I absolutely loved it. I liked how you put the characters together in that situation, and how you characterized each and every one of them. You usually don't see a Peeves POV fic, and I was blissfully delighted.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm really glad that you enjoyed this story. It was a lot of work but it was worth it.
Wow. The part about the Baron confused me a little, but I think I've figured out what you were talking about (he left the maze with the girl, right?). Anyway... Peeves seemed a little ooc from the beginning, but I suppose part of that can be called character developement. I would have made Luna a year or two older, though, so that this isn't set in Harry's fifth year, because we know that in his sixth year, Peeves hasn't changed or anything. Anyway.... good story, I really enjoyed it!
Author's Response: Yeah, I think that the Baron part confused a lot of people, but he did leave the maze and he pretty much forfeited his right to win. I was trying to develop Peeves in a different way, because I don't believe anyone is pure evil. I know that Peeves doesn't change in the books because this had a bit of AU in it. Thanks for the lovely reviews!
Okay.... I'm confused... How can you hold a ghost captive? Why couldn't she just float out the door? How can a ghost be hurt? I mean, they're dead, right? But anyway... this story is definately interesting and well written and has got me hooked.
Author's Response: I'm sorry you were confused, but I'm glad you liked the story. I think that he put up enchantments so that she couldn't leave, and his torture may have been more mental than physical.
I have to say that I really enjoyed your story. :) I think that having Peeves learn anything about what it is like to be alive is a very interesting concept. Having him get a strong connection with Luna is even more fun. Sometimes the best prize isn't an object, but something else. You definitely showed that in this story!
Author's Response: Thanks. I know this was a long story and I'm glad that you took the time to read it. There is a new Gauntlet starting soon and you should try it, I think you would be good at it. It is so much fun, but it is a lot of work. I'm glad you liked the Peeves and Luna thing. It was a little odd, but fun to write.
I have to say that this competition has me intrigued. Already, Peeves has helped two people, even if he couldn't save Firenze. He even got Snape to work with him. I figure that they all have to work together to get out. It is a very interesting concept, and fun to see such a varied group of people work together. I look forward to see what you have Luna be good at. :)
Author's Response: Cheshlin! I cannot say how much I adore you. You have reviewed all of my stories and I am eternally greatful. I am glad that you like this story. It turned out reather long but there are twists and turns the whole way. As for Peeves, he may turn out to be different than what meets the eye. I just posted the 2nd chapter which will have a lot of Luna. Hope you like that one as well!