Reviewer: Nordanvinden
Date: 12/06/08 18:57
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Blinding Properties of Chimney Soot and a Very Nasty Fall

Awe, I love this fic, it's so funny and well good too, of course, hehe! The plot is awesome and the character portrayal's great as well, especially Hermione and Cedric! The interaction is also great between them! And the story is also quite well written, apart from a few typos, nothing big, so don't worry!

Okay, so I noticed that it has now been quite a while since your last update and I was wondering if you've posted this wonderful fic somewhere else, like maybe fanfiction.net?!

If you would be so kind and tell me, because I simply have to read more!

Kudos on the awesome job so far!

Reviewer: loligo8me
Date: 09/23/08 5:54
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Blinding Properties of Chimney Soot and a Very Nasty Fall

I haven't seen an update in ages and I'm still hoping you'll update one day. This story is cute! So it's got a lot of AU, so what? I want more... pretty please? With sugar on top?

Reviewer: hermylovesron
Date: 07/17/07 16:48
Chapter: Chapter 10: An Account of the Ball and All Things in Occurrence There

i cant wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: goGinny_84
Date: 04/06/07 15:56
Chapter: Chapter 6: Mysterious Disappearances

Yay! But what was the bracelet Cedric and Hermione found in the cave? Was it important? That was a little unclear.

Reviewer: Lady Granger
Date: 02/18/07 14:39
Chapter: Chapter 10: An Account of the Ball and All Things in Occurrence There

Terrifical! (Yeah. That's not a word. but it should be.)

Reviewer: jaxs
Date: 01/20/07 10:17
Chapter: Chapter 10: An Account of the Ball and All Things in Occurrence There

please submit more i can't wait it's getting so good

Reviewer: jaxs
Date: 01/20/07 10:17
Chapter: Chapter 10: An Account of the Ball and All Things in Occurrence There

please submit more i can't wait it's getting so good

Reviewer: jaxs
Date: 01/20/07 10:17
Chapter: Chapter 10: An Account of the Ball and All Things in Occurrence There

please submit more i can't wait it's getting so good

Reviewer: jaxs
Date: 01/20/07 10:15
Chapter: Chapter 10: An Account of the Ball and All Things in Occurrence There

please submit more i can't wait it's getting so good

Author's Response: Lol, I promise its coming! Really! I swear! I've had some beta problems etc... but I'm certain that by the end of this month Chapter 11 will surface. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: hate_spinnerbait7
Date: 01/12/07 17:59
Chapter: Chapter 10: An Account of the Ball and All Things in Occurrence There

grr.........

Author's Response: I'm hoping that grr is because Hermione went with Viktor to the ball instead of Cedric =P. Thanks for reading and reviewing

Reviewer: nikster
Date: 12/28/06 4:51
Chapter: Chapter 10: An Account of the Ball and All Things in Occurrence There

Great chapter!
Can't wait to see what happens next!
Great fan fic so far!!
Brilliant writing!!
Cont soon!
I wonder what will happen next with Hermione and Cedric!!


Author's Response: Thanks for the review, it put a smile on my face, and I've had a rough day so thanks for that! I'm glad your so enthusiastic about the fic, and the next chapter will hopefully be up soon!

Reviewer: Ally20
Date: 12/23/06 22:11
Chapter: Chapter 9: The Intimacy Girlish Desire Brings

I love this story!

Author's Response: Lol thanks, Chapter 10 will be up in the New Year so keep reading!

Reviewer: saphiregirl
Date: 11/26/06 10:09
Chapter: Chapter 9: The Intimacy Girlish Desire Brings

Loved it! All the giddy girls picking out dresses! Very cute!

Author's Response: I love writing about Lavender and Parvati! Glad you loved it, Chapter 10's on its way!

Reviewer: nikster
Date: 11/22/06 11:38
Chapter: Chapter 9: The Intimacy Girlish Desire Brings

Really good chapter!
Cont soon!
Really good writing!
Can't wait to read about the ball!
Really good writing!


Author's Response: The Yule Ball was my favorite to write about! It should be out shortly and hopefully you think its fabulous!

Reviewer: saphiregirl
Date: 11/12/06 20:17
Chapter: Chapter 8: Phrases resulting in Hermione giggling like a school girl.

oooo Hermione and Cedric! this fic is starting to get very exciting!

Author's Response: I'm glad your enjoying it! I promise it only gets better!

Reviewer: pinkwands
Date: 11/08/06 3:10
Chapter: Chapter 8: Phrases resulting in Hermione giggling like a school girl.

I love this story so far, I hope you go AU and don't kill Cedric :D

Author's Response: You'll just have to keep reading to find out =P

Reviewer: Gray_Archibald
Date: 11/05/06 20:10
Chapter: Chapter 8: Phrases resulting in Hermione giggling like a school girl.

The story continues to build. In a great way. Tis another awesome chapter

Reviewer: nikster
Date: 11/04/06 8:49
Chapter: Chapter 8: Phrases resulting in Hermione giggling like a school girl.

Great chapter!
Cont soon
Really good writing!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading!

Reviewer: Gray_Archibald
Date: 10/29/06 19:23
Chapter: Chapter 7: A Nasty Quarrel

Having a beta really does help. It was definitely a good idea to get one.

Reviewer: ExpectoHouseElf
Date: 10/29/06 1:07
Chapter: Chapter 7: A Nasty Quarrel

well...i'vebeen waiting so long for this chapter to come out...and i dont' know whati was thinkingbut i iddn't read the previous chapter...well fear not..i have now...and i'm caught up...i guess imissed my medication that day or something lmao okay great chapter can't wait for the next one ^_^

Author's Response: Lol! That is by far one of the most interesting reviews ever, it definitly takes the cake! The wait for Chapter 8 shouldn't be too long and thanks for reading =)

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