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Reviews For Beautiful

Name: Binka Fudge (Signed) · Date: 02/06/08 17:36 · For: Beautiful
I liked this, it celebrates extraordinary people. I really like Luna, she may seem odd, but she does speak alot of sense too.

Name: radishearrings3 (Signed) · Date: 07/18/07 20:17 · For: Beautiful
I think Luna is a bit more of a go-with-the-flow kind of girl who probably wouldn't think a lot of this, but if she was less of a kind, easy-going person, I could easily see her thinking this kind of thing. A tad OCC for Luna, but very inspirational and moving, none the less. :)

Name: DogLover4Life (Signed) · Date: 01/03/07 15:39 · For: Beautiful
I admit I can't really imagine Luna thinking this, but yet again I can imagine her having similar thoughts. I absolutely loved the end. A moment where Luna completely understands. I think Luna is happier than anyone else in the books.

Author's Response: hee! thanks! i agree she is very happy =] thanks for readin though xxxxxx

Name: LunaTuna (Signed) · Date: 11/24/06 23:28 · For: Beautiful
Thanks again for that. I'm printing it up and I'm going to re-read it when I need a reminder of who I am. Thank you sooooo much.

Author's Response: hi again!!!
ive got people re-reading!!!

Name: LunaTuna (Signed) · Date: 11/24/06 0:38 · For: Beautiful
OMG that was one of the best storys I've ever read. I think I like it so much because it's me. Everything Luna is sayig is exactaly me. Thank you so much for that. I really needed it.

Author's Response: thanks!!!
its one of those stories that i needed to get of my chest....sort of thing
im really glad that you liked it!

Name: happyhouseelf (Signed) · Date: 09/27/06 2:33 · For: Beautiful
that was sooooooooooooo i dunno but it was so, i really liked it
yours happyhouseelf

Author's Response: hee! i'm glad u liked it!!! xxxxxxxxxxxxx

Name: purplepanther (Signed) · Date: 09/22/06 14:14 · For: Beautiful
That. was. awesome. I loved it and i can really relate to Luna's thoughts. Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks!!!
There aren't many stories written about Luna
I'm glad you liked it!!! XD

Name: stormy_lovegood (Signed) · Date: 08/18/06 17:27 · For: Beautiful
Nice. I'm not a Ron/Luna shipper, but nice. Slightly OOC- Luna really DOES have her head in the clouds. She realizes thigns in a way other people don'tm, while still keeping her head in the clouds, actigng dreamy. But I like how you put her feelings down. Consturctive criticism- useful, burt being me, I dont really like writing it.

Author's Response: thanks! i love luna and i'm not really a ron/luna shipper, but it's sort of one-sided love. i don't mind constructive critisim - it helps me write. but i;m glad you liked it!

Name: saphiregirl (Anonymous) · Date: 07/12/06 19:22 · For: Beautiful
Wow......that was beautiful. Kudos

Author's Response: Isn't it so cheesey when you say the story "Beautiful" is beautiful? lol! I'm glad you liked it though!!! x x x long live the fairies x x x

Name: Bonnie_and_Clyde (Signed) · Date: 07/01/06 20:03 · For: Beautiful
Wow..that's all I can say..

Author's Response: Thanks!!! I'm glad I can leave people speechless!!! x x x long live the fairies x x x

Name: KenTuck (Signed) · Date: 06/18/06 14:22 · For: Beautiful
This was really good. You really got inside of Luna's head. Luna is one of my favorite characters because of all her hidden depth. I think that your characterization is really good. I would have liked a little more plot to set it off, but we can always have a sequel! :) I really liked it.

"And so what if I wear Butterbeer cork necklaces and turnips for earrings..." That whole paragraph, I can't place it but something about that... I always got the impression that she knew she was odd, but did she know exactly what was odd about her? In OotP when Luna steps up to Harry and announces that she believes him, Parvarti and Lavender laugh at hes earrings yet she thinks they're laughing at what she said. This always gave me the impression that she did not know exactly what made her so odd.

"Who wants to be just like everybody else? Not me." I love this part. It encompasses her whole personality and a lot of other people's on this site. For the people still in school and the adults writing fanfiction might not be the coolest thing to do, but we still do it because it is what we love to do.

"I mean, Iím average height, pretty average looking, an average intelligence . . . an average sort of person all round, I suppose. " A few paragraphs up didn't she say she wanted to be different from others...and she is, I don't think anything is average about her although this could be insecurities like most girls.

Author's Response: Thanks for your review!!! It's great to hear advice from fellow writers. I couldn't really put too much of a plot to it; it was supposed to be just a first person dramatic monologue (ooh, I've been listening in English!). I don't know, maybe it was just the realization that no boys liked her that made her realise that she was odd . . . I don't know . . . I wanted to get across the message that, not only was everyone beautiful, but Luna was just like everybody else, even if she is a little bit . . . strange. But thank you for your advice. There are always improvements to be made on everything!!! x x x long live the fairies x x x

Name: snufflesismyidol (Signed) · Date: 06/11/06 6:36 · For: Beautiful
Wow, that's really good! I can so relate to her (lol). You made a good point about the material world, and a great message about not transforming yourself to fit some cookie cutter. It made me feel good about myself.
Ps. I want to go to Liverpool. I

Author's Response: Thanks!!! I hate boys who can't see past that great thick layer of make-up smudged across people's faces these days. And it brings you out in spots!!! Whats wrong with real beauty? Why don't people watch Beauty and the Beast no more? x x x long live the fairies x x x p.s. Liverpool's great.

Name: sunshine (Signed) · Date: 06/10/06 23:21 · For: Beautiful
I know I left a review already, but I really want know if you're going to write more Luna fics-you're really good!

Author's Response: Thanks!!! I love getting support. I don't know whether I'll write any more Luna fics, but I've got a Harry/Ginny one in the queue if you're interested. I'll certainly keep it in mind, though. x x x long live the fairies x x x

Name: hogwartswannabe (Signed) · Date: 06/08/06 23:06 · For: Beautiful
That was such a good story!! It's exactly how I imagine Luna Lovegood thinks, and you described her perfectly!

Author's Response: Thanks!!! I love Luna. She's says everything that comes into her head, even if it's just a little bit obscure!!! x x x long live the fairies x x x

Name: sunshine (Signed) · Date: 06/08/06 13:29 · For: Beautiful
Wow, that was just...wow.

Luna really has a grasp on today's world-all the superficiality (is that even areal word? whatever) and everything. I loved this fanfic 'cause it echoed a lot of my own thoughts.
So, 11/10! : ) Keep it up!

Author's Response: Thank you!!! (Wow!!! My first review!!!) This also echoes my thoughts as well. Why can't boys just see past the beauty? ARGH!!! But thank you for your review all the same!!! x x x long live the fairies x x x

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