haha! I am assuming that Joanne is a witch? Very good story, I can see Petunia snapping when asked about siblings!
Joanne, I hope you write a sequal about her. She seems to be magical. Petunia resents her and refuses to talk abotu her.
Wow, that's kinda cool. But wouldn't that be funny if that actually happened?
i loved that story! how she says that joanne goes to st brutus's because shes a witch, i assume. very clever. 10/10
nice job. do you mean to say that dudley's daughter.......... Brilliant idea.
nice job. do you mean to say that dudley's daughter.......... Brilliant idea.
It could have got selected in Humour fics, some points were so funny! I really liked it. Good idea, too, conversation with Petunia. And Joanne...that was reall nice, though I can't imagine how Dudley could have a witch as a daughter. Anyway, it suited the story.
Bookwormy~
great story. really makes you wonder though...
What a neat story. I would actually like to see that expanded on. Poor Joanne…..I sure hope her parents aren’t as horrid as Harry’s Aunt and Uncle were to him. Perhaps she can go live with Harry and learn all about Hogwarts….er….St. Brutus! It was well written and I enjoyed it a lot. Sara
What a neat story. I would actually like to see that expanded on. Poor Joanne…..I sure hope her parents aren’t as horrid as Harry’s Aunt and Uncle were to him. Perhaps she can go live with Harry and learn all about Hogwarts….er….St. Brutus! It was well written and I enjoyed it a lot. Sara
That was very different! I suspect Joanne is magical.. is she? Please tell me if that's right.. xD. I liked this quote: "No, I don’t have any siblings myself. Why do you ask? Oh, of course. Just making friendly conversation. I didn’t mean to snap, sorry. I guess I do miss my husband Vernon, makes me quite emotional sometimes, sorry." That's quite characteristic of Petunia. Good job
that was a totally great story! except for one thing: it has only one chapter n is finished!! you have to keep adding it, please!
Great story! I really liked it! Let me guess, my pov is that, Petunia mostly talks about Vernon Jr. because Joanne is a witch. Joanne is actually Dudley's daughter and she became a witch because either Dudley's wife is a witch or she is just a muggleborn witch. That's just my guess however! The story deserves a *10* it was very good and very original :)
I like your story. It's pretty cool. Is Joanne suppose to be a witch? The reason I think that is because of Harry and St. Brutus'. LOL. ~megan
This is good! I like it. It's different- I don't think there's another fic on the site like it. Is it just a one-shot? If not, keep going! I'd like to see more of Petunia's flat-out denial of Harry. Is Joanne Harry's daughter? Or does Mrs. Dursley just not like her because she looks like Harry/Lily?
can't you update soon?! i've been waiting for monthS!
Interesting premise and good to see you flesh out her thoughts about her siblings (a flatout denial is the Dursley's first thought). Well done.
I liked the insights into the future. However I can't fail to notice that in the Summary you call it 'Private Drive' instead of 'Privet Drive'
