Reviewer: The_Dork_Lord
Date: 01/11/07 18:19
Chapter: Four More Days

can't wait to read the next chapters,
love the story though!!!!

Author's Response: lol...thank you're sign on name, by the

Reviewer: GW is my Love
Date: 01/06/07 23:08
Chapter: Entrapment

this is absolutely amazing. you seem to have researched JKR's writing so well! i love it.

Author's Response: Thanks! The research actually takes almost as much time as the

Reviewer: felicitas
Date: 01/06/07 17:39
Chapter: Entrapment

Nice spin!!! I really believe that Snape will actually come around good but in your story, I donīt know... There are some spells that prevents the effects of the Veritaserum, so... Snape couldīve done something before waking up Harry... Itīs difficult to say!!! And poor Hermione by the way...

Author's Response: More proof on Veritaserum's effects to come....

Reviewer: felicitas
Date: 01/06/07 16:50
Chapter: Lost and Not Yet Found

Ok, wasnīt Kreacher in Hogwarts? When did Harry sent him to the Blackīs house? Other than that, the whole thing seems pretty possible to me. Nice job.

Author's Response: Wait...what? Did I make a mistake?.....very probable...sorry! Ill check into it..

Reviewer: Phoenixis
Date: 01/06/07 6:44
Chapter: Entrapment

This is a lovely story. One of the best if not the best I have read here. This cliffhanger is killing me. I really hope the next chapter goes up soon. I also hope that stops acting like a jerk and resumes his relationships with Ginny. This chapter gives the indication that Snape actually is good. Most the seventh year fics which depict Snape as good normally give hints in the beginning. This one didn't and I find to my surprise that I actually like the subtle change. I really hope the next chapter goes up soon.

Aaaaaaaargh!!!! The cliffhanger is surely killing me.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I'm really glad you're enjoying it...more to come...

Reviewer: smiley10792
Date: 01/03/07 14:52
Chapter: Entrapment

Ahhh! Snape is so confusing... Nice job, and I hope to hear more.

Author's Response: Thank you so's coming....

Reviewer: abbs866
Date: 01/03/07 9:42
Chapter: Entrapment

AHHHHHHHHH!!!! I am so freakishly shocked, I was expecting him to make Harry drink the last bit! OMG OMG OMG!!!!

Whew, okay. Great chapter, and it makes me think that Snape really is good. Update soon please, I love this story!

Author's Response: Oh! I'm so happy you liked it! thank you so much for the review! I will update soon!

Reviewer: Thespidermanblanket
Date: 01/02/07 21:48
Chapter: Entrapment

nooooooo! the cliffhanger fairy must hate me! all though my R/HR side came out when hermione said "yes" I hate that she was defouled in such a way but.....


Author's Response: I know...horrible...yet entertaining right? Poor Hermione, I'm afraid to say that she gets a fair ammount of abuse over the next chapters....ah well.....

Reviewer: dreamer478
Date: 01/02/07 20:59
Chapter: Entrapment

i think he's good...confusing but good. really good chapter. i liked the little falshes of conversations harry could hear. i alos liked the awkardness of harry and ginny's realtionship. it's almost exactly what i imagine they'd be like after the sixth book. keep going!

Author's Response: Thank you so much...exactly what I'm going for! I'm not a big fan of the "just rush right back into the relationship" fics for Harry and Ginny....I think it will take more time...not too much more time though!

Reviewer: Emma4Irish
Date: 01/01/07 18:13
Chapter: Entrapment

I really like this so far! I want more! and as for Snape... goo... no bad.. no... I don't know- hopefully you do!

Author's Response: Ha ha! I do...isn't it lucky!

Reviewer: KJ_bookworm
Date: 12/31/06 0:36
Chapter: Entrapment

What a cliffhanger. I read this chapter for the first time this morning and have read it about four times since then. I defiantly think that Snape is trying to help Harry but he is still not being very nice.
*sigh* However fast you update could not possibly be fast enough. Please update soon!

Author's Response: No, he isn't ever very nice, is he? Oh well...poor Harry!

Reviewer: GinnyPottergirl
Date: 12/30/06 20:05
Chapter: Entrapment

I'm hoping that part at the end means he's good.
Where are they? What does Snape want?
I'm still very confused about the Trocair Charm!

