Reviews For The Dog Star
Reviewer: hogwartswannabe
Date: 06/14/06 23:57
Chapter: The Dog Star

that was such a sweet story!! definitely 10/10!!

Reviewer: cedrics_chick
Date: 06/14/06 21:55
Chapter: The Dog Star

it was like the best thing i,ve ever read.You should write more liy and james fics

Reviewer: marauder_since_1993
Date: 06/14/06 19:40
Chapter: The Dog Star

*applauds* brilliant. sheer brilliance.

Reviewer: FanFicFanatic12
Date: 06/14/06 18:52
Chapter: The Dog Star sweet. It was absolutly beautiful.
11/10. :0)

Reviewer: griffindor_sweety
Date: 06/14/06 18:38
Chapter: The Dog Star

ahhhh thats was really cute i liked it

Reviewer: griffindor_sweety
Date: 06/14/06 18:38
Chapter: The Dog Star

ahhhh thats was really cute i liked it

Reviewer: Kerian
Date: 06/14/06 17:36
Chapter: The Dog Star

Aww very sweet, I loved the way it flipped between the couples and how similiar they were. I did notice a minor error I think. I'm pretty sure the dog star is actually called Sirus instead of Sirius. Nice story though, I especially liked that in the beginning of each little section you didn't use names and it seemed like it could be either couple.

Reviewer: padfootnflawks
Date: 06/14/06 17:09
Chapter: The Dog Star

:) Im speachless

Reviewer: Crazy About Dan
Date: 06/14/06 16:34
Chapter: The Dog Star

Cool story. It is somewhat confusing though.

Reviewer: MereRanger
Date: 06/14/06 16:24
Chapter: The Dog Star

I came by this story just by chance and am so glad I did. This was beautifully written. Its short and sweet. Wonderful job.

Reviewer: evrlastingdreamer
Date: 06/14/06 16:09
Chapter: The Dog Star

aww! I love your stories, but they make me want to cry!

Reviewer: JC_Cainstone
Date: 06/14/06 14:56
Chapter: The Dog Star

That was so good! I loved the way it switched between Lily and James and Harry and Ginny. Very sweet, this is definitely going on my favourites!!!

Reviewer: Pottergirl
Date: 06/14/06 14:55
Chapter: The Dog Star

Wow, just wow! The gaps between the conversations, like here:


"Yeah, Gin?

"Are we alone, like this? Are we the only ones who have lied here, under the sky?"

And Harry looked up at the Dog Star, and he remembered all those who had lived and died, and he knew the answer. “No, Ginny," answered Harry, "I think that this place has been like this forever."

Ginny nodded, knowing that it was right.

"We should go back in." He disengaged his limbs from hers, gently and slowly. A cold crept in on his now exposed arms, alone without their companions. He stood, and waited for her to join him.

Lily stayed stationary for a moment, staring straight up, fixing her emerald eyes onto the star that glowed so brightly in the night. "Do you know what that one's called, James?"

He looked up, and shook his head. "I'm no good at Astronomy, Evans, you know that."

She smiled, a little, before answering. "It's Sirius, the Dog Star. And it seems that it's glowing brighter than it ever did before."

"I'm sure Sirius would be glad to hear it. Can we go, Lily? I'm cold."

Lily tore her gaze away from the heavens, and looked to her boyfriend, her best friend. "I love you, James." she whispered, as if she were afraid others would hear it, though they were quite alone.

But he answered back, without a pause. "I love you too, Lily."

And in the same place, several decades away, the whisper of old love could be heard on the wind.

Was the same thing happening to Harry and Ginny the same way it happened to James and Lily? It's kind of a nice twist. 10/10 FAVORITES!!!!

Reviewer: ValorOrgulloso
Date: 06/14/06 14:04
Chapter: The Dog Star

That was REALLY good! I absolutely LOVED it! It made me feel sad and happy at the same time! Does that make sense? Probably not, but I love the feeling! Write more stories!!!

Reviewer: HermioneTonks
Date: 06/14/06 14:01
Chapter: The Dog Star

ohhhhhhhhhhhh!!!! this is a sweet fan fiction! i reall like it! keep it up!

Reviewer: meggers
Date: 06/14/06 13:37
Chapter: The Dog Star

so cute!

Reviewer: Wormtail is a prat
Date: 06/14/06 13:01
Chapter: The Dog Star

Awww! That is so beautiful! I love it! The alternating with Ginny/Harry and Lily/James is awesome!! Got any other stories?

Reviewer: HermionePotter
Date: 06/14/06 12:57
Chapter: The Dog Star

Awww! This was so sweet! pretty short, but good all the same! 10/10

Reviewer: xginny_weasleyx
Date: 06/14/06 12:45
Chapter: The Dog Star

hey i've never seen anything writen like this before. Its really unique and cool. I really liked it

Reviewer: siriuslycrazy
Date: 06/14/06 12:33
Chapter: The Dog Star

awww thats cute...

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