Reviewer: Flobberworm93
Date: 06/09/06 21:41
Chapter: Voldy is a Wimp

Sorry I meant too

Reviewer: Flobberworm93
Date: 06/09/06 15:57
Chapter: Voldy is a Wimp

That was amazing! That was the greatest poem I have ever read! I laughed so hard I fell out of my chair! And then then I kept laughing! For fifteen minutes! It is very, very well written two, and extremely well rhymed! I cannot think of a single bad thing to say about that!!!

Reviewer: googlebrain155
Date: 06/09/06 11:54
Chapter: Voldy is a Wimp

that made me laugh sooooooooooooooooooo much!!!!
please write more!!!!
:)

Author's Response: Thanks! It's nice to know I actually made someone laugh! Look for Sonnet #2, The Noseless, coming soon!

Reviewer: mugglenetdudette
Date: 06/09/06 10:47
Chapter: Voldy is a Wimp

Nice! it rhymes well! well done!

Reviewer: queenofashes
Date: 06/09/06 9:26
Chapter: Voldy is a Wimp

SWEEEEEET!!! keep it up lady!

Author's Response: Thanks! I plan to!

Reviewer: hogwartsduchess
Date: 06/09/06 7:56
Chapter: Voldy is a Wimp

The concept is interesting. And, it does follow the guidelines for a sonnet, but if you are planning on writing humor, you should consider working on it a bit more before you submit it. While it was cute and different, it wasn't exactly humourous.

Author's Response: It's hard to take constructive criticism, but I read over it, and you're right. I'll try to do better next time! :)

Reviewer: KenF
Date: 06/09/06 7:00
Chapter: Voldy is a Wimp

Well, that was good for a nice early-morning chuckle.

Reviewer: RiddleHatred
Date: 06/09/06 6:49
Chapter: Voldy is a Wimp

I don't mean to flame, but yuck. This is awful

Author's Response: I can take constructive criticism just fine, but I do not want a flat-out insult. Do you really have nothing better to do?

Reviewer: satakshi
Date: 06/09/06 5:31
Chapter: Voldy is a Wimp

Has to be atleast 57% more funny.

Reviewer: lifluvanime
Date: 06/09/06 4:56
Chapter: Voldy is a Wimp

that made me laugh

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