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Name: HermioneGrangerfan (Signed) · Date: 03/21/09 6:32 · For: Chapter 1
really good :D


Name: Adelfore Flamell (Signed) · Date: 07/25/08 23:53 · For: Chapter 1
that was a really very enjoyable fic. Well done!


Name: Hermiones BFF (Signed) · Date: 05/10/08 14:56 · For: Chapter 1
AWWWWWW!!!! I loved it! (also nice to know that other 14 year old girls think like that)


Name: hanna_Weasley (Signed) · Date: 04/30/07 22:14 · For: Chapter 1
i luve ti!!!!


Name: crumple_horned_snorkack (Signed) · Date: 04/23/07 14:55 · For: Chapter 1
Very nice...It reminds me of what it's like to be fourteen...Hermione's confusion and discomfort is dead on, I thought. I very much enjoyed this story. =) I love Orson Scott Card, too, he's an amazing writer. I met him once, he's a very nice man.


Name: danbarn (Signed) · Date: 01/23/07 14:12 · For: Chapter 1
Very well done, one of my favorite oneshots of my favorite couple.


Name: Gryiffnclaw (Signed) · Date: 12/13/06 13:56 · For: Chapter 1
Very tastefully done!
Being older, (make that REALLY old), I some times forget that time when I was filled with many passions, longing for a thing I knew nothing about.
Your wonderful story reminds me of that time of teriffying love.....
Your Servent,
Robert


Name: Gryiffnclaw (Signed) · Date: 12/13/06 13:54 · For: Chapter 1
Very tastefully done!
Being older, (make that REALLY old), I some times forget that time when I was filled with many passions, longing for a thing I knew nothing about.
Your wonderful story reminds me of that time of teriffying love.....
Your Servent,
Robert


Name: babyjenn12 (Signed) · Date: 11/24/06 14:30 · For: Chapter 1
I wish there would be more!!!...You did a great job!


Name: brooklyn_witch108 (Signed) · Date: 10/12/06 15:58 · For: Chapter 1
really good except one little thing, the word death-eaters was introduced to harry until the 4th book.


Name: EtherealElation (Signed) · Date: 10/10/06 18:13 · For: Chapter 1
Oh! That's so cute... I loved the ending. Very poetic, very powerful end. Marvelous.

Brava!
~Juli


Name: EtherealElation (Signed) · Date: 10/10/06 18:13 · For: Chapter 1
Oh! That's so cute... I loved the ending. Very poetic, very powerful end. Marvelous.

Brava!
~Juli


Name: trouble12 (Signed) · Date: 08/28/06 14:28 · For: Chapter 1
That was such a cute story!!!


Name: molly jo 7 (Signed) · Date: 08/20/06 0:18 · For: Chapter 1
cool


Name: Amanda_Potter (Signed) · Date: 08/16/06 18:06 · For: Chapter 1
you should write more romance storys


Name: Justineisakiller (Signed) · Date: 08/13/06 16:21 · For: Chapter 1
Good. Good.


Name: LovelyMuggle (Signed) · Date: 07/15/06 21:47 · For: Chapter 1
this was an extremely sweet story. i really enjoyed reading it!


Name: Adelfore Flamell (Signed) · Date: 07/05/06 0:17 · For: Chapter 1
i loke the dream visualization at the end of the story. Very nice. I love your last quote from Card...i might have t o go find that book now. Tere is an elegance and beauty not often found in literature now adays... Well Done!!!

Author's Response: Oh yay! *claps* I've converted someone! Psst--read Ender's Game before Speaker for the Dead, it'll make more sense :) Anywho, thank you very much for the review, so glad you liked it!!!


Name: rupertrules (Signed) · Date: 07/03/06 19:23 · For: Chapter 1
cute, but some parts are slightly disturbing the way they are worded.

Author's Response: Haha, thanks, glad you think it's cute :) Disturbing how? I need to edit it for checkmated.com, so I would definitely be interested in constructive criticism!


Name: nadine29 (Signed) · Date: 07/01/06 14:22 · For: Chapter 1
interesting...u really didnt need to write that at the end..not necessary,,,but it was cute u kno..reading the thoughts of a 14 year old that aren;t mine lol..it was good


Author's Response: Thanks :) Again, I'm glad I succeeded with the 14-yr-old thoughts since it's easy to forget! To be honest, I mostly added the part at the end so people could read a bit of my favorite series! *blush*


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