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Name: ellimayer (Signed) · Date: 04/12/05 6:21 · For: Chapter 14: Love, Reign O'er Me
i got worried when i read the 'blurb' bit about ginny asking for the bond to be severed, but no biggie. you know, people tell me i have a big vocabulary, but all i can say is wow and other things that mean exactly that. and also, i'm glad you didn't elaborate on the deatails of ginny's experiences.

Author's Response: No way to have done that and keep a PG-13 rating, unfortunately.

Name: ellimayer (Signed) · Date: 04/12/05 3:59 · For: Chapter 13: Here For More
i so love this! dudley is going to hogwarts! my mum says that's just wrong, but i love it! and the thought of hermione trying to get him up to speed on 5 years worth of school in the time they have remaining is quite entertaining. but your blatant clues about the gaurdian thing and the prophecy are starting to annoy me; i haven't got a clue. and, you've motivated me to listen to the who. :) i love your work.

Name: ellimayer (Signed) · Date: 04/12/05 1:59 · For: Chapter 12: Smash The Mirror
you are so clever! that was a wonderful way of getting him back, i wonder if even jo would have thought of something like that. can't wait to hear more from dudley, and how the legal stuff pans out...you know, sirius' will and all. but i am so glad he's back. the whole pitch black/bone white mist thing was very creative, too, and i'm waiting for you to explain this strange creature that feels the need to chase away harry's patronus...i remain your number 1 fan.

Name: ellimayer (Signed) · Date: 04/11/05 23:13 · For: Chapter 11: Another Tricky Day
i have never been so glad to admit i was wrong...a dislocated shoulder is hardly worth mentioning. i love that you're including dudley, he's such a good character to change things about, because there's not too much mention of him, really. again, i'm stuck wondering what's going to happen to all the gold and assets in sirius' will, it'd be a pity for the weasleys to have to have it taken back again. but sirius' return would be very exciting, whether i'm stuck on the technicalities or not. and i am very much in admiration of ginny, completely unembarrassed by the fact that her entire family, her best friend hermione, and the majority of teachers at her school are assuming she's sleeping with harry. that must be very hard to pull off. as always, i am in awe of your writing abilities.

Author's Response: Assume? I thought she made it absolutely clear to Mum and Dad in chapter 10. At this point, it's been completely relatively innocent, not going beyond kissing and cuddling, but Ginny has no intention of it changing, so Dumbledore best figure out how he's going to accomodate them when school starts up.

Name: ellimayer (Signed) · Date: 04/11/05 21:18 · For: Chapter 10: Join Together
they got him! they finally got him! and when you mentioned something being wrong with his left arm, i assumed straightaway that harry had somehow received the dark mark...i'll just have to keep reading. once again, you've researched extremely well, or you're good at making stuff up. i'll have to look up some stuff on phoenixs before i decide which. p.s. is there anywhere i can purchase some of ginny's tshirts? paricuarly the 'my other broom's a firebolt' one...(i'm totally serious!)

Name: ellimayer (Signed) · Date: 04/11/05 20:27 · For: Chapter 09: Go To The Mirror Boy
i've detected a slight problem...if sirius is really still alive, what's going to happen to all the stuff that was distributed through his will? but you've clearly researched this whole mirrors thing quite a bit, not many fics have that knowledge behind them. i am deeply impressed. extremely deeply. you finally managed to rid the house of black of that awful portrait. congratulations!

Name: ellimayer (Signed) · Date: 04/11/05 19:40 · For: Chapter 08: I've Had Enough
you know, this just might keep me from killing everyone in my insanity in waiting for the sixth book to come out. you're amazing, and i am wracking my brains as to what the Gaurdian could be gaurding...?

Author's Response: The light side?

Name: padfootprongs4eva (Signed) · Date: 04/11/05 18:21 · For: Chapter 14: Love, Reign O'er Me
that was totally awosme!!! please o please update really really soon!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: The next chapter was submitted minutes after this one was approved, so it's in the hands of the mods.

Name: mad4sirius (Signed) · Date: 04/11/05 12:52 · For: Chapter 14: Love, Reign O'er Me
This was an incredible chapter! It takes my breath away it is so good! I love how you write Harry and Ginny's relationship. I love Sirius' cocky attitude, I think you portray him well, loving Harry so much, and still maintaining his persona. I agree with him on Dudley, though. I can't wait to see what Sirius is up to! Please update soon!

