Reviews For Conflict
Reviewer: justin ferguson
Date: 01/28/08 20:48
Chapter: The Goodbyes

Awesome! So, when does Harry find out that Dung took the egg? Does he not find out until he reaches Romania? Who does Dung sell the egg to? And Ginny better not die!!!

Author's Response: First off, thanks for reviewing! Second, I hope Ginny doesn't die, too, but I'm not making any promises. You'll have to wait and see! Gosh, so will I!

Reviewer: FeatherTrader
Date: 06/22/07 13:41
Chapter: The Clue

Slytherin pride! Wooo-hooo!

Okay, now that I've got that out of my system. I love how, even though it's the first chapter, this chapter steps right into the plot and drama. It was cute how you included your brother into the mix too.

I really liked the hiding of Joshua's room. I think it is something Harry and Ginny would do to protect their only son, since Harry is always going to have enemies. I thought it was ingenious on your part to think of such a room.

There were only a few punctuation/random errors I picked up on. Overall though, the chapter was perfectly written.

However, people soon flooded in and the bride and groom were pushed apart. There should be a comma after in.

“Good. I heard you cough. Are you alright?” Alright is a combined word only accepted in America within the last decade. In most formal papers, it's written out. But, I believe, it's still commonly accepted to write all right in Britain.

“Well, I’m going to back to sleep for my remaining 2 ˝ hours before we go. Are you coming?” The number should probably be written out.

“No, just going to bore myself to sleep,” Harry carefully said. I absolutely adore this line. It seems something Harry would say when he's trying to get someone to relax or laugh. It's perfect characterisation for him. Poor Hermione, though.

Overall, this chapter was amazing!

Author's Response: Ah, thank you, dear. I can hardly read this chapter without doing four *headdesks* I was so stupid when I wrote this. Thank you so much, though!

Reviewer: A_Pink_lady
Date: 04/18/07 12:44
Chapter: The Meeting

I WILL PERSONALLY KILL DUNG!! WHY CANT HE GIVE THE EGG TO HARRY! Sorry about that.well, harry could always grab some gillyweed and rescue it from the sea?... Its great that your back, i really like this story!

Author's Response: Thanks! Dung is greedy, bar none. And if Harry spent so much time searching for the egg in the SEA...what will happen to Gin?

Reviewer: SingingBird
Date: 04/16/07 19:28
Chapter: The Meeting

He'd better give that egg to Harry! Grr...he makes me mad. :(
It's great to see this story back up again! Its great! :)

Author's Response: Thanks! Unfortunately, Dung isn't willing to hand over the egg...

Reviewer: crazyhpgirl
Date: 04/16/07 16:11
Chapter: The Meeting

THAT VILE, TWO-TIMING, DIRTY, ROTTEN, FITHY, SCUMMY, PILE OF FLOBBERWORM DROPPINGS!

Author's Response: O.O...impressive vocabulary. More words than I found for him, at least...

Reviewer: Ginzig
Date: 04/16/07 15:04
Chapter: The Meeting

Very happy to seen an update to this story! I hope Harry catches on and gets that egg from Dung. I can't believe that money is more important than a life to Dung, but then again, look at who we're talking about. Ugh! I hope Dung gets whats coming to him for being such a low life.

Author's Response: Thank you! Dung will find out in time that money isn't everything...

Reviewer: NikkiSue
Date: 04/16/07 12:54
Chapter: The Meeting

Yay! I love what you have done with the dialogue. The banter between Harry and Dung is classic! It was nice, after beta-ing the chapter to read it and see so many wonderful changes that I never would have thought of. Nicely done and kudos to all the fabulous help you had with this. I look forward to seeing more.
*hugs*
Nicole

Author's Response: Thank you! I really love the haggling going on between them. Also, I'm so glad that you were able to help with this!! *hugs* -Hailey

Reviewer: gayasura
Date: 11/29/06 7:33
Chapter: The Clue

hi can i continue ur story


Author's Response: No you may not - I'll have Kelsea submit the chapters I give her.

