Reviewer: HermioneGrangerfan
Date: 03/21/09 6:32
Chapter: Chapter 1

really good :D

Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell
Date: 07/25/08 23:53
Chapter: Chapter 1

that was a really very enjoyable fic. Well done!

Reviewer: Hermiones BFF
Date: 05/10/08 14:56
Chapter: Chapter 1

AWWWWWW!!!! I loved it! (also nice to know that other 14 year old girls think like that)

Reviewer: hanna_Weasley
Date: 04/30/07 22:14
Chapter: Chapter 1

i luve ti!!!!

Reviewer: crumple_horned_snorkack
Date: 04/23/07 14:55
Chapter: Chapter 1

Very nice...It reminds me of what it's like to be fourteen...Hermione's confusion and discomfort is dead on, I thought. I very much enjoyed this story. =) I love Orson Scott Card, too, he's an amazing writer. I met him once, he's a very nice man.

Reviewer: danbarn
Date: 01/23/07 14:12
Chapter: Chapter 1

Very well done, one of my favorite oneshots of my favorite couple.

Reviewer: Gryiffnclaw
Date: 12/13/06 13:56
Chapter: Chapter 1

Very tastefully done!
Being older, (make that REALLY old), I some times forget that time when I was filled with many passions, longing for a thing I knew nothing about.
Your wonderful story reminds me of that time of teriffying love.....
Your Servent,
Robert

Reviewer: Gryiffnclaw
Date: 12/13/06 13:54
Chapter: Chapter 1

Very tastefully done!
Being older, (make that REALLY old), I some times forget that time when I was filled with many passions, longing for a thing I knew nothing about.
Your wonderful story reminds me of that time of teriffying love.....
Your Servent,
Robert

Reviewer: babyjenn12
Date: 11/24/06 14:30
Chapter: Chapter 1

I wish there would be more!!!...You did a great job!

Reviewer: brooklyn_witch108
Date: 10/12/06 15:58
Chapter: Chapter 1

really good except one little thing, the word death-eaters was introduced to harry until the 4th book.

Reviewer: EtherealElation
Date: 10/10/06 18:13
Chapter: Chapter 1

Oh! That's so cute... I loved the ending. Very poetic, very powerful end. Marvelous.

Brava!
~Juli

Reviewer: EtherealElation
Date: 10/10/06 18:13
Chapter: Chapter 1

Oh! That's so cute... I loved the ending. Very poetic, very powerful end. Marvelous.

Brava!
~Juli

Reviewer: trouble12
Date: 08/28/06 14:28
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was such a cute story!!!

Reviewer: molly jo 7
Date: 08/20/06 0:18
Chapter: Chapter 1

cool

Reviewer: Amanda_Potter
Date: 08/16/06 18:06
Chapter: Chapter 1

you should write more romance storys

Reviewer: Justineisakiller
Date: 08/13/06 16:21
Chapter: Chapter 1

Good. Good.

Reviewer: LovelyMuggle
Date: 07/15/06 21:47
Chapter: Chapter 1

this was an extremely sweet story. i really enjoyed reading it!

Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell
Date: 07/05/06 0:17
Chapter: Chapter 1

i loke the dream visualization at the end of the story. Very nice. I love your last quote from Card...i might have t o go find that book now. Tere is an elegance and beauty not often found in literature now adays... Well Done!!!

Author's Response: Oh yay! *claps* I've converted someone! Psst--read Ender's Game before Speaker for the Dead, it'll make more sense :) Anywho, thank you very much for the review, so glad you liked it!!!

Reviewer: rupertrules
Date: 07/03/06 19:23
Chapter: Chapter 1

cute, but some parts are slightly disturbing the way they are worded.

Author's Response: Haha, thanks, glad you think it's cute :) Disturbing how? I need to edit it for checkmated.com, so I would definitely be interested in constructive criticism!

Reviewer: nadine29
Date: 07/01/06 14:22
Chapter: Chapter 1

interesting...u really didnt need to write that at the end..not necessary,,,but it was cute u kno..reading the thoughts of a 14 year old that aren;t mine lol..it was good


Author's Response: Thanks :) Again, I'm glad I succeeded with the 14-yr-old thoughts since it's easy to forget! To be honest, I mostly added the part at the end so people could read a bit of my favorite series! *blush*

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