Name: ellimayer (Signed) · Date: 04/11/05 11:00 · For: Chapter 07: A Legal Matter
my goodness you're good. such long chapters, and so many, and i quite enjoyed sirius' stabs at 'bella and cissy' and i can't wait to see what the whisper to dumbledore was about. and this gryffindor past and present quidditch match had better be written in somewhere, it's gonna be too good to miss

Name: ellimayer (Signed) · Date: 04/11/05 10:12 · For: Chapter 06: How Many Friends
i'm glad you've made harry and ginny mature enough to not think that just because it's possible doesn't make it the right thing to do whenever they want. and i'm glad all the weasleys have been so civil, if not a little annoying. again, you wow me with your way with words. well structured sentences, although sometimes you seem to miss a word. it's 1:15 in the morning right now! does that show you how much i love your writing? i haven't stopped reading since i started, and i don't plan to until i've finished all the chapters available, and i'll attempt to review each one, though i wouldn't trust what i say too much as it gets earlier and earlier...i'm a night person, but i get to a certain point and WOAH, i'm crazy...see it's starting now... p.s. am i perceptive or what...you're a fan of the who, aren't you?

Author's Response: Right now Chapter 14 is the last chapter published here, though 15 is in the queue. However, if you check my website, cts.dragon.com, you'll find a number of additional chapters, plus some art and other resources. And yes, I'm a fan of the who.

Name: ellimayer (Signed) · Date: 04/11/05 9:20 · For: Chapter 05: I Can't Explain
wow. what else can one say? this soul bonding is entirely your idea, i take it? and this mentoring line...merlin to godric to nicholas to dumbledore to harry. i take it this means you see harry to be a future hogwarts headmaster? simply amazing. i consider you to be a literary genius. (don't be dissapointed when i say a minor one, you have to admit that while the plot of this particular part of harry's story is yours, you might not have had the amazing idea if jkr hadn't put the spark in your mind) you should approach jo about publishing rights...or am i being overambitious on your behalf?

Author's Response: Soul bonding is certainly not a unique idea or one that I can claim totally as my own. It's been done many times before in many different genres, long before the first of the Harry Potter works was published. I think I've put some things together in new ways, at least in the Harry Potter universe, but like most (all) writers (including JKR) I've drawn on a lot of different sources. Certainly I've stood on the shoulders of a giant in writing this fic, without the wonderful world and characters JKR has created, this story might not have been told.

Name: ellimayer (Signed) · Date: 04/11/05 8:49 · For: Chapter 04: Much Too Much
i really like the fics where dudley shows that he has none of the prejudice his parents do, i think that if psychoanalized it might be concluded that his joy in harry's sufferings and his overeating were the result of not being able to live up, in his own eyes, to what his parents saw with their eyes. fantastic. i'm totally in awe of your abilities, i can't stop reading. excellent, excellent...

Name: ellimayer (Signed) · Date: 04/11/05 8:21 · For: Chapter 2: Pure and Easy
you are amazing. your in-character-ness is brilliant, i truly admire your skills. nothing like realising the characters are growing up, eh?

Name: ellimayer (Signed) · Date: 04/11/05 7:37 · For: Chapter 01: How Can You Do It Alone?
again, you're an awesome writer. you catch people's characters, make them sound like they do in the books, not like it's you talking in a falsley deep voice. my meagre talent seems to be withering every time i read more of your story. i can't help but love this, even though i don't like the harry/ginny possibility. send me a signed cpy of you're first bestseller? that would be great. :)

Name: ellimayer (Signed) · Date: 04/11/05 6:57 · For: Prologue: Circles
you write beautifully, and you have an excellent idea behind your words. i'm beginning to think i might not submit my fic at all, just read everyone else's. my idea is nowhere near this good, or complex. congratulations...you thought about this a great deal, didn't you? thinkers are always the best writers.

Author's Response: Please don't let my story stop you from publishing your fic. I think that would be a loss... Didn't you say that thinkers are teh best writers?

Name: Mermaid (Signed) · Date: 04/07/05 16:27 · For: Chapter 13: Here For More
LOVE the story! I actually skipped art to read it. (huge accomplishment, I wont skip art for anyone, my boyfriend is jealous) anyway, love the story, keep writing you're very talented

Name: mad4sirius (Signed) · Date: 04/07/05 10:52 · For: Chapter 13: Here For More
HA! I'm the first to review! I love this story...I'm always on the edge of my seat. Great chappie you have here. I love the interaction between Sirius and Harry, it's great for Harry to have someone like that now. I am so happy you brought him back! Thank you!

Name: Magnus (Signed) · Date: 04/06/05 2:23 · For: Chapter 04: Much Too Much
hilariously awesome, Dudley was fantastic this is great... looks like Harry's gonna have to get used to the smell

Name: Magnus (Signed) · Date: 04/06/05 1:51 · For: Chapter 3: The Kids Are Alright
hilariously awesome its really good i had couldn't find any problems... and trust me I'm awesome at finding problems(I generally make fun of the authors for them) awesome chapter

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