Reviewer: amsies360
Date: 01/20/07 0:25
Chapter: If Truth be Told

this was absolutely awsom, Fred and George's scenes were my favorite part!!!!! keep up the good work.

Author's Response: I do love them...always good for some comic relief..breaks up all the serious stuff! Thanks!

Reviewer: moody s friend
Date: 01/19/07 23:31
Chapter: If Truth be Told

Great story.I like the way you are writing and I think that your characters are pretty close to JK'mind.Keep writing and I am waiting for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks so much...i will...i hope! this block better break soon!

Reviewer: FollowtheButterflies
Date: 01/19/07 23:27
Chapter: If Truth be Told

I love this story.
Its so canon and happy!
Go you! Kudos.

Author's Response: LOL...thanks! what's ISH?

Reviewer: Phoenixis
Date: 01/19/07 6:44
Chapter: If Truth be Told

Aaaargh!!!! Another cliffie! You do like to keep us on th edge of our seats, don't you?

Snape is still on the Order's side, somehing I was quite certain of since the last chapter. And Harry finally sees sense. I could dance for joy. But won't as it would make my mother think that I'm mad. I hope you can get the next chapter up soon. I'm really looking forward to it.

Author's Response: awww...but this cliffie isn't too bad, is it??? I tried to give somewhat of a break...after that last one (which, I agree, was mean)...sorry! thanks for teh review though!

Author's Response: awww...but this cliffie isn't too bad, is it??? I tried to give somewhat of a break...after that last one (which, I agree, was mean)...sorry! thanks for the review though!

Reviewer: Nutters4Potter
Date: 01/19/07 1:14
Chapter: If Truth be Told

I enjoyed reading your story.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: insanitea
Date: 01/18/07 20:03
Chapter: If Truth be Told

the awkward conversations are true to the characters.. good job

Author's Response: one of my favorite things to write!

Reviewer: erinsmommy1999
Date: 01/18/07 19:10
Chapter: If Truth be Told


Seriously, great chappie!

Author's Response:'s not that bad!! is it? ah well...i tried to give you a

Reviewer: snowfishcat
Date: 01/18/07 18:12
Chapter: If Truth be Told

Another great chapter... well worth the wait! Thanks for not having Harry and Ginny immediately jump right back into a relationship. It's also great to read stories that say Snape was acting under Dumbledore's orders. I strongly feel that's how it's going to play out in the real deal. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Yeah...I mean that would explain that convo Hagrid over heard btw Dumbledore and Snape from HBP, wouldn't it?? I always thought so!

Reviewer: dancergirl117
Date: 01/18/07 18:10
Chapter: If Truth be Told

Argh. Another cliffie. I've said it once and I'll say it again... you're terribly good at writing cliffhangers. I was so happy that Harry and Ginny got back together. This was a great chapter. I'm totally in shock about everything that happened with Snape, but it definitely makes sense. It can definitely become true. Great chapter, m'dear! Can't wait for the next *hint hint* heh ;]


Author's Response: So says my beta reader as well...bless her.....I'm glad you liked it! thank you so much for the review!

Reviewer: insanitea
Date: 01/18/07 17:12
Chapter: Four More Days

great for a first-ever fic!

Author's Response: thanks!

Reviewer: writa_sista
Date: 01/18/07 16:54
Chapter: If Truth be Told

OMG!!!!! Is he going to ask her to marry him!!!??? Probably not, they are way to young....but you never know!!! Anywho your story is really good!!! I even have it on my favorites list!!! The only thing I can think of for you to improve is to be more descriptive...other then that PERFECT!!!

Author's Response: Oh! You're scaring poor Harry!!! Marriage?!? Ah! Ok, so more description you say...alright...I'll see what I can do! Thanks for the input, you have no idea how helpful it can be for an ametuer writer! Thanks again!

Reviewer: Katie Potter
Date: 01/18/07 15:52
Chapter: If Truth be Told

yayyyyy they are back together!!!!!!!!!!! Finally :) update soon please! i wanna see what he has to ask her :) :) :)

Author's Response: lol...ok...soon!

Reviewer: pammiez_x3
Date: 01/18/07 13:49
Chapter: If Truth be Told

great chapter! i agree with your snape theory- the whole dumbledore told him to thing. i also agree with harry, the mark snape gave him is just a little too familiar...

Author's Response: it is familiar...isn't it? But, Harry needs to have fast access to Snape if he needs it...and something that can't be taken from him (like a portkey) So....something etched into his skin is the safest for Harry though...

Reviewer: MankyOldBoot
Date: 01/18/07 12:59
Chapter: If Truth be Told

I'm enjoying this very much - keep up the good work.
Re: Trocair charm - while the reader has a vague idea how it works as a protection charm that is as strong as the love for charm caster feels for the bearer, a bit more clarity might have helped.

Author's Response: Thank you! As for the charm...i was going for more of a subtlety being Hary's greatest power/protection...though Ginny's charm may not defeat Voldemort in and of certainly helped Harry recover from the damage of the first Horcrux.

Reviewer: Durga
Date: 01/18/07 10:17
Chapter: If Truth be Told

This is an excellent story, I just finished reading the chapters you have posted. Keep it up!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I will....

Reviewer: Diffindo730
Date: 01/18/07 8:34
Chapter: If Truth be Told

I'm proud to be the first person to read this chapter, as I've been waiting and waiting for it, and I was NOT disappointed in the least! I'm so glad Harry and Ginny got back together!!! Great chapter, I'm proud to be your friend :)

Call me soon

Author's Response: SO glad you weren't disappointed!!! Yeah! Thanks!

Reviewer: snowfishcat
Date: 01/16/07 13:00
Chapter: Entrapment

Alright, alright! Update please! Just stumbled across your story and can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Glad to stumbled by it! thanks for stopping by and reading!

Reviewer: XhayleeXblackX
Date: 01/13/07 20:52
Chapter: Entrapment

Oh, my gosh, that was such a great story! I love the cliffhangers that you used. Esecially the last one: Snape: good or evil. Don't we all wonder about that? And Ron and Hermione; you've done that perfectly. Ginny and Harry also. I just hope that Ron, GInny and the rest of the Weaslys are okay. I can't wait till the update. Keep on writing this amasing story, you really are a wonderful writer.

Author's Response: oooohh...thanks...i try not to have my cliffhangers I'm glad you approve! And, the characterizations are what I work hardest on! thank you so much!

Reviewer: The_Dork_Lord
Date: 01/12/07 17:25
Chapter: Entrapment

please update soon, the suspence is killing me!!! I can't wait to see what happens!!!!!!

Author's Response: soon...i know, i'm a bad author....

Reviewer: The_Dork_Lord
Date: 01/11/07 18:29
Chapter: The Last Time


1." love the story.

2.) very good

3.) totally AWESOME!


Author's Response: lol...Thanks!

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