I liked you poem. I was wondering if you had time to explain the last stanza a little bit. When you say the power they have is not love you took me by surprise, which is what sets this poem apart. Without the closing lines I don't think the poem would stand out for me. Do you mind explaining a bit more about what you meant?
I liked your poem, but for some reason it reminded me oof something, but I don't know what.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Hope you remembered what it was it reminded you of!
Very nice!! I liked it a lot!
Author's Response: Thanks, Jenn.
Good poem. I really liked it.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Kitkat.