Reviews For Cliché Nation
Reviewer: elleve
Date: 03/20/07 14:05
Chapter: I Came, I Saw, I Dissolved Into a Fit of Laughter

I am in love with Angsty!Harry, seriously. :) I love this passage:

“RON, YOU WERE SLEEPING. HOW COULD YOU SLEEP AT A TIME LIKE THIS?” Harry demanded angstily.

“A time like what?” asked Ron slowly, trying to register what day it was.

“TODAY IS MY LAST EVER DUEL WITH VOLDEMORT!” cried Harry. “HE SCHEDULED IT FOR TEN O’CLOCK AT NIGHT EVEN THOUGH I SPECIFICALLY ASKED HIS SECRETARY FOR THE ELEVEN A.M. SLOT! OH, I AM SO ANGRY!”

Harry kicked a large standing lamp and fumed as it crashed into an unsuspecting first-year.

“I’m sure you’ll win,” said Ron with a nonchalant shrug.

“JUST BECAUSE I’VE WON THE LAST TWO HUNDRED AND TWENTY FIVE TIMES, IT DOESN’T MEAN I’LL WIN THIS ONE!” yelled Harry, his ears smoking. “I AM VERY STRESSED AND ANGSTY RIGHT NOW, SO DON’T PUSH MY BUTTONS!”

“Fine,” said Ron, turning away. “I’m too stupid to help you anyway.”


He's just so irresistably angry! *faints* :P

Reviewer: elleve
Date: 03/20/07 14:00
Chapter: I'll Just Go Throw Myself a Large Pity Party

“YES?” he asked somewhat angstily.

Lol, I LOVE angsty!Harry...:)

Reviewer: j2kool3816
Date: 03/09/07 21:39
Chapter: Bring Me to Life

YAY!

Reviewer: jenny b
Date: 02/11/07 3:04
Chapter: Bring Me to Life

that was pretty funny...but a bit weird!

Reviewer: guimonc001
Date: 01/26/07 18:21
Chapter: A Collection of All-Sorts

Heheheheheheh. Angsty!Harry is just hilarious.

Reviewer: guimonc001
Date: 01/26/07 17:50
Chapter: A Collection of All-Sorts

Heheheheheheh. Angsty!Harry is just hilarious.

Reviewer: Last HP Relative
Date: 01/04/07 20:26
Chapter: Bring Me to Life

oh my god that was AWSOME!!!!!!! man my lungs hurt ah hahahahaha!!! oh man *wipes tear* sparkly poos lol youre awsome

Reviewer: threeh
Date: 01/04/07 11:52
Chapter: Bring Me to Life

Bahahahaha!!!

Excellent!!!

Reviewer: Kantaka
Date: 12/29/06 21:00
Chapter: Bring Me to Life

I loved it!! It was trully hilarious. I''l have to erease all my fics thought... kidding!
But I have to ask: where did those sparklypooes came out from? what was that all about?
AND you forgot the Draco/Ginny cliché!

Author's Response: Well, is Draco/Ginny really cliche? Maybe. Thanks. I appreciate your enthusiasm!

Reviewer: ginnylovesdraco
Date: 12/28/06 12:45
Chapter: Bring Me to Life

Another thing- i have never heard any American say "radical" in the way they use it in this story. Also, noone says "fo shizzle" except when joking around.

Author's Response: I know that. I don't use them either, but they seem to edge their way into some fanfics. Please also see the comment below. :)

Reviewer: ginnylovesdraco
Date: 12/28/06 12:39
Chapter: I Came, I Saw, I Dissolved Into a Fit of Laughter

Hey- I just wanted to point out that "all the ones that write fanfics and insert Americanisms" mostly don't know that they use "Americanisms"- that's actually the way we speak, and so it doesn't sound unnatural to us.

Author's Response: Thanks for the comment, but I'm actually Canadian and speak in the same way Americans speak. I'm not British, even though I can see why you would think I am. I know that's the way Americans normally speak, but it is one of the popular cliches so I wanted to include it in the fic. I didn't mean to offend anyone.

Reviewer: GinnyPotter808
Date: 12/26/06 10:28
Chapter: Bring Me to Life

OK, I SWEAR I reviewed all of the chapters, but apparently I didn't. If I did before, I sincerely apologize. If I didn't: this is one of the most brilliant fics I've ever read. -Susan

Reviewer: Euphrates
Date: 12/20/06 18:20
Chapter: Bring Me to Life

Oh, wow. That was incredibly hilarious. I love the Angsty!Harry. He was so funny. Every time he talked it was in CAPS LOCK. (I WANT SAUSAGES!)

:-) Okay, I love this story...