Author's Response: Ohh...good question, and it won't be answered soon...but what does Snape want? Excellent line of thinking, Harry should be thinking that as well.... As for where they are...Snape's house! I took that description very carefully from HBP, but I never directly mentioned in in this story. Trocair Charm....still confused? Really? Well, it will soon all be explained...just remember the submission catagory and what you're all hoping is going to happen soon! *wink*

Reviewer: caseyleebee
Date: 12/30/06 18:32
Chapter: Entrapment

its really good! but the whole dream over the trocair charm is a bit confusing... i couldn't tell whether that actually happened and Harry was rembering it in a dream or if it was solely a dream! but great job!

Author's Response: It did really happen...Harry was remembering bits of conversation that was happening while he was in the coma...and it really does happen in reality as well. While in coma's (or near death experiences) many patients report being able to hear the voices of the health care workers. My beta reader reported personal knowledge to that effect, and something similar happened to me as well. It's actually quite annoying...being able to hear but not respond or move. As I recall, I was mostly angered by it.... Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: pammiez_x3
Date: 12/30/06 11:03
Chapter: Entrapment

awesome chapter!!!!! loved how u turned snape from bad to good!! update soon!!

Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, he will always feel evil, won't he...but who knows, he may still have a use...

Reviewer: Ginny Guerra
Date: 12/30/06 9:20
Chapter: Entrapment

Snape is, probably, the foulest creature in the whole Potterverse. I couldn't hate him more. The funny part of it is that he has his own agenda besides that of Voldemort or The Order. Let's wait and see.
Nice chapter!

Author's Response: His own agenda, eh? Hmmmm...I agree and then partly I don't...because if he truly is spying for Voldemort, there is a great deal of risk involved for that securityhe is gaining...and something made him switch sides originally... Do you really think it was fear of getting caught, or fear of Voldemort's downfall (which no one saw coming)? I don't know....

Reviewer: Akhenaten
Date: 12/30/06 4:32
Chapter: Entrapment

Good or bad...hmmmmm. Skillfully written to make us ponder just that question. Veritaserum? Possibly, in which case I would say Snape is good. Well, most likelt doesn't make sense for him to drink Veritaserum if he's bad...Harry: "Are you evil?" Snape: "Yes". For all intents and purposes, it appears as though it was Snape's excessive use. He made such a point of pointing out to Umbridge that only 3 drops were necessary, why would he then use so much? That implies he used something else on Hermione, maybe an Imperius curse. But if that's the case, why does he WANT Harry to believe he's good, for that is the only possibility I can think of....well....I'm going to go and TRY to fall asleep, probably won't, thanks to you. Well done.

Author's Response: LOL! I see the wheels turning, thought process caught in writing right here at Mugglenet Fanfiction! I see your point, and he did take alot of the Veritaserum, I think he was defeated when he swallowed it, and so didn't care how much he took, he just threw back the lot of it... As for how much Hermione took, well, there are lasting side effects - you'll see in the next chapter...

Reviewer: Sun
Date: 12/30/06 2:38
Chapter: Entrapment

I just read all 8 chapters in one go and I really liked it! Please update soon!!!

Author's Response: Oh! Thank you so much, I will update soon!

Reviewer: DracoLuva4684
Date: 12/29/06 23:43
Chapter: Entrapment

That was a veeeeeeeeery unexpected ending!
Ooohhh! I need to read more!
I was so convinced Snape was bad, but now I really don't know what to think!
Please update soon!
I need to know what happens!
Yet another increadible chapter!
Keep up the good work!

PS- When are Harry and Ginny getting back together??

Author's Response: Oh, DracoLuva4684! Hold on, the moment will come! (very, very soon...) Thank you so much for the review!

Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream
Date: 12/29/06 23:42
Chapter: Entrapment

Well, "good" certainly isn't an adjective I'd use to describe Snape. That said, he still could be working against Tom, and there appears to be some evidence that this is the case.

Author's Response: Very well put; I stand corrected. No, not "good." We shall say: working against Tom, I agree.

Reviewer: dancergirl117
Date: 12/29/06 21:32
Chapter: Entrapment


I was not expecting that at ALL. Holy. Crap. I'm just totally speechless right now. Literally. This chapter was incredible. I love the tension between Harry and Ginny. It's so real and you can definitely tell that they're still in love.

Oh dear Lord, you need to update again soon because I don't know how much longer I'll be able to wait for the next chapter. Don't worry, though, I'm too far into the story to stop now ;)


Author's Response: LOL! I'm so glad you liked it! Don't worry the next chapter is done and will be submitted...probably as soon as they open queue... After that, we will get a cliffie break... Thank you so much for the reviews! I really appreciate it!

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