Reviewer: goddess of light
Date: 09/02/08 20:19
Chapter: Light In The Distance

Moving, and written remarkably well.

Reviewer: Dakkauna
Date: 11/01/06 19:33
Chapter: Light In The Distance

This story is amazing. You have found the perfect balance between angst, humor and humanism. It was wonderful to read. Thank you for posting it.

Reviewer: Vorona
Date: 07/03/06 20:02
Chapter: Light In The Distance

Ooh, very, very lovely. Congratulations!

Reviewer: Her My Own EE
Date: 06/27/06 6:44
Chapter: Light In The Distance

That was beautiful & well written. Great job!

Reviewer: pandafan81
Date: 06/19/06 3:34
Chapter: Light In The Distance

OH! Bravo Liz! This was an excellent fic. I know the gauntlet and several of the clues were given to you, but it was hard to find where the prompt ended and your imagination started. The fic flowed very nicely!

I was in tears from these words:
He didnt know what he wanted; he only wanted to get rid of the empty, burning feeling somewhere deep in his chest. It wouldnt go away.
Your characterization and description of the emotions Seamus was going through was excellent.

The only promblem I found, was Dean's mum was a Muggle. His father was a wizard but never told his wife. There's a little background info on Dean on jkrowling.com so obviously Dean's mum wouldn't have a magical plant.

But everything else fit into place so nicely! Excellent work girl! Go Hufflepuff!

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