Reviews For Halloween, 1981
Reviewer: Ren Shire
Date: 06/26/08 21:29
Chapter: Halloween, 1981

wow. a story i did is sort of like this, and its in the queue yours is great!

Reviewer: harry_victoria
Date: 10/08/07 16:12
Chapter: Halloween, 1981

Great job! I noticed one little nitpicky thing here (being a beta and everything...)

“There is no reason for you for you to die. Yet. Just let me take your son, and I will let you live a little longer.” You wrote 'for you' twice.


Reviewer: princess_padfoot
Date: 08/16/07 23:00
Chapter: Halloween, 1981

This is a great fan fiction! it made me cry though, but then again, this is a very sad subject. This is pretty much how i pictured them dying too. Great job!

Reviewer: JulieRose
Date: 01/09/07 19:14
Chapter: Halloween, 1981

hm, good story but the ending seemed a little rushed

Reviewer: jjjjohn_jjohn
Date: 12/31/06 14:11
Chapter: Halloween, 1981

I didn't like it! sorry but it was cr*p

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Enjoy my other story, too :D

Reviewer: padfootnflawks
Date: 07/10/06 21:19
Chapter: Halloween, 1981

*sniff* i liked it only James was going to die no matter what....i dunno why though but thats what j.k. said.....any way evrey thing else was perfect. I liked the beganing of the story, i hope u right more!

Author's Response: Just because Voldemort says that he would spare James doesn't mean that he will.. he lies, remember?

Reviewer: Marauder Princess
Date: 06/12/06 19:08
Chapter: Halloween, 1981

I loved it....I'm sorry. It'd would have been a better review if I wasn't listenning to 'Dance,Dance'by Fall Out Boy...what was I talking about again??J?K anywway this was an AWSM story

Author's Response: Hehe, Dance Dance... Anyways, thanks for the review! So far this story has had more success than my other one :P

Reviewer: JC_Cainstone
Date: 06/11/06 14:15
Chapter: Halloween, 1981

That was so good! It was really chilling an ooh I've got goosebumps!!! You must write other fics, I'm going to go and see if you have already! This is going on my favourites!

Author's Response: Yeah, we have other stories, and the latest chapter just got in the other day. I hope you like that one as well!

Reviewer: this isnt jess
Date: 06/11/06 9:23
Chapter: Halloween, 1981

That was so sad... that's almost exactly as I had imagined it too, except for the last bit. I had never really imagined Snape there or the spell hitting Voldemort instead. Anyways, nice job.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I always wanted to write a dark story like that. I submitted that story 4+ times before I actually got a rejection email.

Reviewer: Buglecaller245
Date: 06/11/06 7:13
Chapter: Halloween, 1981

Deep! I loved it

Author's Response: Deep is one I've never heard. Thanks!

Reviewer: luvinhp
Date: 06/11/06 5:56
Chapter: Halloween, 1981

I really dont think snape would of bin jus doesn't fit...
xcept for dat....
everithin else was realli gud!!
jus how i pictured it

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I alway pictured *someone* lurking around, so I figured "Why not Snape?"

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