Reviews For '~'Unaffected'~'
Reviewer: thisbe gwydion
Date: 12/17/04 2:04
Chapter: Thoughts into Actions

well... erm... first i'd never EVER see james falling for snape and the fact that he married lily means he loved her with all of his heart or he wouldn't have married her. however, i thought this fic... i thought the relationship was too easy. it seemed like james didn't think one second about it... and their secret was brought out so quickly (i know its just a one shot so... yeah) but... i dont know. it was written very well, the emotion and description was great. i just dont like the plot is all.

Author's Response: well..i had this sequelly type thing typed up..but what happened was yes James liked Lily..but he was semi-forced into loving her by his parents. THey were major homophobic. So in Snape's mind James kind of betrayed him.

Reviewer: Makenna Prongs
Date: 12/11/04 16:34
Chapter: Thoughts into Actions

wow......that is a very deep story, i hope u write more......i'm speechless right now and don't know what 2 say....this story was excellent.....i'm not that into romance but this was exeptional.......(read and reveiw my fics 2 if u want.....(they're not that good yet.)....)*sniffles*

Author's Response: I will definitely read your stories when I get the time. I am so glad you enjoyed this. My friend and I were going to write a sequel to this in which Harry finds out the truth about Snape and James but it kinda didn't happen. LIke it was gonna alternate between Harry's pov and Snape's but yeah. Taylor Hanson was the new DADA teacher. It was amusing. I was gonna cut that part out and post the chapter from Snape's POV (its was definitely long enough) Perhaps I will. I think you'd like it. If I don't post it, I can always email it to you.

Reviewer: Agatha Chubb
Date: 12/10/04 16:57
Chapter: Thoughts into Actions

I read anouther Fic before that and it had the same song. It was kinda freaky. It is a great song and it goes with the fic.

Reviewer: Agatha Chubb
Date: 12/10/04 16:51
Chapter: Thoughts into Actions

I read anouther Fic before that and it had the same song. It was kinda freaky. It is a great song and it goes with the fic.

Author's Response: I can't believe people liked it so much. I'm so excited that it was given 5 stars. I am so happy.

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