Reviews For Cliché Nation
Reviewer: wendelin the wierd
Date: 06/09/06 21:47
Chapter: A Collection of All-Sorts

Wow! I liked it. A rather twisted parody of all the normal cliches. This is just the second humour fic I have reviewed. I am usually into dark fics and prefer dark romance. However, I really liked a few which made fun of all the cliches.


You fic has taken it's place among those few.


Did you write the beginning yourself? That poem? Because i really liked it. It's got good rhythm and serves as a very nice introduction to the story ahead.

Now, let me start with all the basic issues of this story.

First of all the angsty Harry part did wonders. It was hilarious, especially-

“I WANT SAUSAGES!” he told everyone in the Great Hall. He climbed up onto the wooden bench. “WHY ARE THERE NO SAUSAGES? I FIGHT VOLDEMORT, WHO YOU ARE ALL SO SCARED OF, SO WHY CAN’T I GET THE BREAKFAST OPTIONS I WANT? I AM SO ANGRY!”

and of course,

“NO I’M NOT!” Harry then stood up on his seat. “I AM VERY ANGSTY RIGHT NOW SO PLEASE DON’T INSULT ME! HOW WOULD YOU FEEL IF VOLDEMORT TRIED TO KILL YOU EVERY FIVE MINUTES?”

Ron wasn’t listening because he was busy snogging Hermione.



That part actually made me laugh out loud. It's potrayed very well, and believe me, the number of times I have read angsty Harry.

Good use of the Mary-Sue's as well. They are really cliche' though what I liked best here was their names. You really chose very sparklypoo names.


You used the masquerade cliche well too. But funnily enough one of my favourite stories is centred around it. However, it is often badly written. I liked the part where Ron states how overused it is. I couldn't agree with him more.

Now for a bit of concrit,

I didn't understand one part. In the beginning and the end of the story it's Ron/Hermione all the way but then somewhere in the middle it was Draco/Hermione? That was a tad bit confusing. I would suggest using Draco/Hermione in one chapter and Ron/Hermione in one chapter.

Well, that's all for now. This was a rather pleasant read and I hope to see a lot more from you! Good luck.

Author's Response: Wow, such a long review! Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it. Yes, I did write the beginning poem myself. It's kind of their House song/cheerleading routine, because they're Sparklypoo and they need one. lol. The thing is, I was thinking of doing a choosing-between-Ron and Draco kind of thing in a later chapter, but I'm not sure. You're right though, it is confusing but I just wanted to add in the masquerade ball. :) And I love writing Angsty!Harry. It's so much fun. :) Thank you again! I'm off to review one of your stories and then beta your one-shot!

Reviewer: Schmerg_The_Impaler
Date: 06/09/06 16:15
Chapter: A Collection of All-Sorts

I knew from the first sentence that this would be hilarious, and I wasn't disappointed! Great job!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Coozey
Date: 06/09/06 13:50
Chapter: A Collection of All-Sorts

lol i lurve it! im pmsl lol! please post soooon!!!!!!!!!!
always
me xxx

Author's Response: ok... I will!

Reviewer: HermioneTwin7
Date: 06/09/06 12:08
Chapter: A Collection of All-Sorts

wow, that was... interesting.
oh well, keep it coming!

Author's Response: Thank you, I will. :) xo

Reviewer: Werewolf_sympathiser
Date: 06/08/06 16:45
Chapter: A Collection of All-Sorts

That is the most hilarious thing I have ever read. I especially loved “I WANT SAUSAGES!” he told everyone in the Great Hall. He climbed up onto the wooden bench. “WHY ARE THERE NO SAUSAGES? I FIGHT VOLDEMORT, WHO YOU ARE ALL SO SCARED OF, SO WHY CAN’T I GET THE BREAKFAST OPTIONS I WANT? I AM SO ANGRY!” XD Me and my friend were practically rolling on the floor laughing. I can't wait for the next chapter!!!



Author's Response: Oh my, thank you so much! I've read The Soul of a Player and I really liked it! (did I leave a review? I'll drop you a review when I have time.) I'm so happy you liked it so much and this is *gasp* the funniest thing you've ever read. Hmmm, you haven't read much humour fiction, have you? :) I hope you did not break any valuable items while rolling on the floor laughing. Thank you.

Reviewer: RiddleHatred
Date: 06/08/06 6:15
Chapter: A Collection of All-Sorts

Heh heh... I am quite a Sparklypoo-parodier myself. Hopefully my story will get published! Llamas hehe

Author's Response: Yes, llamas are quite humourous. Unfortunately they do not star in my fic, but hippos are given an honourable mention. Hopefully, you like those too. :)

Reviewer: sunshine
Date: 06/07/06 12:55
Chapter: A Collection of All-Sorts

you are completely talented!! how did you manage so many cliche`s in one chapter? it's fantastic; i was cracking up the whole time.

