That was amazing! That was the greatest poem I have ever read! I laughed so hard I fell out of my chair! And then then I kept laughing! For fifteen minutes! It is very, very well written two, and extremely well rhymed! I cannot think of a single bad thing to say about that!!!

Nice! it rhymes well! well done!

The concept is interesting. And, it does follow the guidelines for a sonnet, but if you are planning on writing humor, you should consider working on it a bit more before you submit it. While it was cute and different, it wasn't exactly humourous.

Author's Response: It's hard to take constructive criticism, but I read over it, and you're right. I'll try to do better next time! :)

I don't mean to flame, but yuck. This is awful

Author's Response: I can take constructive criticism just fine, but I do not want a flat-out insult. Do you really have nothing better to do?

that made me laugh