Your story is really good and its also sad because poor Mrs.crouch dies..I rate it 10/10
Author's Response: Wow, I'm so happy you liked it! Thanks so much Ponder!
That is really amazing because I never read a story about Mrs Crouch before.It must feel awful to be locked up in azkaban.I think you are a very good author.
Author's Response: Thank you very much Tufty. I wanted to do something different in the story and I thought Mrs Crouch was a very interesting character, one who hadn't been explored before. Thanks again for your review.
That's good. I like the poem. It's a pity Mr. Crouch's son grew up to be evil. Mrs. Crouch must have loved him very much to die like that. It was really a very curageous thing to do.
Author's Response: Thank you Gobbles. Yes, it was very sad that he grew up to be evil and even sadder that his mother loved him enough to swap places with him and then he tries to get Voldemort back again. Thanks again for your review.
That is very good. Poor Mrs. Crouch. She should have tried to escape, like Sirius did.
Author's Response: Thanks Traggles. I don't think she would have put herself in Azkaban in her sons place just to try and get out again. If she did, she would have had to keep up her sons appearance or get a whole new identity. Anyway, thanks again for leaving a review! ;)
Cool. I never gave this character much thought. But she had a story to tell, and I think you did a wonderful job telling it.
Author's Response: Thank you Sly Severus. I thought it might be good to take a small character and talk about them. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks again for reviewing!
Wow, this is brilliant, but so sad. I've read the poem before and its really clever the way you've put it in with the story. its one of the best one-shots i've read, 10/10
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing cenedra. I'm glad you liked the story and the poem too. Thanks for the 10/10, I didn't really expect people to like it that much!