Reviewer: KitKat517
Date: 06/16/06 18:38
Chapter: You were never there

Great poem. I loved it. Especially the first stanza. The first stanza would be my favorite part. 10

Author's Response: Thank you, the first stanza is one of my favorites too, though it was very hard to come up with.

Reviewer: Bookwormy
Date: 06/14/06 6:34
Chapter: You were never there

I loved it. 10/10

Author's Response: Thank you much!

Reviewer: lily_evans34
Date: 06/11/06 8:34
Chapter: You were never there

Wow, that was wonderful. I think that you captured Andromeda's feelings perfectly. I loved the ryhme and flow of this. It was beautifully written!

Author's Response: Thanks, Andromeda is one of my favorite characters.

Reviewer: RiddleHatred
Date: 06/11/06 6:47
Chapter: You were never there

That's very good! My favorite lines are "Bella was the beauty quen/Cissy was the prize/I was just a rebel/You loved them all your lives'. You're a great poet!

Author's Response: Thanks, that stanza was actually the hardest one, I have at least 10 different versions of it.

Reviewer: x_lily_evans_x
Date: 06/11/06 1:41
Chapter: You were never there

it's a nice poem... go Andromeda!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

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