Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/17/07 15:48
Chapter: Chapter 22: Awakening

Great chapter! It's soooo cute to see Fawkes growing up again!

Author's Response: the little fuzzball...

Reviewer: Bailey30
Date: 10/17/07 12:26
Chapter: Chapter 39: Bubbles Burst

Wow!! I am on edge here!! This is great!!! I am a very Harry/Ginny & Ron/Hermione sort of person so I had a little trouble with the relationships at first *haha* but man I got over it quick because I am so engrossed in this story!!!! And I loved the bit about Draco...I had always hoped he'd come to the right side!!! BRAVO!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: thanks!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/17/07 8:25
Chapter: Chapter 21: Basileio Oneiro

Amazing really glad to see that Sirius is out of there! He was always one of my favorite characters!

Author's Response: Me too.

Reviewer: Stubbornly_appeared
Date: 10/17/07 0:45
Chapter: Chapter 39: Bubbles Burst

Woah, I just realised something- since when is Neville pretty much an operating member of the Order? I've reread so much, so I don't think I just missed it, but... huh?

Author's Response: Hmmmm... good point! Well, except he was in dumbledore's Army and fought beside Sirius in the Ministry in Book he's definitely part of the "in" crowd as far as that secret goes. Ron and Herms were never really formally inducted either, they just sort of were in by default.

Reviewer: Gin iz kool
Date: 10/16/07 21:06
Chapter: Chapter 39: Bubbles Burst

I LOVE UR STORY AND THIS JUST COMPLETELY SHOCKED ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: *snerk* Glad it took you by surprise!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/16/07 18:36
Chapter: Chapter 20: Overtime

Absolutely wonderful chapter! Kinda creepy about Voldemort being buried in James' grave though.

Author's Response: Well, that was the point...

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/16/07 18:15
Chapter: Chapter 19: Be Careful What You Seek

Spooky! awesome end to the chapter even if us readers don't like cliffies!

Author's Response: *bows*

Reviewer: crspens
Date: 10/16/07 17:03
Chapter: Chapter 39: Bubbles Burst

I knew it! I knew I shouldn't read this until you had more chapters posted than just one more since my last one. It leaves me waiting not too patiently for the next chapter.

I kind of expected Dumbledoore to have some kind of reason to have been there besides pure evil reasons. I'm sorry for Harry and all the other friends who were hurt by this betrayal.

As for Dolores Umbridge, I wondered if it was her, but kind of doubted that she had that much backbone. She really doesn't though. She just thought she did.

Anyway, another fascinating read. I just hope it's not as long as a wait like the last chapter. Hint, hint, hint...........


Author's Response: Re: ch 40: Working on it. As for Dolores, well, she doesn't have a spine of her own, but she's great at leaning on others'.

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/16/07 16:52
Chapter: Chapter 18: Lessons in Humility

Very interesting chapter, can't wait to read the next one

Author's Response: cool--a lot of people complained it had too many flies, not enough action. But I liked it...

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/16/07 16:38
Chapter: Chapter 17: The Killing Curse

Nice twist at the end. enjoyable to read

Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/16/07 16:26
Chapter: Chapter 16: Untangling the Web

Fantastic chapter! Such a great fan fic...

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/16/07 16:18
Chapter: Chapter 15: Mysteries Afloat

I must admit that was funny! Great chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/16/07 16:08
Chapter: Chapter 14: Shadows of the Past

A different approach to the missing time period in the series. Well done!

Author's Response: That's what I was shooting for, anyway...

Reviewer: arwenevensatr
Date: 10/16/07 13:15
Chapter: Chapter 39: Bubbles Burst

Oh no you didnt!!! And here I was thinking that it was Fudge, the man I love to hate. But this, even I couldn't see it coming. I shuld have though. I am glad that you are writing this fan fic au. Please update soonnn!

Author's Response: Hee hee--this way it's a little bit of BOTH the people you love to hate.

Reviewer: Siva2478
Date: 10/16/07 12:28
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Calm

aww... I've always felt like there had to be something that they could do for the Longbottoms... I'm glad I'm not the only one. Also, the fawkes chapter is one of my top three favorite chapters... in all of the stories I've read. You are in excellent company in that regard. Thanks for such a wonderful story!

Author's Response: Cool! What are your other 2? I'm always looking for good fanfics...

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/16/07 11:48
Chapter: Chapter 13: Aye, of N.E.W.T.

Terrific fan fic! I like how this years students were not sorted. Makes the story more interesting!

Author's Response: *blush* I thought so too. :)

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/16/07 11:05
Chapter: Chapter 12: Summer's End

I love these long chapters! Well written!

Author's Response: thanks!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/16/07 10:43
Chapter: Chapter 11: Aftermath

Amazing chapter. Can't wait to read the next one!

Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/16/07 10:34
Chapter: Chapter 10: Santa's Little Helper

Nice long chapter with a cliffie at the end!!! Love it!

Author's Response: Cliffies are my thing... there'll be more.

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/16/07 10:27
Chapter: Chapter 9: Back To Business

Excellent chapter!

Author's Response: :)

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