Reviewer: nesit721
Date: 02/01/08 4:44
Chapter: Chapter 41: Gathering Momentum

that...was great! it was a perfect set up for the last few chapters, and I CANNOT WAIT for the next chapter to be up! Get writing!

Author's Response: Thanks! Polishing up 42 even now...

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 01/31/08 9:18
Chapter: Chapter 41: Gathering Momentum

I absolutely love these long chapters!! Wonderful job =)

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Pheonixtales
Date: 01/20/08 15:46
Chapter: Chapter 40: The Turn of the Tide

I just caught up with this story and cant wait to see the next part!!!

Author's Response: 41 is about 3/4 done and 42 is already written, so hopefully there'll be some big updates soon.

Reviewer: silverymist23
Date: 01/11/08 19:42
Chapter: Chapter 40: The Turn of the Tide

I've loved reading this so far, I just need to review over the past chapters before any new ones - i've been rereading HPDH several times over :)

Author's Response: I still haven't read DH, though I understand it doesn't explain the Missing 24 Hours that I took great pains to discuss...

Reviewer: luke
Date: 01/08/08 6:30
Chapter: Chapter 40: The Turn of the Tide

Have you abandoned this story?

If yes then please let us know.

At least we wont wait.

If not, then its been tooooooo long.

I know that you might be busy and all but its been over two months.

Please update soon.

Author's Response: I know, I'm so sorry. Not only did I have the grant apps due, but then a dear friend was killed in a mountain climbing accident and that really threw me off. I barely had the oomph to do Christmas this year. But I'm getting past it at last, and ch 45 (the final confrontation with Voldy!!) is almost finished. I gotta work on whatever chapter is feeding the muse at the moment. 41 is kinda hung up for me right now but it's NOT abandoned, not in the slightest!

Reviewer: unforgivablecurse
Date: 12/09/07 4:55
Chapter: Chapter 40: The Turn of the Tide

What happened to the updates?

Author's Response: I had 3 major grant applications due the past 2 weeks. Got sidetracked. 41 is half done.

Reviewer: Georgiana
Date: 11/20/07 0:12
Chapter: Chapter 40: The Turn of the Tide

"Don't just bite off the ears!" said Hermione.

"What? They don't mind!" Ron replied indignantly.

"I know that! Bite the legs off so they stop jumping everywhere," she snapped.

HA HA HA! You had me chuckling out loud at this exchange--I love the Trio when they're being teenagers, natural and true to character. Oh, and Viktor's hilarious: "Is not my job protecting you from candy." Hee! LOVED the gratitude in the form of candy that Gran showered on Harry. Such a good idea!

I like that Umbridge will have to forage for insects in the Amazon, like the slimy little toad that she is. I hope she chokes on a grub. She's hurt WAY too many people that I love! (Neville, Harry, Sirius, Hagrid, .... ) HATE her.

I got a tad choked up when Sirius told Harry that Arthur was announcing that his innocence. 16 years late is better than never, I suppose! And fiercely loyal Harry: "But then I learned the *truth*." Shiver. Don't mess with Harry Potter or those he loves.

I'm sad that he left Hogwarts, but of course it needed to happen, and this was the perfect time. Let the end begin!!!

Author's Response: I loved the ear bit--trying to set it up like Hermione was protecting the poor widdle bunnies, when in fact she meant to cripple them even further. SNERK! Yeah, the end is coming very soon--lots of action to come in the next 8 chapters.

Reviewer: unforgivablecurse
Date: 11/19/07 3:04
Chapter: Chapter 40: The Turn of the Tide

Goooo fawkes...nice chapter...waiting for rest

Author's Response: Working on it!

Reviewer: nesit721
Date: 11/18/07 8:19
Chapter: Chapter 40: The Turn of the Tide

Awesome, nice, Great, Brilliant, Perfect, there's only one problem... It's not done yet. Keep up the good work! I need something to good to read, and fast, so get moving!

Author's Response: Trying, trying. 41 is off to a good start so far.

Reviewer: Oharachic1
Date: 11/16/07 21:09
Chapter: Chapter 40: The Turn of the Tide

Another great chapter. Poor Harry. I feel so lonesome for him.

Author's Response: He's got a tough row to hoe.

Reviewer: jpkitty
Date: 11/15/07 17:44
Chapter: Chapter 40: The Turn of the Tide

I loved the chapter! Harry's emo moment made me cry. *wipes away tears*

Author's Response: Yay! That was the point, after all.

Reviewer: i love prongs
Date: 11/15/07 15:35
Chapter: Chapter 40: The Turn of the Tide

loved it!

Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: Stubbornly_appeared
Date: 11/15/07 0:18
Chapter: Chapter 40: The Turn of the Tide

-After rereading, Stubby gently wipes a 'tear' from her eye. The screen glows gently.-


Stubby (choked-up): Well done, well done! Brava!

Author's Response: *bows* Thanks!

Reviewer: Stubbornly_appeared
Date: 11/15/07 0:09
Chapter: Chapter 40: The Turn of the Tide

Awww!!!! I sound like an idiot, with my drawn out words and excessive punctuation, but it's true!

You once again played up the marvelous storytelling device of Legillimency. Umbridge- she nasty! Who'da thunk it?

Harry finally realising he was in for it was good. Truth be told, I was a bit miffed my the lack of Harry 'ZOMG I'M GONNA DIE! Oh, well!- liness in this story, but this chapter made up for it. Especially the 'these last 16 years have just been a bonus' line. Ooh, and when he Vanished the postscript on his letter. So like Harry.

*is on tenterhooks*

I think I'll reread it. ;)

Author's Response: It was fun to give Umbridge's nastiness toward Trelawney a historical basis. I was going to wrap up the chapter a whole different way, but I was really pleased with the Angst Moment there. I think it worked.

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 11/14/07 19:18
Chapter: Chapter 40: The Turn of the Tide

An excellent and long chapter! An enjoyable fan fic to read :)

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: unforgivablecurse
Date: 11/09/07 22:08
Chapter: Chapter 39: Bubbles Burst

quite a nice story.......waiting for rest of it

Author's Response: Thanks..trying. I got sidetracked by an HG/DM fic that snuck up on me and demanded to be written.

Reviewer: jpkitty
Date: 11/01/07 19:43
Chapter: Chapter 39: Bubbles Burst

Is Neville alright from Harry clinging to that memory like that? Maybe he's hurt from that, and that's why he's not with them reviving Alice?

Author's Response: Oh, no. Neville's tough and Tura's really good at this stuff. But I think it was a little too traumatic for Neville to witness--what if Umbridge panicked and killed his mom, rather than reveal the spell? You know how protective those teacher types can be.

Reviewer: BlacksMisstress1179
Date: 10/26/07 12:31
Chapter: Chapter 39: Bubbles Burst

OMG. I can cot believe you used the Toad like that, but I loved it. The whole story line is absolutely fantastic.

Reviewer: ix3thehpseries
Date: 10/21/07 18:35
Chapter: Chapter 39: Bubbles Burst

Wow. just wow. I'm in shock that it was Umbrigde. I mean, I never Update as soon as you possibly can because now I want to know the rest of everything.

I just started reading this a couple days ago and its simply amazing. I love how Sirius came back and I love how everyone calls Remus 'Reem'. Sorry that was kinda random. I also love how Malfoy came to the good side. I think I like this book more than DH.

Author's Response: Awesome! I think I do too, except I haven't read DH yet.

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/18/07 9:28
Chapter: Chapter 39: Bubbles Burst

Terrific chapter!

Author's Response: :)

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