That was cute ^-^ Sirius wearing his robes did annoy me, though. For some unknown reason >.< You're a great writer, though!
made me smile--very nice. Not quite how I imagine James, but still well-written.
Cute, but it doesn't really go anywhere from here? I liked the writing and I only found one mistake. In the very first paragraph you used ellipses. You only have three, but because of the fact that its the end of a sentence you should have used four. Otherwise, it was great.
Short....Simple......Sweet.....all fun-loving! Amazing job!
Hey, that was pretty good. I always like stories from James' POV.
That was so sweet! I'm adding this to my favorites, it's very cute. James's thoughts were so funny, yet so realistic! You made me laugh a lot!! :) I wasn't expecting the Sirius twist at all, but then I didn't expect this fic to be so good either. Very good job!!!!!!! :)
awww, that was soooo cute! i love what was going thru James' head, it was so realistic. i LOVED it!
awww, that was soooo cute! i love what was going thru James' head, it was so realistic. i LOVED it!
Aww I like the way a single smile could change things. I especially liked the little touches, like "flip" and the idea that Lily was a speed reader. Cute!
oh no! ur ending it? nooo this is uch a good fan fic plz plz plz make a sequal or something!! and dedicate it to me while ur at it =P jk... (well not really)
cute! i think its cool how you had sirius play in james's place.
That was cool. I liked how it was told in first person from Jame's point of view. His comments and observations were extremely amusing. A lovely bit of fluff!
This was really good! I've never read anything by Spencer (that I know of at least) but maybe I should... 10/10
So cute. I love the banter between James and Lily, and the fact that nothing huge outwardly happens. This adds to the James/Lily relationship, instead of trying to completly transform it. :0)
WHY.. OH.. WHY DID IT HAVE TO END?? =P Do you think maybe you can do like a sequel or something? Cuz I love your fan fic!!
I really like this. The thoughts running through James' head are dead on. I like the 'flip' of the pages, it really accentuates the attempt at conversation and the awkward silence in the room. The ending is my favorite part! Great job.
