Cute ! :)
no ofense but not very good
Boy who lived bedtime stories, hmmm why didn't anyone ever think about that? brilliant, u just gave me a new reason y ginny loved harry potter before she met him
not bad overall, pretty fluffy and a nice way to hook them up, but the grammar is pretty bad, people would never talk like tht so it was a little bit of an awkward read
I'm glad it's not another story where Mrs. Weasley didn't get mad at them. I like this story.
nice but a bit short
this is a good and funny chapter I wish chapter one would let me read it. Lol then i would know exactly what was going on!
It won't let me read it but it looks like a good story!
Why can't I read it? *sadface*
I can't read the first chapter for some reason, but the seond one was good.
i can't get to your first chapter :(
.... what "sexual situations" does this have? It's too too cliche.. and predictable. some twists?.. to make it not so average.
I really like this chapter (although I didn't get to read the first one because it wouldn't let me) is this going to be continued?
for some reason it won't let me read it. it looks good though
lovely story...real sweet!
OMG PLEASE WRITE MORE!! B.U.M.P!!
Author's Response: I should be posting the next chapter within the next 3 days!
omg!! thats amazing! pls keep it going! plsplsplsplspls I LOVED IT!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I have just submitted my second chapter!
aw that was so sweet... i liked it a lot more than i expected!!! great job writing and ill be looking for more soon!!!
Author's Response: thank you for the great review!
Author's Response: I am trying my hardest to finish chapter 2. It has been rejected twice and I am having a bit of writers block!
loved it!!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE write another story!!!!!
Author's Response: I have just submitted another story called "Perfect". It is a cute little one-shot. It is Ron/Hermione.