Reviewer: LILY93062
Date: 11/28/06 17:25
Chapter: The Clue

HI I'M GRANGERGURLS PERSONAL SECRETARY AND I'M HERE TO SAY THANKS I'LL CHECK REVIEWS AND FORWARD TO HER THAN SEND THEM TO YOU
LOVE HUGS AND KISSES

D.L.H.P.

THE ONE AND ONLY DARK LORD HAPPY-PANTS

Author's Response: Yes, I'm here one more time to say yes, Kelsea is my secretary and you are to treat her with respect.

Reviewer: pottergurl
Date: 11/04/06 14:53
Chapter: The Wedding

this is a really good story please update soon im dying to no what happens next


Author's Response: I'll try to!

Reviewer: shywriter505
Date: 09/27/06 19:34
Chapter: The Wedding

ron was going 2 die in this chapter?! y? don't kill off anyone else, pleasepleasepleasepleaseplease!!!!!

Author's Response: You know what? I am going to kill off more people, and Ron will be included unless you stop!! Thanks a lot, Kelsea!!

Reviewer: shywriter505
Date: 09/27/06 19:31
Chapter: The Wedding

ohcrapohcrapohcrapohcrapohcrap!!!!!! what's he going to do? is he going to kill someone again? i'm so nervous! hurry up and write more! gotta find out! tell me now!!!!!!!! argh!

Author's Response: It's going to take a while to update, thanks to Kelsea blabbing all my ideas. *glare*

Reviewer: comewhatmay
Date: 09/24/06 20:58
Chapter: The Wedding

whoa Draco!!!
wow cant wait
update asap!

Author's Response: Thanks a ton, but it'll probably take a while to get to it. School and all, you know.

Reviewer: mugglegurl
Date: 09/22/06 17:10
Chapter: The Wedding

Ooohhh. The plot thickens ;) There was nice imagery in this chap, and that was great. Have to go now. (homecoming game tonight. Hope we beat Portage...)

Author's Response: Ooh, we had homecoming!! We lost (as always), 12 to 0. Don't we stink? Huskies always lose to the Tigers. Poop on them. Enough football talk, though. Thanks!

Reviewer: A_Pink_lady
Date: 09/22/06 11:59
Chapter: The Wedding

wow great story, i cant believe draco killed Joshie! that is just pure evil, i can tell you are not a fan of draco! keep writing!

Author's Response: Yeah, Draco isn't my favorite person. Thanks!

Reviewer: LILY93062
Date: 09/18/06 19:51
Chapter: The Wedding

IS RON GOING 2 DIE IN THE NEXT CHAPTER HAILEY

Author's Response: I don't know, Kelsea, and please don't blab my ideas all over the site. It kind of ruins it.

Author's Response: No, I'm not going to kill Ron, now that that idea has been posted world-wide.

Reviewer: lily_writes
Date: 09/17/06 20:43
Chapter: The Surprise

Really lovely chapter. Wish I could say more, but I have yet to find more words to describe it.

Author's Response: :D Thanks again.

Reviewer: lily_writes
Date: 09/17/06 20:42
Chapter: The Surprise

Really lovely chapter. Wish I could say more, but I have yet to find more words to describe it.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I don't know how to thank you enough!!

Reviewer: songchic_siruslover
Date: 09/17/06 14:18
Chapter: The Wedding

good chapter please update soon! :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I've worked hard on it, and it's definately paid off!

Reviewer: crazyhpgirl
Date: 09/16/06 22:23
Chapter: The Wedding

: O That scumbag! I can't believe he actually had the gall to stand there when everyone there wants him dead! The nerve of him! Great chapter, by the way.

Author's Response: Oh, I know. Isn't he stupid? But he's bound to have reenforcements around him somewhere. Thanks!

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