Reviewer: mock_turtle
Date: 05/09/07 3:04
Chapter: Snape

I like this one too. it has style. I like the sentences that go on longer than one line.

Author's Response: Wow. I didn't even know this was up yet. I only sent it in last night!!!! It usually takes about three days! This was fast! awesome!

Author's Response: oh, yeah I like those sentences, too.

Reviewer: mock_turtle
Date: 05/09/07 3:02
Chapter: The Noseless

infinitely better than your last poem. I love this one.

Author's Response: thanks! most people say that, actually. I think it's my best one so far. I really need to try and top it.

Reviewer: XhayleeXblackX
Date: 05/06/07 10:44
Chapter: Marvolo?

These are pretty funny. I agree that they would definatly annoy old Voldie. HeHeHe...that is also one of life's greatest joys, so well done to you! Good Job

Author's Response: I think in the seventh book Fred and George should go up and read poems like these to him face. Wait a second . . . then they would die and that would be awful! nevermind I 'll do it!

Reviewer: PadfootBaby
Date: 05/03/07 16:14
Chapter: Marvolo?

Poor, poor Voldy-poo. *sniffs* This one is really good too, although I must say the second one is still my favorite. Can't wait for more!!


Author's Response: Yay! Someone finally reviewed!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: PadfootBaby
Date: 05/03/07 16:13
Chapter: The Noseless

This one's even better! I especially love the last two lines together. Hilarious!!!! *goes on to read more*

Reviewer: PadfootBaby
Date: 05/03/07 16:11
Chapter: Voldy is a Wimp

In a word: HA! :D Keep writing these!!!

Reviewer: hogwartsduchess
Date: 06/29/06 9:40
Chapter: The Noseless

Much better! This sonnet is much improved over the last one. The form is better, the humour has definitely improved and I particularly liked the Voldie-poo part. Very clever and well-done! Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: hufflepuffgal
Date: 06/14/06 16:43
Chapter: The Noseless

I like this one even better than the first one!

Reviewer: hufflepuffgal
Date: 06/14/06 16:41
Chapter: Voldy is a Wimp

Good so far, I'm off to read sonnet # 2.

Reviewer: Bookwormy
Date: 06/14/06 6:56
Chapter: Voldy is a Wimp

Wow..that was simply amazing! My favourite line was---"And so the all-powerful Dark Lord met defeat
By a baby who sat in his crib and cried."

Reviewer: Maple1996
Date: 06/13/06 11:29
Chapter: Voldy is a Wimp

oooooookkkkaaay youre crazy! you rock i like crzy ppl

Reviewer: padfootnflawks
Date: 06/11/06 17:39
Chapter: The Noseless

He he he he very funny and great because i have a short attention spand. Wow look at that bird over there!!!


Reviewer: RiddleHatred
Date: 06/10/06 20:35
Chapter: The Noseless

Better then the previous one. His nose is a horcrux?!

Author's Response: Well that's exactly what I was wondering? Why wouldn't he have a nose unless part of his soul was in it and he lost it making the horcrux?

Reviewer: Simply Being
Date: 06/10/06 12:55
Chapter: The Noseless

Tehe. Great once again. Please write another one!

Reviewer: Simply Being
Date: 06/10/06 12:54
Chapter: Voldy is a Wimp

Funny! By the way, you might wanna duck, I think old mouldy shorts has spotted you just now ;-)

Reviewer: Arwynn
Date: 06/10/06 12:45
Chapter: The Noseless

ooo...smack down volders!
Burn like a peice of meat!

Reviewer: Arwynn
Date: 06/10/06 12:43
Chapter: Voldy is a Wimp


Reviewer: lily_writes
Date: 06/10/06 11:37
Chapter: The Noseless

Where do you find this list anyway? Could you tell me the link?

Author's Response:

Reviewer: lily_writes
Date: 06/10/06 11:36
Chapter: The Noseless

I'm first to review and this is still funny. What's next on the sonnet list? Death Eaters?

Reviewer: lily_writes
Date: 06/10/06 11:32
Chapter: Voldy is a Wimp

Hee hee hee. That was funny.

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