Reviews For Breathing
Reviewer: The amber cat
Date: 08/18/07 0:32
Chapter: Breathing

Wow, that was really good. it was so touching and sweet.

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: jajabinx66
Date: 06/30/07 12:31
Chapter: Breathing

Aaaawwww! *sniffle* please tell me you will write other stories about H/G!!! Oh, and good job on your featured story even though i told you like twice in my reviews!!!:) Oh, and your banner for Thoughts of Tabitha is sooo cute and realistic!

Author's Response: Wow. Thank you! And I do hope to write more H/G, but I might do other ships, too. Non-canon ones. And my buddy Claire/atkarid made the banner for me. She's positively amazing, don't you think?

Reviewer: liliy16
Date: 06/23/07 22:26
Chapter: Breathing

it's sad at the end, but i loved the story

Author's Response: Well, it wasn't supposed to be happy! Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: marauderres
Date: 06/23/07 6:45
Chapter: Breathing

aaaw!!!!!!!!!!!!!!so touching(sniff!)

Author's Response: Thanks.

Reviewer: Helen_Porter
Date: 06/08/07 23:03
Chapter: Breathing

I love this scene, it's full of emotion. You are a very good writer. I totally wanted to cry. Seriously AWESOME.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Noel Weasley
Date: 06/02/07 11:12
Chapter: Breathing

Wow, that was sad and yet happy at the same time! wow, great job! you should write a sequel, like maybe after the last battle and Harry's life is hanging by a thread and Ginny's by his side. you don't have to, but it would make a lot of fans happy!

Author's Response: Honestly, this story is kind of a prequel to The Thoughts of Tabitha. It wasn't really supposed to be, but it's how I imagined the wedding would go for them. Anyways, the story's supposed to stand alone. Thanks for your thoughts!

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 05/24/07 18:17
Chapter: Breathing

*sniff* OF COURSE HARRY'S NOT GOING TO DIEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!! D'ON'T STOP BELIEVING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: greeneyes
Date: 04/25/07 18:17
Chapter: Breathing

This I love it. You characterized both Harry and Ginny perfectly. I'm glad you didn't make him a suddenly perfect dancer. *giggles at GoF* And I loved Ginny's confidence with Harry, but at the same time, I could see her fear that he would get hurt. (Well, seeing as how she said she was afraid of him getting killed, it's obvious how I saw it *duh*, but I liked how you wrote it.)

The end is sad, but yet, had a good final note about it that I can't put my finger on. Most endings just...well, end, but it's usually too sudden and very short and choppy. Your ending did creep up on me rather fast, but I liked it nonetheless.

The only thing I would want you to differently would be to not end this! It's very good!

Author's Response: *Hugs teh Lemons* Thank you, m'dear. Your kind words made my day!

Reviewer: harry_kissed_ginny
Date: 03/17/07 16:28
Chapter: Breathing

woah. that was a really good fic.

"Harry leaned against the fence as he watched the reception over at the pavilion magicked there for the evening." Maybe I am incorrect about this, but I am not sure that there is a k in "magicked", as you used it. Since magiced looks more like it would be pronounced like "MAH-jissed" than "MAH-jicked", maybe something like "Harry leaned against the fence as he watched the reception over at the pavilion magically placed there for the evening" instead would work better.

"Harry stood up straight when he saw a figure walking towards him. He pulled out his wand quickly." That is really good characterization of Harry. During times like this, he wouldn't take any chances.

I really liked the ending, the way Ginny spoke to the empty bed. It was a perfect way to end a fic.

I also really liked how you embeded the song into the fic. It was perfect.

~HKG, Hufflepuff, for the Badger Review Circle.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review, dear. As for the "magicked" thing, I'm fairly sure that term is used in canon. *shrugs*

Reviewer: oytdancer15
Date: 03/11/07 17:53
Chapter: Breathing

wow. that is all i can say.

