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Name: sunshine (Signed) · Date: 06/17/06 21:43 · For: The New York Student Exchange
Wow, thanks for the update. It was really good, I liked it a lot. Hermione and Malfoy being Head Boy & Girl made me laugh- it is just way too overused.
Keep up the great work!!
: )

Author's Response: Yes, I agree. Thank you very much!

Name: froggie (Signed) · Date: 06/17/06 17:07 · For: The New York Student Exchange
this story is...AWSOME!!! it captured like EVERY cliche there and PERFECTLY! i loved the draco/hermione thing with her blonde hair and "heads room", and the lily/james patrol thingie was just amazing because in basically EVERY lily/james story they hook up patrolling, even in the really good fanfics, and it gets kinda annoying and predictable after a while. Then the Sirius thing was absolutley perfect. with the girls fainting and him dating like a girl per day lol. and the last line was just great with peter. is this story done? its so good i hope not.

Author's Response: Thank you! That really means a lot to me. No, this story is not done and more chapters are coming!!!!

Name: HermioneGinnystwin (Signed) · Date: 06/17/06 16:40 · For: The New York Student Exchange
Its so cliche' its sickening... bot some how hilarious ^_^!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i will + u 2 my Fav Authors list

Author's Response: Thank you.

Name: HermioneGinnystwin (Signed) · Date: 06/17/06 16:34 · For: A Collection of All-Sorts
HELLO,they met at thhe train staition ,morron nj >_< *

Author's Response: Um, if you mean Lily and James, no they didn't. They went to Hogwarts together. JK's parents met at a train station.

Name: Quincy (Signed) · Date: 06/17/06 8:50 · For: The New York Student Exchange
This is great! I kept laughing when I read about the sausages and Ron randomly kissing Hermione! Keep updating!

Author's Response: That's great! Thank you!

Name: Bookwormy (Signed) · Date: 06/17/06 3:48 · For: The New York Student Exchange
I liked your story! It was hilarious and all that. But I have one little complain--you can't rate it 1st-2nd years if it's got so much snogging. I mean, reading it was fun, but I would appreciate if you didn't make Ron/Hermione, D/Hr and H/G snog always!!
I do get irritated, just like Harry!
Again, I would say I liked all the aspects of this fic except that. All those scenes with the marauders were quite fun! How Sirius made girls in vicinity faint was superb.Very nicely written!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I suppose you're right, I'll see if I can change the rating. I didn't think it would be so bad, but I guess I should raise the rating for safety. :)

Name: dracoluvver90 (Signed) · Date: 06/17/06 0:37 · For: A Collection of All-Sorts
i like this. its pretty funny

Author's Response: Thanks.

Name: I lovesmesomeHarry (Signed) · Date: 06/16/06 23:58 · For: The New York Student Exchange
This is one of the only humor fic that has actually made me laugh! Keep it Up please!

Author's Response: Thank you! I will! Thank all the awesome fanfic writers for giving me ideas. ;)

Name: x_lily_evans_x (Signed) · Date: 06/16/06 23:44 · For: The New York Student Exchange
This is clearly the work of a genius. (:

Author's Response: YOU CALLED ME A GENIUS! I'm sorry, but that is *cries* awesome. Thank you so much. :) *smile stretches extremely far, unnaturally far*

Name: hpboy13 (Anonymous) · Date: 06/16/06 23:03 · For: The New York Student Exchange
lmao!!! hilarious yet again! u managed to cover what hundreds of fanfics do in one short sweet chapter. keep up the great work and i can't wait for chapter 3!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! That should be coming out soon.

Name: ahattab33 (Signed) · Date: 06/16/06 22:54 · For: The New York Student Exchange
I think this is brilliant - I read all of the other cliche stories, and yes, I like them!! But this just makes me realize just how cliche some of them are! My favorite line:

"And with that, Hermione realised that Draco was the boy she had danced with at the Masquerade Ball."

Make me laugh for a full minute.

