Reviewer: GreyLady
Date: 09/16/06 16:46
Chapter: Sub-Chapter

Beautiful writing, beautiful story. And that is all that is necessary to say. :)

Reviewer: sirius_rox
Date: 09/04/06 21:14
Chapter: Sub-Chapter

aw.. that's so sad... and so cute... now i get why it's AU, lmao

Reviewer: greeneyes
Date: 08/28/06 22:26
Chapter: Sub-Chapter

Wow, this is incredible. Quite sad as well. I almost wish that it wasn't a one-shot, just so there would be more. Fantastic job. The last line is a great "clencher" ending (as my 7th grade english teacher would say). Brilliant!

Reviewer: immortal_evil
Date: 08/24/06 11:28
Chapter: Sub-Chapter

If there was one word to describe how touching and hauntingly beautiful this story was, you'd have to make up that word yourself.

The description made my room feel like autumn, cold yet brilliant with color. I wrote more about it here: http://fanfiction.mugglenet.com/forum/showthread.php?t=3153

"Brushing the dead grass off from the back of her pants, Lily Potter stands, and with one last backward glance, leaves the grove of trees and the flowing breeze that holds so much of her past."

Reviewer: king_fish
Date: 08/23/06 16:50
Chapter: Sub-Chapter

I really like your stories because, aside from being extremely well written and plotted, they satisfy my sadistic lust for the death and/or tormenting anguish of all the characters I love so much. Thank you.

Reviewer: pandafan81
Date: 08/21/06 12:31
Chapter: Sub-Chapter

Wow, this is an amazingly written story. I knew that this was an AU story, but I liked how as I read through it, I didn't know where it would diverge from the path we already know. I think you did an amazing job to gliding us into that alternate ending very well.

I loved the imagery. That forest and how the seasons change along with the stages of life. You kept it simple, but gave us just enough details that it was impossible to know where in life Lily was.

My heart breaks that James died, and left Harry and Lily. Her heartbreak is unbearable. But then again, I'm so happy to think that Harry grew up with his mum. No Dursleys, and a mother who loved him. Such a seemingly small detail change can have create a tremendously different character. Excellent work.

Reviewer: SIRIUS WILL NOT DIE
Date: 08/08/06 3:32
Chapter: Sub-Chapter

Aww...it was so sad, I cried. I put it on my favorites imidiatley. I loved the 'for what it's worth' bits, very sweet I think. Beautiful.

Reviewer: Newlib92
Date: 08/08/06 1:16
Chapter: Sub-Chapter

I really don't know what I can say without repeating everyone else. It was a sad what-if story. Beautiful, well written, narration fit well. I liked it, even though a bit sad at the end. Obviously.

Reviewer: Newlib92
Date: 08/08/06 1:16
Chapter: Sub-Chapter

I really don't know what I can say without repeating everyone else. It was a sad what-if story. Beautiful, well written, narration fit well. I liked it, even though a bit sad at the end. Obviously.

Reviewer: Siriuslyinluvwithharry
Date: 07/28/06 13:32
Chapter: Sub-Chapter

i loved this story. i have tears in my eyes. it was so sad...but beautiful. you have to keep writing! 100 out of 10! :)

Reviewer: Ginny_rox_4ever
Date: 07/20/06 15:20
Chapter: Sub-Chapter

this is an awesome story! seriously its really really great!

Reviewer: hpjsr
Date: 07/13/06 2:19
Chapter: Sub-Chapter

wow...very well written, really heartwrenching as well.

Reviewer: SilentSempra
Date: 07/02/06 17:50
Chapter: Sub-Chapter

That was amazing. The present tense narration at beginning and end was very... evocative, it made you feel what Lily is feeling at that moment. Very well written as well, ten out of ten. Maybe eleven. :)

Reviewer: SilentSempra
Date: 07/02/06 17:50
Chapter: Sub-Chapter

That was amazing. The present tense narration at beginning and end was very... evocative, it made you feel what Lily is feeling at that moment. Very well written as well, ten out of ten. Maybe eleven. :)

Reviewer: crazy_purple_hp_freak
Date: 06/26/06 7:12
Chapter: Sub-Chapter

Awww this is such a cute fic. I only really understod it right at the end, but it was so beautiful all the way through. I loved the descirption you but in, it created a really soft and calming atmosphere. And the best parts were th 'for what its worth...' *sniff*

Reviewer: FanFicFanatic12
Date: 06/14/06 19:01
Chapter: Sub-Chapter

On my favorites list--immediatly. That was so...good. I don't really know how to describe it. I adore the "for what it's worth" repetition. Your writing is ver powerful. I'm expecting some more writing from you!!! 11/10 :0)

Reviewer: Wormtail is a prat
Date: 06/14/06 13:04
Chapter: Sub-Chapter

loved it! u have such a unique way of writing! I'm thirsty for more stories by you!

Reviewer: Quiditch fan
Date: 06/13/06 21:14
Chapter: Sub-Chapter

wow, that was a really amazing story. i have got tears tugging at my eyes. you should definitley write more stories...i really like this one.

Reviewer: dancing girls
Date: 06/13/06 18:51
Chapter: Sub-Chapter

it was good, but i didn't understand the end. Was she supposed to be real or was she a ghost, a memory?

Reviewer: fantasygirl7
Date: 06/13/06 1:27
Chapter: Sub-Chapter

Wow. I'm stumped at what to say for a change. I'ts very well done but no words could express on how good it is. I hope you keep writing.

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