I loved their conversation by the lake! It was so sweet and then Ron messed it all up by being an extreme jerk! Please keep this going, it's beleivable and enticing!
I like it!!
Hi! I can't wait to see how this story turns out!
I really like the story so far and can't wait to read more but the font is really distracting me from fully enjoying the story. It's a right shame that a well written story like this one has to be overshadowed by distracting font. Also, is it supposed to be chapter 1, chapter 2, not chapter 2, chapter 3?
I love Dramione's so I had to read your story. =]
I think you have a good story here; the beginning is quite well-written. It's descriptive, and you give back-story regarding Ron and Hermione. The suspense at the end was rather 'edge of your seat.'
I was rather bothered by Ron's behavior, it's almost like an obsession, is that what you were going for?
As for this chapter, Hermione seemed a tad out of character. I'm not quite sure that Hermione would beg anyone to go with her anywhere - even if she was a Prefect. She's more bossy in nature, I thinks she would have snapped at Malfoy by the lake, reprimanding him, and taken points away from his house. As for Malfoy he also seemed a tad out of character, but I like how you have him with injuries.
The shock that they both experience seems a tad rushed, but well-written.
Overall, it was really good. You're making a good job of building up the suspense, and I can't wait to read the next chapter. =]
~mugglemathdork/Knight of the Turnip Table
i can't wait for the part where draco 'returns' the roses! ^_^
this was lovely, smita. please update soonest! and please let us know how come malfoy was being so nicely chatty after his 'experience'. its good to clear up OOC-ness with an alibi, hehe. :)
Author's Response: :) hopefully that time would come soon.. i just gave in the third chapter to the mods.. keeping the fingers crossed now... i m glad u liked it so far... sit tight for the next chapters!! cheers!!
ooooo.. kinda diff fr d rest.. i dunno.. seems tht way xD lol.. n poor draco! *sob* cant wait 4 an update!!!
Author's Response: "poor draco!" u sure??? ;) loll dont count ur chickens before they hatch dear.. read the next chapter to find out!! THANKS so much for leaving a review!!
that was nice i really like it! the fact that they got along when they didn't know was cute i really liked this chapter!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: thanks for taking the time to R&R.. i got the third chapter in queue.. so u'll read something new pretty soon ;) sit tight!! thanks again for the review!!
that was a good chapter! off to the next one.......!!!!!!!!!!!!1
Author's Response: THANKS pardner!!!
Awwwwwwwwww, poor Draco! I feel so sorry for him! I can't believe that he didn't say anything back to Ron! Draco really must have suffered a lot! Tis so sad!
Wow. This story is awesome.
I can't wait till the next chapter comes out!
Ron was pretty rude. Poor Draco. =(
This is an interesting story! Please update soon.
OMG I love your story!!! post again soon!!! i wonder haw bad draco is messed up...POOR DRACO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ohhh =[ this fic is beautifully written.
ron did act very crude, and i'm very ashamed of him =/ i like how you described the conversation with draco and hermione, and them not noticing it was eachother...and yeah. i think this fic is written very nicely, and i can picture that event in the hall so clearly. =] masterpiece! thank you for writing it :]
i'm proud of draco for not answering.
[sidenote, ps?] you make it sound like ron raped hermione. if he did something even remotely like that, i will totally strangle. lol. honestly though, all respect for ron [in this fic, xD] will have vanished completely. even though it already has. if that makes sense. x]
can't wait for your next chapter!
This is a very good story so far!!!!! Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Loved It, but when are you going to update? Hopefully soon.
Wow! Amazing! I love it so much! I'm obsessed with this now! And I'm glad! But if I was Hermione I would have SO slaped Ron. Because he was rude and because I personaly hate him. Lol. Keep up the great work! Can't wait for more! Thanx
Author's Response: heyy thanks a lottt pal!! ur the best!! updating sooon!! thanks once again for taking the time to R&R
I ABSOLUTLY LOVED THAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is SO my new favorite story on this site! I love it! But I do have a few questions. Are Hermione and Ron dating now? And Ron has commen sence? Since when? Lol. Love it! Can't wait for more! Thanx 10/10
Author's Response: :D thanks sooooooo much!!!! hermione and ron are NOT dating... ron acted funny around with her, and got the whip by hermione loll :D the third chapter is in queue now.. hopefully it gets validated soon!! thanks fr the review
Again an awesome chapter. please,please hurry with more.
Author's Response: thanks so much!!!! third chapter is in queue!!