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Reviewer: SeekingZenith
Date: 06/03/10 15:07
Chapter: Into the Gray

I really like you poem. I can feel Fred's agony. Great job!

Reviewer: redhead_weasley08
Date: 12/02/06 16:24
Chapter: Into the Gray

Fred is one of my favorite characters, and I feel really sorry for him! I'd never thought of Fred and Hermione, but it works for this. My only thoughts are that I can't imagine Fred this serious... I guess everyone has a soft side...

Reviewer: potions_perfection
Date: 08/28/06 16:39
Chapter: Into the Gray

Wow. Poor Fred.

Author's Response: you said u needed a beta reader i'd be happy to be urs. don't worry i do in fact have past expirence in writting besides poetry.

Reviewer: HermyRox12
Date: 06/13/06 20:07
Chapter: Into the Gray

Oh, this is so sad. The poem flows so nicely. I think that in the third to last line, you could do without the first word. You can keep it if you like, but I thin it sounds better without it.
HermyRox12

Author's Response: thankxs it does sound better

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