Author's Response: Thank you. Well, the trick to stuffing cliches into chapters like sardines is making the story completely unrealistic. It's true. :) Ta ta.

Reviewer: tonks_667
Date: 06/07/06 5:15
Chapter: A Collection of All-Sorts

OMG that was soooo fast paced and funny!

Author's Response: See below.

Reviewer: tonks_667
Date: 06/07/06 5:13
Chapter: A Collection of All-Sorts

OMG that was soooo fast paced and funny!

Author's Response: Thank you. :) Yes, it was quite fast-paced.

Reviewer: juniorauthor
Date: 06/06/06 18:21
Chapter: A Collection of All-Sorts

Oh my, who was it that Hermione danced with at the ball, I wonder? *ponder ponder ponder* Wonderfully done. I always loved mockery...

Author's Response: Thank you. I hope you are not actually wondering who she danced with at the ball, because that would be incredibly sad, but if you are, it was Draco. I know. A surprise. ;) More to come soon.

Reviewer: I like chicken
Date: 06/06/06 8:28
Chapter: A Collection of All-Sorts

Very Funny Keep it up

Author's Response: Thank you, I will.

Reviewer: sweeterthanhunny
Date: 06/06/06 6:40
Chapter: A Collection of All-Sorts

funny. Sparklypoo? sorry thats just funny.

Author's Response: Thank you, but I didn't make it up. I did make up the House cheer/song, though.

Reviewer: lotte26
Date: 06/05/06 23:32
Chapter: A Collection of All-Sorts

Omg... I loved it it was so frigging funny.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: harrysgal
Date: 06/05/06 22:21
Chapter: A Collection of All-Sorts

I just love cliches!

Author's Response: Well, I guess that's good. :)

Reviewer: Just Tink
Date: 06/05/06 18:38
Chapter: A Collection of All-Sorts

oh dear.... this is too funny for its own good, I'm afraid. =) I love the sparklypoo theme song! I can just picture a cheerleading routine that would fit perfectly.... the only thing I'm a little iffy about is that making fun of the rest of your cliches (Draco and Hermione, Angst!Harry, ect.) is, well, cliched. I think I would have preferred it if you had stayed with the sparklypoo story.
But nonetheless, excellent work!

Author's Response: I was originally going to make it a Mary-Sue fic, but then I decided on this. Thank you! My next chapter is going to be on Mary-Sue American Exchange students, so maybe you'll like that better. Ta ta!

Reviewer: bookworm247
Date: 06/05/06 17:14
Chapter: A Collection of All-Sorts

that was great! a great parody of all the cheesy romance ships which are completely unplausible! great job!

Author's Response: Thank you. But the only one done in this chapter that is completley unplausible (is that a word?) is Draco/Hermione. Oh well. Thank you.

Reviewer: Orangdream03
Date: 06/05/06 12:07
Chapter: A Collection of All-Sorts

hahahhaahha

That was perfect.. I can tell in the first ten lines of the story if they're like yours.
Sadly most are...
;) Great job.

Author's Response: Hmmm, I don't get it. Thanks, though.

Reviewer: hp_number1fan_fl
Date: 06/05/06 10:53
Chapter: A Collection of All-Sorts

Wow...I was laughing the whole time! That was great...I love how Ron and Hermione always seem to be making out at random times...and I loved the bit about how no one calls Hermione "Mione", because frankly EVERYONE uses that nickname and, pardon me if this is offensive to you, I hate it! Anyway, it was great...I loved it...keep it coming!

Author's Response: Oh, I also HATE the 'Mione thing, that's why I put it in. It's so annoying. Yes, Harry was kind of voicing my feelings. In a very angsty way. Thank you! I'm touched you're looking forward to next chapters.

Reviewer: Fireater
Date: 06/05/06 4:32
Chapter: A Collection of All-Sorts

Wow! I’m still laughing my guts out! Loved Ron and Hermione’s conversation, Harry’s reaction was priceless!
“Great!” Ginny cried happily. She grabbed his suddenly extremely muscular arms… that line almost killed me, I was cracking up so hard, I thought I was gonna wake up my mom… then SHE woulda killed me!
You missed out that Hermione suddenly gets a models body, but the rating probably has something to do with it… :)




Author's Response: Thanks. Well, I didn't write that Hermione got a model's body, but I did write: "Ever since you got that miraculous beauty makeover over the summer and got your hair dyed blonde, you have been the most beautiful girl in the school." I think that counts. That's mostly what happens anyway. Thank you, it makes me feel great that I made you laugh and that you liked it so much! Yay! :)

Reviewer: KatieMagic
Date: 06/05/06 2:28
Chapter: A Collection of All-Sorts

You make me laugh.

Author's Response: Oh, thank you! :)

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