Reviewer: luna_longbottom88
Date: 08/27/07 8:11
Chapter: Chapter Nineteen – At Long Last

Whoo-Hoo!!!!!!!!!! Harry finally asked her!! This chapter was very well done, and i completely agree with postDHpotterhead, sundevil does sound like she could be JK. This is my favorite story on MFF, i can't believe its almost over!

Reviewer: seamusismyhomeboy
Date: 08/26/07 22:36
Chapter: Chapter Five - Percy and Starling Discoveries

oh my lord, this chapter actually made my heart hurt a little.

Reviewer: postDHpotterhead
Date: 08/26/07 11:06
Chapter: Chapter Nineteen – At Long Last

i would never have thought that biology teachers could be such great writers :p

there goes that stereotype

this is really such a great story, i just finished reading from the beginning to end again, wow

i don't know how she does it, but sun devil makes me feel like it's J.K. Rowling writing herself, it's similar, and it feels great reading something that could be construed as what happened between the end of DH and the Epilogue

great, really, favorite author and all

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 08/25/07 21:48
Chapter: Chapter Nineteen – At Long Last

The conversation between Harry and Mr. Weasley was so much like what I picture when I think of Harry asking permission to marry Ginny. You did a great job there.
Typical male, leaving the radio blasting at full volume.
The party was well done, and the baby was precious. Having Harry holding the baby so naturally was such a nice touch. Putting the visions of their own children into Ginny’s head.
The graveyard scene was so touching, and I was glad to see Ginny know he needed time alone with his parents. She really seems to understand when he needs time and what he tries to say. I think you are doing such a great job with them. The N.E.W.T. results were unexpected. I wouldn’t think he’d bother if he wanted to play Quidditch instead of a regular job. Of course, he could probably get any job he wanted without taking them, but I was glad to see he still doesn’t want the Auror job.
In an interview, J.K. said Harry and Ron went on to revolutionize the Auror department, but I still think he wouldn’t want to have anything to do with fighting more dark wizards.
The proposal was perfectly written and had just enough humor to be right for Harry and Ginny. Without the joking around it couldn’t have been them.
Another wonderful chapter and I hate to see that it is almost finished. I hope you plan to write more after you finish this one. You are too talented to stop now. I also see the next one in the queue so I can only pray for quick validation, so see you there….

Reviewer: iAMmissdelaney
Date: 08/25/07 19:13
Chapter: Chapter Nineteen – At Long Last

hee.
That's adorable, I love it.
I can't wait for the next chapter to be validated.

Reviewer: ReSheila
Date: 08/25/07 17:12
Chapter: Chapter Nineteen – At Long Last

ohh thats amazing ! i loved this chapter, and harry getting ginny to talk to his parents, i loved it, keep it up !

Reviewer: quick_quotes_quill
Date: 08/25/07 7:34
Chapter: Chapter Nineteen – At Long Last

wow
wonderful and touching as ever
can't wait for the next chapter to be validated

Reviewer: quick_quotes_quill
Date: 08/25/07 7:34
Chapter: Chapter Nineteen – At Long Last

wow
wonderful and touching as ever
can't wait for the next chapter to be validated

Reviewer: lucky girl
Date: 08/24/07 23:08
Chapter: Chapter Nineteen – At Long Last

This is the best MNFF story i've ever read!!!!!!!!
i'm so glad that he proposed!!!!!
Please update soon and i think that you are an amazing writer i hope that you keep writing stories!!!!!!!

Reviewer: postDHpotterhead
Date: 08/24/07 7:09
Chapter: Chapter Nineteen – At Long Last

the best... this story is the best!

the beeeeeest!!!!

when they have kids, (which we all know they will), and their kids ask how dad proposed to mum, they'll be able to show them exaclty where, right on their front door step :) and they can tell their grandkids after them too

really great story, really really really great story, i just wish i could have contained my tears better reading this in a public place

:)

Reviewer: Phoenixis
Date: 08/24/07 5:46
Chapter: Chapter Nineteen – At Long Last

Awesome chapter! So glad he proposed. Can't wait for more. Hope it gets validated soon.

Reviewer: hpfreakover
Date: 08/24/07 2:47
Chapter: Chapter Nineteen – At Long Last

OMG! Finally, they're gonna get married! YES!

Reviewer: hpfreakover
Date: 08/24/07 2:47
Chapter: Chapter Nineteen – At Long Last

OMG! Finally, they're gonna get married! YES!

Reviewer: pandafan81
Date: 08/23/07 23:41
Chapter: Chapter Nineteen – At Long Last

Okay, so in my last review, I thought it was good that Harry was waiting, at least until Ginny finished school. But obviously he wasn't going to wait much longer than that, since he HAD the ring already. I think that it's sweet that he's asking Mr. Weasley's permission, even if Ginny's not in favor or courting. Mr. Weasley's line, I was beginning to think I’d have to talk to you about your intentions with my daughter. really made me smile. So Arthur to be so happy and helpful, and to tell Molly for Harry. He's so sweet!

And yay! Ginny's an aunt! And of course, it's a boy! lol but that was a predictable surprise!

The proposal was very sweet. For a moment, I thought he was going to ask her in the graveyard... that would have been a bit morbid. But I see why he wanted to share Godric's Hallow with Ginny. I could see them very easily building a little home and living very happily together.

Ginny may want to keep the engagement a secret, but with Ron's persistance, I'm certain it won't stay secret very long.

Overall, the chapter was very sweet. A lot of people write these really elaborate proposals on Harry's (and sometimes conjoined with a Ron/Hermione proposal) part. I'm very glad you kept it simple. No extraordinary magical spectacle, or public display. I like the idea of a boy and girl sitting on a stoop, discussing the future. Very well written.

And speaking of very well written, I only found a couple of typos. I would still caution you about the run on sentences, there are still quite a few, but much better than the last couple of chapters. I can't wait for the next!

He visible relaxed and dropped one hand from the steering wheel.
Should read: He visibly relaxed...

She never been in a graveyard before and wasn’t sure what was proper.
Should read "She had never been..."

Reviewer: liveonluna
Date: 08/23/07 22:08
Chapter: Chapter Nineteen – At Long Last

NOO! WHY!? You just had to end it! This story is AMAZING! I love it! It's so romantic and sweet and happy and funny. Yet, it seems relastic to JKR's world. I love it! PLEASE,PLEASE,PLEASE update soon... thankss!! =D

Reviewer: Sinner
Date: 08/23/07 20:48
Chapter: Chapter Nineteen – At Long Last

My favorite story.... love you *tear tear*

Reviewer: dancergirl117
Date: 08/23/07 20:44
Chapter: Chapter Nineteen – At Long Last

FINALLY!

I think I might've broken some windows screaming so loud when he finally asked her ;D

Awesome story; really can't wait to read the next chapter! :]

~ Vicky

Reviewer: Silver Whisper
Date: 08/23/07 20:41
Chapter: Chapter Nineteen – At Long Last

Aww...i love it! Im just glad it finally validated! At long last indeed!

Anyway, fantastic chapter, well done!

Reviewer: harry and ginny 2019
Date: 08/23/07 20:32
Chapter: Chapter Nineteen – At Long Last

Great Keep Writing Please

Reviewer: ILuvSirius01
Date: 08/23/07 19:19
Chapter: Chapter Nineteen – At Long Last

Aaaaaw! That is sooooo sweet, I about cried when he opened the box w/ the ring in it! Happiness at last! Love the chapter, UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ;P

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