Reviewer: DogLover4Life
Date: 12/20/06 20:20
Chapter: One-Shot

WHOA THAT WAS TOTALLY WICKED! Brilliant! I love Quidditch! You had the intensity and all the anticipation it was great! Although I think Maggie would have scolded Fred and George a bit more. I also think Fred and George would have said a little bit more. But it was great! Double overtime? WOW.

Author's Response: I'm so happy you liked it! This was one of my first fics, so I've been a little apprehensive about keeping it on here... Thank you for all of the reviews you left me!!

Reviewer: Just Tink
Date: 06/21/06 20:51
Chapter: One-Shot

I enjoyed this story alot! My favorite line was, "“Stay in school, kids!” George said in a strong, reprimanding voice. “Well, we didn’t, but that doesn’t mean you shouldn’t!”" That really made me laugh. I can just picture him saying that. My only thing is that for me, McGonagall seemed a littled OOC at the beginning of the story. That's just my opinion- but with that same opinion I think she got more in character as the story progressed. It was great how the twins kept slipping in advertising- great story!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it. And thanks for your advice. I'll go back and read over it to make some changes so that she doesn't seem OOC.

Reviewer: padfootnflawks
Date: 06/11/06 17:57
Chapter: One-Shot

Wow Ive been wanting to read about a new qudig(im really bad at spelling) game for ages and i did not even know that people could wright avout it any way i liked ur story alot!

Author's Response: Thanks!!!

Reviewer: sunshine
Date: 06/10/06 22:51
Chapter: One-Shot

Really funny...I split my sides laughing when Fred said why he'd make a rotten Seeker.
I hope you write more fanfic; this was great! : )

Author's Response: Thank you! At the moment I'm working on a H/G and R/Hr fic, where Fred and George will have frequent apperances. In fact, one of them might be getting married... ;-)

Reviewer: MereRanger
Date: 06/10/06 14:57
Chapter: One-Shot

Very cool story! Fred and George are so fun to read and you did an awesome job keeping the game moving through their commentating. I was sitting on the edge of my seat for that last bit between Malfoy and Harry. Great job and keep writing!

Author's Response: Aw, thank you! I'm gald you thought it was intense ;-)

Reviewer: Morgan Weasley
Date: 06/10/06 14:32
Chapter: One-Shot

i love this! nice catch harry!

Author's Response: haha, thanks!

Reviewer: AstroFire
Date: 06/10/06 14:25
Chapter: One-Shot

I think you accomplished your objective here! Fred and George were very in character as also Proff. McGonagall was. I know this must have been hard to write (due to the descriptions [well, that's something sometimes troubles me :P]), but I think you did a very good job with it! Keep it up!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! That just made me excited because it was hard to write a Quidditch scene! I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: mcgonagallfan
Date: 06/10/06 10:46
Chapter: One-Shot

Really good story. I loved the humour with Prof.McGonagall and the boys.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: grangergurl
Date: 06/10/06 10:32
Chapter: One-Shot

haha, VERY FUNNY!! a little intense, but FUNNY!

Author's Response: Thanks!! This was my first shot at humor, and I wasn't sure how it would go over.

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