Reviews For '~'Unaffected'~'
Reviewer: svaught
Date: 05/08/10 22:03
Chapter: Thoughts into Actions

This story works for so many reasons! The psychological stress that Severus endures at the end ties everything together! The pairing was unique, but it worked nicely! The scene in the gamekeeper's scene was particularly interesting. I don't usually enjoy those kind of scenes while reading a fic, but something about just clicked in my mind. (However, it is probably unlikely that the boys would go to sleep after the encounter between Severus's mouth and James's body. Don't you think James would have returned the favor? Just a note) A wonderful, wonderful fic! Keep up the great work!

Reviewer: A H
Date: 12/20/07 14:02
Chapter: Reflections

That was brilliant... the scene in (not yet) Hagrid's hut was quite graphic, and I normaly don't like to read HP FFs that have sex scenes but I have to say that the way you... Well I'd like to say delicatley danced around anythin' to graphic, but it'd be a blantant lie. :)However, the concept of Severus and James, and your writing style was far to appealing to just click away; I must say I made the right choice.

I do hope this isn't the end, and my better guess would be that it isn't, considering the chapter ended quite abrubtly. I look forward to reading any interactions between Harry and Sev, and in paticular between the new American singing sensation ;D

This is a fantastic story, and I very much look forward to reading the next installment.

Reviewer: Sick_Angel
Date: 12/14/06 14:25
Chapter: Reflections

Great chapter, please update!

Reviewer: Sick_Angel
Date: 12/14/06 13:58
Chapter: Thoughts into Actions

What the -?
James and Severus?
...(All in all, wonderful. This is the best slash I ever saw in my entire life.)

Reviewer: aurora_2582
Date: 10/26/06 9:09
Chapter: Thoughts into Actions

Shocking, but understandable. What made you think of James and Snape? What about Harry and Draco? that could be fun.

Reviewer: 4evayours
Date: 10/06/06 3:37
Chapter: Reflections

oh wow. so sad! james, the idiot. who wants a woman when u can have severus snape anyway?

Reviewer: 4evayours
Date: 10/06/06 3:24
Chapter: Thoughts into Actions

omg how sad!!! sirius u stupid head! omg i cried!!

Reviewer: maddysl
Date: 09/14/06 14:57
Chapter: Reflections

AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i want more

Reviewer: Teelium
Date: 07/28/06 9:18
Chapter: Reflections

This is a very unusual story.I don't understand it at all.

Reviewer: AmericanMerlin
Date: 07/27/06 17:56
Chapter: Reflections

Uhmm - not to be a "git" myself - but this seems to have been on the way to being a very good story. If it ends here, then I believe you have missed a very good chance to explain the anomosity Snape has for Harry. This couls also explain why Snape would lay down his life for his ex-lover's son.

Reviewer: grim reaper
Date: 07/18/06 2:26
Chapter: Reflections

Should I be worried?

Reviewer: grim reaper
Date: 07/18/06 2:16
Chapter: Thoughts into Actions

What an unlikely couple, and totally gross!

Reviewer: MrsDracoMalfoy001
Date: 06/19/06 19:54
Chapter: Reflections

this is good !! keep updating

Reviewer: MrsDracoMalfoy001
Date: 06/19/06 19:24
Chapter: Thoughts into Actions

this is good but at the one part i got MENTAL pictures!!! and not good ones either!! i like this story keep going!!!

Reviewer: Melinda_B
Date: 06/09/06 16:19
Chapter: Thoughts into Actions

it was good. im not really a big fan of boy/boy relationships, but this was a great story, good job. :-)

Reviewer: Siriuslyinluvwithharry
Date: 05/20/06 13:31
Chapter: Reflections

wow...i never would have thought james and severus would get together. i really liked this story though. it wasnt your average harry potter fanfic. 10/10

Reviewer: Vaelaria
Date: 05/13/06 23:50
Chapter: Thoughts into Actions

A fabulous portrayl of a passionate but doomed homosexual love affair.

Reviewer: Makenna Prongs
Date: 02/23/05 19:15
Chapter: Reflections

^_^ lol....did I mention I love ur fanfics??

Author's Response: yes you have..I will definitely contact you when new stories/chapters are up.

Reviewer: Makenna Prongs
Date: 02/23/05 19:14
Chapter: Reflections

Wow.....I'm really doesn't seem must have been really painful for Severus to watch.....I don't like James that much the way, a lot of my guy friends are gay, and I know them really well and they're great's too bad James was afraid of being accepted....This fanfic could explain why Severus was so bitter.....and his hate toward Harry Potter.....this was really good, but I'm mad that you ended it....And I had no idea you had a sequel until judt a few minutes ago....If you have a new story or chapter or something....u can just contact me and tell me if you want....Anyway...this fanfic was beautiful......=P

Author's Response: OMG! You totally got what I was trying to portray. I was going for an explanation of why Severus was so bitter and why he despises Harry so much!

Reviewer: deatheaterbabe
Date: 01/01/05 16:21
Chapter: Thoughts into Actions

WOW! I thought it was really good. Very unlikley but very good. Please review my story Hogwarts Runaway, same catagory.THanx a lot! keep writing!! ;) 10

Author's Response: thanks for the review. Did you read the second part (called Reflections)

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