Reviewer: MWorth
Date: 05/14/08 18:12
Chapter: Chapter 48: The Boon That Is His Due

I want one!!!

Author's Response: Cool! Send me an email so I can put you on the info list.

Reviewer: Rowanhood_in_China
Date: 05/14/08 5:20
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Calm

ur kidding ryte? 'pwecious'? *gag*

Author's Response: ROFL. It's funny because it's true. ;)

Reviewer: Rowanhood_in_China
Date: 05/13/08 8:08
Chapter: Chapter 47: The Choices of Master Fawkes

... cant snape be evil for once! oh well... great job!

Author's Response: LOL! Nah, he's to pwecious to be a bad guy at heart...

Reviewer: Firoy
Date: 05/12/08 7:14
Chapter: Chapter 47: The Choices of Master Fawkes

Thank you! That was a great chapter. As they say grea minds think alike! I really liked your version of Snape and Lilys school relationship. And i love the snogging part where harry pulls out of his mind!! Lol who would want to see Snape kissing their mother!! :-) Can't wait for the next one. Im in Australia but I would love a copy of the book, I will email you and i'll pay whatever it takes!! As far as I am concerned my Harry Potter collection would not be complete without it. Do you have any plans to write a follow up story to this one? You really should, you are very talented, bring on the sequel! Hurry up with gettin the next one up I cant wait!!!! Lol ~Fi~

Author's Response: Awww... Well, if I ever write another book, it's going to be something I can actually publish--that was a lot of work! But that was a very nice compliment, thank you! Do email me, as that's the only way I can remember who wants a book--I'll be sending out the payment info once I get a final quote from the printer and figure out the shippiing weight.

Reviewer: MWorth
Date: 05/11/08 19:41
Chapter: Chapter 47: The Choices of Master Fawkes

sUCH A GREAT STORY.How humble Snape is, how caring of Harry to be able to forgive, but then love is the greatest of all power isnt it?? I an troubled by tura, but rejoice in Snape's behavior and his memories.

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, I think poor Sev got the short end of the stick in DH. I'm glad I wrote this after all. And there's still a little more to come...

Reviewer: Sesah
Date: 05/11/08 9:16
Chapter: Chapter 47: The Choices of Master Fawkes

Oh thank you so much for another chapter!!! I can't wait for this to be finished on here!

Author's Response: heh, once it's finished, though, that's kinda it...

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 05/10/08 16:10
Chapter: Chapter 47: The Choices of Master Fawkes

Great chapter!! I cannot believe there are only two more chapters left!!! Wonderful fan fic :-)

Author's Response: Thanks! Well, the confrontation with Snape was the only thing needed to finish it all off once Voldy was out of the picture.

Reviewer: Firoy
Date: 05/09/08 4:25
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Calm

I just got home after a really bad day and was hoping for another chapter???? Puhhleeaaassseee!!!! I need a smile on my face!! Lol! ~Fi~

Author's Response: Maybe this afternoon--I'm busy formatting it to have it Printed and Bound!

Reviewer: Sesah
Date: 05/09/08 2:36
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Calm

Aaaargh. You frustrate me! I took 2 whole days to read your fic, and you just leave off the end? How dare you?! =) I guess i'll just have to be patient. Even though it's not really one of my better virtues. Oh, on the poet, i didn't feel like reading through the rest of the reviews to see if anyone else had submitted it for you. Just count me in with the rest........=)

Author's Response: Heh, you're just lucky you started reading it now, not a year ago!

Reviewer: Sesah
Date: 05/09/08 0:01
Chapter: Chapter 46: Neither Can Live While The Other Survives

Noooooooooo!!!!!!!!! Don't leave me dangling!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Get them done, Quickly!! I hate being in suspense!!!!!

Author's Response: They're done, I just like to give people time to read them...

Reviewer: Sesah
Date: 05/08/08 23:37
Chapter: Chapter 45: Pro Patria Mori

The poet was Wilfred Owen for chapter 45. Hope that helps!

Author's Response: Yep--lots of people "discovered" it for me!

Reviewer: Firoy
Date: 05/08/08 20:46
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Calm

Wow, I have just finished reading all the chapters you have put up and I can't wait for the last few! Its really lovely to have a different take on book 7. I did love DH but I was really sad that it was the end of Harry, thats why I decided to start reading fan fic but I never expected a whole other version! Thanks for making my last week! Please post the new chapters soon. So Sad Tura had to die :-( Poor Harry, but at least he got Sirius back. Keep up the good work! ~Fi~

Author's Response: There's still more left to this story, too...

Reviewer: Sesah
Date: 05/08/08 19:44
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Calm

oooooooh it was Toady??? As the traitor? Why didn't i see it coming? I'm so excited!! I think i like this version better than JKR's! (Oh JKR, please forgive me for ever uttering such a thing, I promise I'll go and re-read DH as soon as i'm done with this story, just to make it up to you)

Author's Response: Eh, she'll get over it.