I am unable to find any constructive criticism. Humor stories like this one don't always need to stay in canon, either, so I have no problems with that.

~Euphrates

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm happy you enjoyed it so much!

Reviewer: DogLover4Life
Date: 12/17/06 15:12
Chapter: Bring Me to Life

Ron is so stupid! A blonde Hermione and Snape.... Voldy! Nice friendly warning.

Author's Response: Well, Snape isn't blonde. Thank you so much. Take note of that friendly warning.

Reviewer: DogLover4Life
Date: 12/17/06 15:05
Chapter: I Came, I Saw, I Dissolved Into a Fit of Laughter

I loved the final battle! The Sparklypoo's saved the world!

“I’ll make you sausages,” offered Ginny with a twinkle in her eye.

“Well, that’s an offer I can’t refuse!” cried Harry happily, picking Ginny up. “I love you!”

Author's Response: Yes they did, they're perfect. Thanks!

Reviewer: DogLover4Life
Date: 12/17/06 15:00
Chapter: I'll Just Go Throw Myself a Large Pity Party

IT SEEMS LIKE IT IS REMUS'S TIME OF THE MONTH. A chocolate bar, I wish I had chocolate.

Wow...This is so educational.

Author's Response: Hehe. Yes, I suppose so. Educational? I guess in the way of teaching you what not to write.

Reviewer: DogLover4Life
Date: 12/17/06 14:52
Chapter: The New York Student Exchange

You had to add the Peter thing didn't you? You made me snort, now my mom is looking at me funny.

Why tight leather pants? *shudders*

Author's Response: I think this fic has been the cause of many funny looks. Why not the leather pants? *does not shudder*

Reviewer: DogLover4Life
Date: 12/17/06 14:46
Chapter: A Collection of All-Sorts

This was so funny! I mean. Oh sheesh. Hermione and Malfoy at a Masquerade ball. Harry all psycho and Ginny all not. And all the Mary Sue's with the guy Mary Sue. Sparklypoo!

Author's Response: Thank you very much. :)

Reviewer: AKA294
Date: 11/19/06 11:40
Chapter: Bring Me to Life

I would have never thought of writing cliche as a mockery!! It was SOOO funny! I'm going to read your other writing.... :)

Author's Response: Aah! Thanks so much. :)

Reviewer: wendelin the wierd
Date: 11/16/06 0:26
Chapter: A Collection of All-Sorts

Wow! I liked it. A rather twisted parody of all the normal clichés. This is just the second humour fic I have reviewed. I am usually into dark fics and prefer dark romance. However, I really liked a few which made fun of all the clichés.


You fic has taken it's place among those few.


Did you write the beginning yourself? That poem? Because I really liked it. It's got good rhythm and serves as a very nice introduction to the story ahead.

Now, let me start with all the basic issues of this story.

First of all the angsty Harry part did wonders. It was hilarious, especially-

“I WANT SAUSAGES!” he told everyone in the Great Hall. He climbed up onto the wooden bench. “WHY ARE THERE NO SAUSAGES? I FIGHT VOLDEMORT, WHO YOU ARE ALL SO SCARED OF, SO WHY CAN’T I GET THE BREAKFAST OPTIONS I WANT? I AM SO ANGRY!”

And of course,

“NO I’M NOT!” Harry then stood up on his seat. “I AM VERY ANGSTY RIGHT NOW SO PLEASE DON’T INSULT ME! HOW WOULD YOU FEEL IF VOLDEMORT TRIED TO KILL YOU EVERY FIVE MINUTES?”

Ron wasn’t listening because he was busy snogging Hermione.


That part actually made me laugh out loud. It's portrayed very well, and believe me, the number of times I have read angsty Harry.

Good use of the Mary-Sue's as well. They are really cliché' though what I liked best here was their names. You really chose very sparklypoo names.


You used the masquerade cliché well too. But funnily enough one of my favourite stories is centered around it. However, it is often badly written. I liked the part where Ron states how overused it is. I couldn't agree with him more.

Now for a bit of concrit,

I didn't understand one part. In the beginning and the end of the story it's Ron/Hermione all the way but then somewhere in the middle it was Draco/Hermione? That was a tad bit confusing. I would suggest using Draco/Hermione in one chapter and Ron/Hermione in one chapter.

Well, that's all for now. This was a rather pleasant read and I hope to see a lot more from you! Good luck.


Author's Response: Ooh! Such a long review! I love long reviews. I really appreciate all the concrit. Well, I guess it's true I should have had the Hermione ships in seperate chapters, but it was meant to be stupid and I can't really go back and change it. :) But thank you so much and I'm happy that you actually enjoyed humour!

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