Author's Response: Why, thank you.

Reviewer: DogLover4Life
Date: 01/02/07 18:04
Chapter: Breathing

I was attracted to this fic because I'm a great fan. It was a good read. You had their emotions put out so clearly. You made Harry and Ginny sort of fit together. It's like... They started at opposite ends but then by the time the fic was over they had met half way. I hope that makes sense.

Ginny smiled. Is that it, Harry? Do you love me?

It was in the midst of a heated argument that he just lets his guard down for a moment. Then she said that and it placed a perfect picture in my mind. I could see the entire story in my mind! Every description and detail matched up and it was just so good!

Author's Response: Wow. I'm glad you enjoyed this. Honestly, it was just a thing I wrote in a couple of minutes on a whim and because I liked the song. Thanks for the darling review!

Reviewer: NikkiSue
Date: 01/01/07 21:57
Chapter: Breathing

Wow... I loved this one-shot you've got here. I could perfectly picture everything you wrote due to your great descriptions. The emotions were obvious and it was refreshing to be on the same page as the characters instead of not knowing how they feel at that time. I look forward to sampling your other stories!
- NikkiSue (Nicole)

Author's Response: I left you one review, and here you go reviewing most of mine. :) Thanks for all the lovely reviews... I suppose I owe you a couple.

Reviewer: Snapes_secret
Date: 11/27/06 10:34
Chapter: Breathing

What a lovely story. You struck a good balance between sentimental and bittersweet. I loved how you weaved the lyrics in. You have a good handle on both characters, how they would act/react and speak.

One minor fix to note. The line "with Malfoy and Snape telling him what goes one at Hogwarts.." You probably meant on instead of one. Other than that, very well done!

The Order of Ravenclaw House Elves
(Snape's Talon / Snapes_secret)

Author's Response: Thanks for your kind words! And thanks for the fix there ;) *goes to fix* What exactly is the Order of Ravenclaw House Elves? I'm a 'Puff.

Reviewer: I so want 2 b magic
Date: 10/15/06 16:13
Chapter: Breathing

aww thats sweet

Author's Response: Aww thanks. ;)

Reviewer: Harry_Ginnybeliver1
Date: 10/08/06 20:52
Chapter: Breathing

So romantic and I loved the lyrics

Author's Response: Thank you! The song is a favorite of mine, and I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: lady magician
Date: 09/23/06 14:54
Chapter: Breathing

aw that was such a nice wasnt too deep but just really good...but slightly OOC but i think thats wt fanfiction is for!! ;-D

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! I tried not to make it too OOC :S

Reviewer: Simply Being
Date: 08/27/06 15:57
Chapter: Breathing

Sorry, just read the summary. So you like Yellowcard alot huh?

Author's Response: Yes. Yellowcard is one of my favorite bands. Thanks for the [two] reviews!

Reviewer: Simply Being
Date: 08/27/06 15:54
Chapter: Breathing

Aww...very sweet. Leaves me with kind of an empty feeling though, you know? Cause I wanna know what happens next.

By the way, the italicized parts, the poetry, is it a song? Or a poem? If you made it up it's VERY good.

Author's Response: LMAO! No, I can't write that well. As you said above, it's a Yellowcard song. I've had a LOT of people telling me to continue this story, but I like where I left off ;) It lets people use their imagination, something JKR uses as well. And by the way, thanks for making me this banner! I'm so thrilled.

Reviewer: Rampant Muggle
Date: 08/21/06 21:47
Chapter: Breathing

That was great. I don't see how you can consider yourself one of the worst authors on here... wait til you see MY work...

Author's Response: lol. We all think we aren't good at writing. I seriously doubt you're horrible. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: pheonixtear
Date: 08/09/06 13:30
Chapter: Breathing

Wow, that was really beautiful. I like that they sorted everything out yet didn't start going out again. It was a perfect ending to the story

Author's Response: Thanks! I thought so, too.

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