Reviews For Amoretti
Reviewer: Seer_Witch
Date: 06/23/08 20:25
Chapter: Amoretti

That was cute ^-^ Sirius wearing his robes did annoy me, though. For some unknown reason >.< You're a great writer, though!

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 01/28/08 19:58
Chapter: Amoretti

lol that was good!

Reviewer: Nymphea
Date: 08/26/07 18:03
Chapter: Amoretti

made me smile--very nice. Not quite how I imagine James, but still well-written.

Reviewer: Tweak
Date: 08/02/07 5:44
Chapter: Amoretti

lol, that was really good!

Reviewer: little_kiwi
Date: 04/11/07 5:05
Chapter: Amoretti

Beautiful!

Reviewer: AliKt716
Date: 02/24/07 17:40
Chapter: Amoretti

Cute, but it doesn't really go anywhere from here? I liked the writing and I only found one mistake. In the very first paragraph you used ellipses. You only have three, but because of the fact that its the end of a sentence you should have used four. Otherwise, it was great.

Reviewer: 2SiriusB
Date: 09/01/06 19:02
Chapter: Amoretti

Short....Simple......Sweet.....all fun-loving! Amazing job!

Reviewer: brokenhearted
Date: 06/22/06 21:08
Chapter: Amoretti

Hey, that was pretty good. I always like stories from James' POV.

Reviewer: PadfootBaby
Date: 06/21/06 17:16
Chapter: Amoretti

That was so sweet! I'm adding this to my favorites, it's very cute. James's thoughts were so funny, yet so realistic! You made me laugh a lot!! :) I wasn't expecting the Sirius twist at all, but then I didn't expect this fic to be so good either. Very good job!!!!!!! :)

Reviewer: Terry Boot
Date: 06/15/06 23:18
Chapter: Amoretti

awww, that was soooo cute! i love what was going thru James' head, it was so realistic. i LOVED it!

Reviewer: Terry Boot
Date: 06/15/06 23:14
Chapter: Amoretti

awww, that was soooo cute! i love what was going thru James' head, it was so realistic. i LOVED it!

Reviewer: Kerian
Date: 06/15/06 22:28
Chapter: Amoretti

Aww I like the way a single smile could change things. I especially liked the little touches, like "flip" and the idea that Lily was a speed reader. Cute!

Reviewer: Crazy About Dan
Date: 06/15/06 17:41
Chapter: Amoretti

An interesting begining.

Reviewer: maysiriusrestinpeace
Date: 06/15/06 16:07
Chapter: Amoretti

oh no! ur ending it? nooo this is uch a good fan fic plz plz plz make a sequal or something!! and dedicate it to me while ur at it =P jk... (well not really)

Reviewer: Bianwen
Date: 06/15/06 13:54
Chapter: Amoretti

cute! i think its cool how you had sirius play in james's place.

Reviewer: JC_Cainstone
Date: 06/15/06 12:37
Chapter: Amoretti

That was cool. I liked how it was told in first person from Jame's point of view. His comments and observations were extremely amusing. A lovely bit of fluff!

Reviewer: HermionePotter
Date: 06/15/06 9:13
Chapter: Amoretti

This was really good! I've never read anything by Spencer (that I know of at least) but maybe I should... 10/10

Reviewer: FanFicFanatic12
Date: 06/15/06 7:49
Chapter: Amoretti

So cute. I love the banter between James and Lily, and the fact that nothing huge outwardly happens. This adds to the James/Lily relationship, instead of trying to completly transform it. :0)

Reviewer: Winky
Date: 06/15/06 0:13
Chapter: Amoretti

WHY.. OH.. WHY DID IT HAVE TO END?? =P Do you think maybe you can do like a sequel or something? Cuz I love your fan fic!!

Reviewer: Khrys
Date: 06/14/06 23:43
Chapter: Amoretti

I really like this. The thoughts running through James' head are dead on. I like the 'flip' of the pages, it really accentuates the attempt at conversation and the awkward silence in the room. The ending is my favorite part! Great job.

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