Author's Response: Thank you! Really? I didn't think that line was so incredibly funny... whatever floats your boat! :)

Name: MorganRay (Signed) · Date: 06/16/06 22:45 · For: The New York Student Exchange
I definately think you've done better in this chapter. Your humor doesn't seem so forced, and it seems to me that you spent more time working on this. The part where every girl fainted when they saw Sirius was amusing, to say the least.

Petering wetting his pants with excitement was a great cliche to include. You seem to have your handle on the cliched romances. However, maybe elaborate more on the Ginny/Harry romance. You've rushed the Draco/Hermione, but that's to be expected since the point is to pronounce the biggest cliches. Another interesting thing is when you had Dumbledore Apparate on the grounds. I actually read that he did that in one fic! I like how you poked fun at that, too, and maybe include some more mistakes that are contrary to canon.

Another cliche that I'm waiting to see, but haven't viewed so far, is House cliches. You seem to be focusing on character cliches, but seeing some house cliches would be a definite benefit. You've got plenty of endless situations to point out cliches with Gryffindor and Slytherin. Add that to your house of Sparklypoo, and it might be something like a free-for-all.


This was a brilliant line! It was possibly the most hysterical in the story yet.

Author's Response: Wow. Thank you for such a long review! I love all the concrit, thanks so much. I will definitley include some House cliches in the next chapter. I will elaborate more on the H/G, thanks for bringing that to my attention. I love that line too, it's my favourite and I'm really excited that someone else thinks it's hysterical too. Yes, of course I spent longer on this chapter *loosens collar nervously*. I'm glad my humour doesn't seem so forced. Thank you! :)

Name: Tinka Blinka (Signed) · Date: 06/16/06 21:39 · For: The New York Student Exchange
omg, i love eth last part, 'around the corner, peter wet his pants with excitement!' i swear i fell on the floor laughing about that! keep up tyhe aesome clicheness!

Author's Response: Hahaha. Thank you!

Name: loonyluna63 (Signed) · Date: 06/16/06 21:38 · For: A Collection of All-Sorts
This is officially the BEST story EVER! It's random and it's cliche,(thus the title)and I love it! I laughed so hard! Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Yay! Thank you so much. I'm very happy you laughed so hard - I will!

Name: ginny_babe92 (Anonymous) · Date: 06/16/06 21:28 · For: The New York Student Exchange
LOL lovin' it. Very clever hehe

Author's Response: Thank you once again - I appreciate you reading my fic! I'm happy you liked it! :)

Name: ginny_babe92 (Anonymous) · Date: 06/16/06 21:22 · For: A Collection of All-Sorts
lol Very funny. It's all so cliched, I love stories like this :P Good writing

Author's Response: Oh great! Thank you very much. :)

Name: invisiblenudnik (Signed) · Date: 06/16/06 20:59 · For: The New York Student Exchange
So funny! Once again, you've turn the dreaded cliches into a laughter fest. I love the idea of a flying subway car, though. Trust me, you deserved to be on the Ravenclaw Review Thread. ;-)

Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so much. The Flying Subway Care was a stroke of genius on my part, I must say [/conceit] - get it? Have you ever been to New York? Subways are THE way to travel. Let me tell you. Thank you for saying that I deserved to be on the Ravenclaw Review Thread! I really appreciate that. Yay! Thank you. :)

Name: upandATOM (Signed) · Date: 06/16/06 20:40 · For: The New York Student Exchange
its so terible its great,its amazing how many cliches there are youre doing a great job!

Author's Response: I'm very happy that I am cramming the cliches in there like I want to. :) Thank you.

Name: mademoiselle (Anonymous) · Date: 06/16/06 20:06 · For: The New York Student Exchange
hahaha that was really funny. loved it.

Author's Response: Aww, great! Thank you!

Name: Crazy Rat (Signed) · Date: 06/16/06 20:05 · For: A Collection of All-Sorts
I love how you make harry so stupidly angery, that's how he seemed to me in the 5th book.

Author's Response: Yes. Me too, it was getting very annoying. It's a cliche, though. Thank you. :)

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