I like how this years students were not sorted. Makes the story more interesting!
Author's Response: *blush* I thought so too. :)
Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/16/07 11:05
Chapter: Chapter 12: Summer's End
I love these long chapters! Well written!
Author's Response: thanks!
Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/16/07 10:43
Chapter: Chapter 11: Aftermath
Amazing chapter. Can't wait to read the next one!
Author's Response: :)
Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/16/07 10:34
Chapter: Chapter 10: Santa's Little Helper
Nice long chapter with a cliffie at the end!!! Love it!
Author's Response: Cliffies are my thing... there'll be more.
Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/16/07 10:27
Chapter: Chapter 9: Back To Business
Excellent chapter!
Author's Response: :)
Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/16/07 9:46
Chapter: Chapter 8: For Worse
Wow, I really have always though Draco was in over his head with the Death Eaters. Great chapter, Snape is so interesting!
Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, I have too--he's a great poser but it's all hot air, I think.
Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/16/07 9:31
Chapter: Chapter 7: For Better
Terrific chapter! I really enjoyed seeing a bit of J.R.R Tolkien in this fic. The wedding was beautifully written also!
Author's Response: *grins* Hah! Someone who can appreciate a little Silmarillion crossover! Go back and look at the phoenix chapter again, you might notice a bit more...
Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/16/07 9:04
Chapter: Chapter 6: The Phoenix Tale
Curious situation at the end of the chapter but excellent writing! Fantastic fan fic!
Author's Response: :)
Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/16/07 8:58
Chapter: Chapter 5: Godric's Hollow
And the story takes an interesting turn! Wonder where this is going! Great chapter!
Author's Response: Well, it's headed toward explaining the Missing 24 Hours on that fateful Halloween.
Reviewer: Georgiana
Date: 10/16/07 8:40
Chapter: Chapter 39: Bubbles Burst
Whoa! Why didn't I guess it was Umbridge? Slimy little toad.
Man that was an awesome chapter! So much happened...oh my gosh you had me actually crying for Harry after he discovered Dumbledore's deception.
But, I have to say, I love this new grownup, steely-resolved Harry. Plus, it's been a very natural progression for his character, throughout the story.
Oh my gosh...is Neville there right now? I want to witness the reunion between mom and son, please!
More, more, more! (10/10)
Author's Response: Cool! I was hoping Steely Harry (Steely Dan??)(sorry, fossil joke) would go over with people. But I'm afraid Neville's reunion with his folks takes place offstage.
Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/16/07 8:27
Chapter: Chapter 4: Many Meetings
Awesome chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: Hectate
Date: 10/16/07 3:59
Chapter: Chapter 39: Bubbles Burst
yes! keep it up
Author's Response: :)
Reviewer: Stubbornly_appeared
Date: 10/15/07 21:02
Chapter: Chapter 39: Bubbles Burst
AHA!
'Twas great! Truly great. Alice's POV was well done, and you handled the whole 'traitor' business quite marvelously. Jumped for a bit, so I had to realise we had just moved, but wasn't *that* hard to follow....
:) Can't wait for more.
-Stubby
Author's Response: Thanks! I liked how it turned out, too. I was hoping there'd be a way to help out the Longbottoms, and it just sorta came up.
Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/15/07 19:12
Chapter: Chapter 3: Flights of Fancy
I'm not gonna lie that witch in the courtyard was scary! Amazing chapter!
Author's Response: She was on her best behavior at that moment, too. Just wait.
Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/15/07 19:05
Chapter: Chapter 2: The Storm
Interesting, very interesting. Great chapter! The concept of wild magic is kinda cool
Author's Response: I thought so... :)