Reviewer: harrietamidala
Date: 05/08/08 0:45
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Calm

how many chapters to you plan on writing? I had read this story but I lost track. I'm going to wait until the story is completed so I can start over. It is a much better feeling knowing that the story has an end.

Even though I haven't read it in a long time (not even the most recent chapter) I love this story BTW, just to let you know.

Author's Response: The story is 49 chapters. All the rest are finished and have been for some time. I just had to get through the middle. Glad you like it!

Reviewer: fairiegirl
Date: 05/07/08 21:57
Chapter: Chapter 46: Neither Can Live While The Other Survives

yay i get to pat myself on the back! I still think tura's death and pointless....-.-' but thats perhaps bc I liked her.

Author's Response: Well, there's still a few more twists to this story... read on.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 05/07/08 16:26
Chapter: Chapter 46: Neither Can Live While The Other Survives

Marvelous chapter. I must be bloodthirsty. I was hoping that Voldermort died an excrutiating death. But he's toast so that's all that matters. Eileen's mother and father must be related to the Blacks or the Malfoys or even Salazar S. Aren't most pure-bloods related? I say that because most of the PB's sure knew how to fudge up the self-esteem of their children. The author has totally cleared up the issue of why Severus is so deeply maladjusted. Severus not only had to put up with his hateful Muggle father but his hateful PB grandparents as well.

Breaking Fawkes' bond was another stroke of genius.Having Fawkes save harry and Snape is great. I hope we are due for a great shift in the relationship between HP and SS.

from ch 37
Peredhil may refer to one of the Half-Elven brothers, Elrond or Elros so for Harry to skim his mind and come up with half-blood was very neat.
Love this story. There seems to be a repeating thread. The Bad Boys and Girls of Heirs still have some source of light within them. Unlike Voldermort who was just bad to the bone.

Another great chapter ending. I feel bad for Fawkes. I hope he gets a chance to rest.

Author's Response: I think everyone has the potential for light and dark--so I try to bring out a little of each in everyone. Peredhil--that's exactly what the word means and who it refers to, good work! The Silmarillion crossover aspects of this story are my favorite part.

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 05/07/08 15:37
Chapter: Chapter 46: Neither Can Live While The Other Survives

Oooo Fantastic chapter!!! I love how fast the updates are coming!! It makes me very happy and excited ;-)

Author's Response: I told you guys the rest of the book was done...just some of those middle chapters were killing me.

Reviewer: Sesah
Date: 05/07/08 13:01
Chapter: Chapter 26: The Pureblood's Tale, Part 1

ok, I'm at aloss here. I desperately want to see this chapter art, but i can't find it!! I can't find the dean's corner, and the searches and google just aren't helping. AAAAARRRRGGGH. There. Frustration vented. WOuld you mind putting in the link to the art, or at least giving me detailed instuctions how to get to it? Thank you so much! Great story by the way! This is fascinating!

Author's Response: hmmm...you might have to be a member of the fanfic forums iin order to view the Dean's Corner thread. I think the easiest way might be to go to Photobucket.com and look in my album. I think it will let you do that. My member name there is Flibby, and then you'll want to look under the sub-album "Heirs of Slytherin".

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 05/07/08 8:28
Chapter: Chapter 45: Pro Patria Mori

original writer was Horace
modern writer was Wilfred Owen

Not what I envisioned for Harry's meeting with Voldemort.. Almost campy. I suppose Tura had to die but then why the reference to Harry's seed? Voldemort playing little mind games with someone he hates and who has beaten him before. Less than stellar.

Back when Tura mentioned her angel and how she had the job he had wanted for years, I felt it was Snape. Now I'm sure but somehow I must have missed something in a prior chapter. I did like the feel of the mental skirmishes. No offense to anyone but I have always felt that the Harry of JKR was too weak, too magically ignorant to be a real champion. Your Harry seems more like a mixture of James and Sirius, magically powerful, physically powerful and.way less childish. Love him. I'm hoping that all the people who were spoken of as dead was just blustering on the part of the enemy. But......

Author's Response: *pouts* Well, I suppose ya can't be on target every time. I've never really liked canon Voldy--Tom Riddle was scary and complex, but modern Voldy was boringly stereotypical to me. Standard hockey-mask-wearing-axe-murderer type. rnrnTura: You didn't miss anything in an earlier chapter--but a lot more will be coming up soon.rnrnHarry: I think with good influences like Siri, Lupin, and of course the rest of the Trio, Harry could grow into a pretty cool guy. The slacker Harry of canon always rubbed me the wrong way too.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 05/06/08 11:35
Chapter: Chapter 43A: The Battle of Many Armies, Part 1

Great chapter.

FYI Before you go paperback. I spotted a few typos in the preceeding chapters.

Author's Response: Yeah, one of the reasons it's taking so long to paginate is that I'm also proofreading it--typos, grammar, AND story continuity. I think/hope the final copy will be 99.99% correct--100% is too much to hope for.

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