Reviews For The Spare
Reviewer: SilentSempra
Date: 07/02/06 17:45
Chapter: One-Shot

That's so sad! It's an original idea- what was Cedric thinking as just 'the spare'? I loved the creativity and the first-person narration. Quite clever.

Reviewer: PadfootBaby
Date: 06/16/06 14:32
Chapter: One-Shot

That was really good!!!!! I loved Cedric, he was one of my favorite characters, and the way you portray his feelings and thoughts is just amazing. The afterlife thing was pretty cool too, I don't know if I'd have enough imagination to put that together. 10/10!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: sunshine
Date: 06/14/06 21:45
Chapter: One-Shot

wow...wow. Powerful and awesome are two of the words that come to mind. 10/10

Author's Response: Well, I can't deny that those are two words an author likes to hear. Thank you very much!

Reviewer: Khrys
Date: 06/14/06 15:09
Chapter: One-Shot

Wow! Simply, Wow. This was beautiful. Heartbreaking at the end. I really liked Cedric's point of view.

Author's Response: Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: HermioneTonks
Date: 06/14/06 13:58
Chapter: One-Shot

wowowowowowowowow!!!!!!!! i like it! i really like how you ended it! its great! I would have written cedric differently, though. I would have made him a bit more modest and noble, like he is in the book. but other than that, its good!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. As for modesty and nobility, it comes in many different forms. Just because Cedric had to fight with himself before allowing Harry to take the Cup, doesn't mean that the final result wasn't noble. He's a human being too, and the beauty of it is he overcame his humanity to do the right thing. Thanks for the review!

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